Thursday, March 2, 2006

   Naruto Fan-fic
ok folks! here is the fan-fic written by myself (Ellen), Sweetthing16 (Jessi), and Skysongkupo (Tamzen). twas originally is a script type format, but I have adapted it to read like a story. so, enjoy!

Naruto: Cross-Dimension Invaders

Ch. 1: Enter The Invaders

It was just another normal, boring school day. Jessi and Ellen were sitting in their fourth-period class, yearbook. They were utterly bored and had no idea what to do. They glanced around the room to find something to amuse themselves, and their glance fell on a mysterious closet in the back of the room. Jessi smiled and looked at Ellen. "What do you think's in there?" she asked.
"Prob'ly and A.C. or heating unit," Ellen answered.
"Oh, hush, you smart-alec!" Jessi told her. "Let's go check it out!"
Ellen sighed, not really wanting to get up and go look at a boring closet. "Fine," she said.
"Yay!" cheered Jessi. Jessi ran as fast as she could to the closet, Ellen trailing slowly behind. Jessi obviously got there first, and tried to open the door. It didn't budge. "It's either A, stuck, or B, locked!" Jessi told Ellen. "What do you think?"
Ellen stepped forward. "Here, let me try." As soon as her hand touched the door-knob, there was a flash. Ellen and Jessi disappeared into a portal. The portal had a strange effect calming effect, and after the initial shock wore off, Jessi was enjoying her self immensely. Ellen didn't like to travel that much and was half asleep.
"This is fun!" Jessi yelled.
"Are we there yet?" Ellen asked tiredly.
Jessi looked around. "Wait...Are we going somewhere?"
Ellen started. "I sure hope so!"
They screamed as the realization that they might be stuck forever in a odd portal struck them. They flailed around for a while, panicing. Then Jessi suddenly stopped freaking out and asked Ellen, "Ellen...Are we moving?"
Ellen was still paniced and yelled, "I HAVE NO IDEA!!!" Jessi felt the ground, both of their eyes being closed from blind panic.
"We're on dirt!" she exclaimed. They stood up and listened to what sounded like an awkward silence. They slowly opened their eyes. "Where are we?" Jessi asked.
"I dunno..." Ellen replied. "Hey, do you recognize these people?" she asked.
"I think so...This place looks like the Forest of Death." Jessi said. They both stared around at frozen battle scene. They were in the middle of some ninjas fighting. They suddenly realized that they had somehow been transported into the world of Naruto!

ok, that wasn't all of chapter one, but I didn't want it to be too long and I have to get off soon. What do you think? you like? please, C and C appreciated!
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