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Thursday, August 10, 2006


   a poem i wrote off the top o my head..^_^oh well
hey. just thought id put a poem up, seeing as i like poetry and i wrote it and even thouhgh i didnt really think about it at all, i was justscrewing around and started writing of some stray paper on the desk...well, enjoy! (im sorry if you dont like it, it kinda doesnt make sense at all...-_-)

since when were you so cynical
like when they promised
to reform our finace system
we'll watch while our childrens flourish
i've never been very sophisticated
my actions seem to revolve
just as much as you were aristocratic
is this truth or am i writing fiction
you'll never find my cold ink-filled hands
but you'll warm them with constant friction

then again

thats as likely as finding a saint with gunpowder
i'd never noticed your voice get fainter
its not like i ever would
but till this day
my heart is still in beat
with the kids from my old neighborhood


***okay, i admit they were sopposed to be lyrics. and they still are, as soon as i find a beat to go with, but how do like em?
give me feedback. be brutal. tell me if they should make more sense or if you want them to be more open, because if you look closely they DO make sense (well at least to me...)

anyways, goodnight!
sleeptight
remember to put on your bedbug repellant @_o

~asha


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