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Wednesday, December 8, 2004


   True,Blue Bad Luck By:Chi
Okay,I think I need some help with this story.It sucks,and I want to try and write something to get published so I can get some money!Also my chariter's have no names just stupid things I thought I'd call them. I only put up a little bit,I hope it's not as bad as I think it is.



On one cold,rainy December day,a small group of friends met on a school black top.Trying to find what to do.

"I've got it!"Cheese blurted out.

"What....?"Ryuichi asked.

"Will you go out with Cat?"Cheese asked Ryuichi.

"Gimmie $10 and I will,"Ryuichi joked.

"Cheese tell Cat to give her $10!"Crispy exclamed.Then Cheese ran off to find Cat.

"Well that was dumb.Can I have $10?"Ryuichi said.

"I don't have $10,"Crispy answered.Then Cheese and Cat showed up.

"Give her $10 and she'll be your girlfriend!"Cheese said."Give her the money.

"Where is Ryuichi anyway?"Crispy asked.

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