Saturday, May 20, 2006

   My fanfiction
I have this fanfiction of mine and I haven't found a site to host it so I figure I could just put it here. Warning it's long and may possibly contain something most Naruto fans may be against. Well any way here it is:

Chapter 1
Key of symbols you may see
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(A/N:…): author giving his thoughts

It was another day in Konoha with our favorite team seven was following an intruder in the forest near the city. “Naruto he’s heading you way. Slow him down” Said a raven haired boy known as Sasuke Uchiha to his blond teammate Naruto Uzamaki.
“Alright who ever you are that’s far enough” said Naruto to the intruder with his kunai ready. After performing a hand seals he used one of his signature moves, the Kage Bushin no jutsu and the boy was backed by several clones surrounding the intruder each with kunai in hand. “3...2...1...charge” shouted the blond as him and his clones pounced on the intruder slashing at him. But he knew nothing of his opponent’s skill level and he and his clones were blown away, destroying some after doing medium damage.
“As weak as ever Naruto. Stop fooling around he’s gonna get away” Said Sasuke as he passed over his teammate while he was still giving chase.
“Stupid Sasuke thinks he know everything. Thinks he’s so tough” grumbled Naruto as him and his clones continued there chase of the intruder.
“Not so fast.” Said Sasuke after he threw a kunai knife which caught the intruder in the arm. “There is no point in continuing. So why don’t you make my job easier by giving up” Sasuke tying to bargain with the intruder but got his answer when the intruder pulled the kunai in his arm out and got into a fighting position. “Fine have it your way” said Sasuke as a smirk grew across his face while he activated his clan’s signature trait the “shaingan eyes”. Sasuke attacked with a combo of kunai slashing and kicks, all the while using the sharingan to anticipate his opponent’s next move and dodge. He dealt some damage but currently he was just tying to stall. He thought to himself as about how long it’s been since he had a fight as good as this one as he let a couple of kunai fly but they were dodged. But it went exactly as he planed as 5 identical Naruto clones burst thru the bushes and unleashed there signature move the “Uzamaki Naruto barrage.” “Took you long enough Naruto” said Sasuke mocking his teammate.
“Well if you would have caught him earlier we could have been done by now” shouted Naruto to his teammate Sasuke as he delivered a punch to the intruder sending him sailing into a tree.
Sasuke threw two kunai that caught the intruder in both his hand’s nailing him to a tree. “And to make you don’t try to fight back” said Sasuke before forming a few hand seals and clamped his hand over the wire he attached to the knife and unleashed his “Koton ryuuka no jutsu” which caused flame to travel along the wire and burn the intruders hands. Causing Naruto to gulp at the horrific sight.
Then out of the blue a tall man in a green vest with a mask over his mouth, a headband over one of his eyes appeared in a smoke cloud who was known to them as there Jounin instructor Kakashi. “Yo. I’ll take care of this intruder. Me him and
Hokage-sama are gonna have a nice long talk. So team seven will get the rest of the day off and Sakura you can come out of the bushes now. And just as he appeared he disappeared.
The third final and only female pink haired member of team seven named Sakura Haruno stepped out of the bushes and asked the same question she always did “Sasuke would you like to go out on a date with me?”
And he gave the same answer he always did. “No I’m going to go train like you should be doing.”
“Even Naruto always said something in these situations which was. “Sakura I’ll go out with you if Sasuke won’t.”
“No I’ll never go out with you Naruto” said Sakura once again shooting down her ever persistent teammate.

Back in there village Konaha the three were greeted by a blond konoichi know as Ino Yamanaka. “Hi Sasuke-kun! Hey I was wondering if you would like to go shopping with me like on a date.
“Like I told Sakura I’m telling you no.” Replied the slightly annoyed boy.
“Yeah Ino-pig! So back off Sasuke mine” Sakura shouted triumphantly.
“Oh hey forehead girl and you too dead last” said Ino mockingly to the other members of team seven.
“Like you’re one to talk Ino-pig” Shouted Sakura.
“Stop calling me pig billboard brow” Ino shouted back at Sakura.
Naruto heaved a sigh and said “I’m getting tired of this I’m gonna head to the Icharuka for some ramen” and walked away leaving the increasingly annoyed Sasuke with his two most annoying and still arguing fan girls Sakura and Ino.

