Tuesday, February 15, 2005

stuff
nothing to say really......heres the next chapter.....

OK! I feel really loved with all the reviews! YES!!! And now to thank the newest reviewers. Those of you who have questions, I'll try to answer them now.

Whiskers: This takes the cake for coolest/scariest review ever. I have updated. Don't go all Hulk on me! I'll try to write more soon.

Zero Wolfwood: (Again) Molly must have been really cool then. I love the feedback.

Kitsune-firedragon: Shakes as she hands you the new chapter Ok! Here's the new chapter! That has to be the 2nd most coolest/scariest review ever!

MinaMina: Sorry it took so long to update. I'm going to be able to update sooner now that I'm getting out of school, I hope.

Rasgara: How do you pronounce that? Glad you liked the story!

Zero Wolfwood: Cool idea! I am so going to use that....probably next chapter though.

AbeoUmbra: lol, cute. Thanks again for informing me about the wolf rain Column. Also, Tsume is going to be VERY VERY mad.

Black Robed One: Thanks, I'm glad you like the work. The chapters might take a while to update, sorry, I work and I also have another story I'm working on.

kitsune-sama17 : Cute, huh? Thanks, I really appreciate it.

Dragon Trainer: You have a point about the dog/pet thing, but if you remember, he got really mad when Tsume called him a pet, and when Hige hinted at it. (The whole grandma thing). As for not running away, well, if he did, there would be no story. And besides, it doesn't work on everyone (the old couple) so it doesn't work on people who work closely with pit fighting. Thanks for the questions.

Snug: Ok, I will try and put more on Kiba He's just so hard to write.... Maybe because I actually dislike him. And Toboe will be developing some backbone REAL soon, so he will not be annoying any more, ok? And there can never be too many suggestions.

NightLynix: I'm honored that you reviewed, and I will defiantly put more details in the fights.

SnakeMistress: Glad you like it. I'll update as frequently as possible.

Cassandra G: I like Tsume's temper. Thanks for the review.

Sorrowful Memory: I'm so glad to hear that you like my story, I'll try to update more often.

THANK YOU! All of you! Also, if anyone is interested in reading the other story I'm currently working on, it's Foxglen by HecateLoviatar, k? It's a yuyu one. Now on with the story! Also, I think I'm going to avoid answering Reviews after this‰Û1Ú4Takes up to much space when you'd rather be reading the story, huh?

"Cheza," Kiba sighed as he rose from a short nap; "It's time to go"

Stretching slightly, Cheza clambered to her feet. The others of the group took it as a sign and rose as well.

"Ahhh, Kiba," winded Hige, "we just settled down! Can't we take a break?"

"No, we have to hurry and find paradise."

"But I'm hungry!"

"Hige is right," Blue piped in, "we're all tired and hungry. We need to rest."

"There will be a full moon tonight..." Came the monotone response only to be interrupted by Tsume. "Full moon? When the hell did that become our only sustenance?" He bristled, "You know, I'm getting real sick