All the while walking to his favorite place to eat Naruto kept thinking how unfair life was that he was always made fun of, how there wasn’t a girl for him in all of the Konoha village because the either 1: was a Sasuke fan girl, 2: there parents didn’t want them near him, or 3: they were to old, but the main reason why he was hated the reason why life was so unfair but was his greatest strength and secret was the Kyuubi sealed within him. He was to busy thinking he didn’t realize the person walking in front of him until they collided knocking each other over. Looking in the direction he was going he now noticed a person with violet hair and white eyes who could only belong to Konoha’s shyest girl Hinata Hyuga. “Sorry Hinata I didn’t see you” He said while trying to help the girl up.
“Oh N…Naruto sorry I w…wasn’t paying attention. It’s my fault” the girl stammered while twittering her fingers while not even looking the boy in the eye like she usually did.
“Ugh how about we both take a little blame. So where are you headed” asked the Naruto scratching his head.
“Um…Ugh I j…just finished training so I was heading home for something to eat” she said nervously.
“Hey I’ve got an idea. Since were both hungry why don’t we eat together” Naruto said with a grin across his face.
Shocked and a huge blush spreading across Hinata’s face from what Naruto just said. Never in her life did she ever expect Naruto, the boy she admired from afar ever since she laid eyes upon him was asking her out on a date even if he didn’t think it was one. “Ugh…um…I would love to Naruto” Said Hinata with a bright red face.
Naruto was confused by the fact that Hinata was blushing but shrugged it off like he did most things. “Then it’s off to the Icharuka ramen stand” Shouted Naruto gleefully.
Um…Naruto what’s ramen” asked Hinata still blushing.
Naruto’s jaw dropped from the shock received from what he just heard. “You mean you’ve never had ramen? Ever?
“No not once” replied the girl.
“Were just gonna have to fix that now aren’t we” said Naruto as he grabbed Hinata’s hand which made her blush again and he led her in to the direction of the Icharuka.

“Grr I can’t take this anymore!!! I’m sick and tired of you girls always bugging me about a date even though I keep saying no! All I want is some peace1” The Uchiha heaved aster most likely the biggest outburst of his life.
“Come on Sasuke-kun I know you don’t mean that” Said Ino as she grabbed onto his which she would soon learn was a big mistake.
“Let me go! I told you to leave me alone! I hate you! Why can’t you get that through your thick head! Your annoying” Exclaimed Sasuke after snatching his arm away from Ino and with that he gathered his chakra to his feet and began hoping from one roof to another to get home.
“It’ll be okay Ino I’m sure he just needs to calm down” Explained Sakura but Inner Sakura was saying “Take that Ino-pig. Now you chances of getting Sasuke is zero.”
“Just*sniff*leave me alone*sniff*” Said Ino between sobs and tears filling her eyes from Sasuke’s icy words. “I just wanna*sniff* be left alone” tears streaming down her cheeks, Ino turned from her friend/rival and ran home.

“Check” Said Shikamaru to his Jounin instructor Asuma over there game of chess.
“Check” Asuma called back to his student grin across his face.
Shikamaru was about to make his next move when a crying, blond konoichi ran past them. “I think that was Ino and I think she was crying. I had better go check on her. Oh and before I go checkmate” and with that he was after Ino leaving his teacher looking over the board only to find out he had once again lost to his student.

Ino burst into her house, tears still streaming down her face and runs straight for her room to cry into her pillow saying “I can’t believe Sasuke said that to me. After all I did to try to get him to notice me.”
Mean while outside of Ino’s house was Shikamaru who was knocking on the door in vain. “How troublesome. I could have sworn she had ran in here but it looks like no ones home. Only one way to find out” Shikamaru said while reaching for the doorknob and giving it a turn to find out the door was still open. “Hello Mr. and Mrs. Yamanako are you here” asked Shikamaru but he received no answer. “There not here but I do hear crying, that must be Ino. I hope she’s alright” finally arriving at Ino’s room where he found her on her bad crying into her pillow. “Hey Ino what’s wrong?”
“Leave me alone Shikamaru” Ino managed to get out between sobs.
“I’m just trying to help” explained the boy.
“I said get out” Shouted Ino as she tossed a kunai in Shikamaru’s direction.
“Wow you’re pissed. The only thing I can think of that could get you this angry and sad is Sasuke saying he hates you” After hearing what Shikamaru said Ino’s eyes filled with tears and she began to cry again. Taking a seat next to her whipping away her tears while he said. “Ino stop crying. Just forget about Sasuke he’s not worth your tears.”
“How? I’ve spent so much time chasing him I’ve shunned everyone else in Konoha. I’ve pretty much have no one left to turn to” said the girl while crying into the boy’s chest.
“Don’t worry I’m sure you’ll find some one. I believe that there is always someone for somebody and sometimes that person could be right in front of you” said Shikamaru trying to comfort her.
Ino finally stopped crying but now a blast now creeping across her face and her heartbeat was growing louder and faster. She couldn’t understand why this was happening, it had never happened before. This didn’t even happen around Sasuke but now she was alone with Shikamaru. Shikamaru her teammate, Shikamaru who had been by her side, who protected her and who now was comforting her-then it hit her. She finally understood what this feeling was that she had. She now knew that Sasuke was just a crush but the one she truly loved was Shikamaru. “Um…Shikamaru I have something to tell you.”
“What is it” he asked.
“I…um I-I ugh” Ino stammered face growing redder by the second. “Come on Ino get it together” she told herself. “Shikamaru I l-love you” In finally said.
“You what” asked Shikamaru a little shocked and confused.
“I said I love you Shikamaru! I love you! I love you!” Shouted Ino as she jumped toward Shikamaru embracing him.
A smirk grew across his face and said “Ino I’ve always loved you” and he sealed there new relationship by placing a kiss on her lips.
The girl face was completely red from what just happened and she said “Shikamaru you jerk! Why didn’t you tell me before” she yelled while pummeling him.
“I didn’t tell you because you would have just ignored me and continued after Sasuke” said Shikamaru while catching Ino’s fist and asked “But lets say I did tell you and you said you didn’t like me and rejected me do you think we’d be here right now” He asked before placing another kiss on his new girlfriends lips.

“Hey if it isn’t my favorite customer Naruto and who’s your cute friend” The owner of the Icharuka asked making Hinata blush.
“She’s a good friend of mine who I’m treating to some ramen. So what kind of ramen would you like Hinata” asked the boy
“Ugh remember I’ve never had any ramen” replied Hinata.
“Then how about chicken ramen? It’s my favorite” suggested Naruto which Hinata agreed to.
“So that’ll be two chicken ramens” said the owner of the Icharuka as he turned to prepare the orders.
Several minutes later when Hinata finished her first bowl Naruto was finishing off his third, fourth or maybe even fifth bowl. “That was delicious! I think I’ll head home now. See you later Hinata” said Naruto while he paid for the meal and prepared to leave when he was stopped.
“Hey Naruto why don’t you walk you little friend home? It would be the right thing to do” asked the owner as if he knew what Hinata was wishing for.
“I guess you right. Come on Hinata I’ll walk you home” Said Naruto as he outstretched his hand to lead Hinata home even though he had no idea where it was.
“S-sure let’s go. I’ll show you where it is because I know you don’t know where it is” said Hinata as she stood up, walked off with Naruto and waved to the Icharuka owner to thank him what he had done. “Oh and Naruto the ramen was great.”
“Huh don’t mention it. It was only right” said Naruto.
The rest of there walk was filled with silence and every now and then Naruto tried to make Hinata laugh, which worked. When the finally arrived on the Hyuga said “W-well this is my house. T-thanks for walking me home Naruto.”
“You’re welcome Hinata. See you later” said Naruto as he turned to walk to his home.
“N-Naruto wait” Said Hinata a blush spreading across her face. Naruto turned to her and was about to say what’s wrong when Hinata did something he didn’t expect. While he was in mid-turn she placed a kiss on his cheek. Before he could even react she was already closing the door to her house.
On his way home Naruto, who still had a blush across his face was thinking about what happened. The whole walk home he said to himself “What just happened. Why did she do that? I’ve only seen people do that when they really like-” Naruto stopped short upon reaching his house he finally figured it out (A/N: Took him long enough). “She like me! Yahoo! She like me, she like me” Shouted Naruto as he opened the door to his house jumping around wildly. “I can’t believe someone actually truly likes me. I have to see her tomorrow” said Naruto and went to sleep dreaming about his future with Hinata.

END OF CHAPTER 1

You’ve just finished reading the first chapter of my first ever and first Naruto fan fiction. I really hope you enjoyed it. For the guys I do plan to put more fight scenes in it. The girls you’ll have your mushiness too. By the way I’m a guy who has no idea how he wrote a fan fiction like this. Well I’ll hope you’ll stick around for the next chapter.

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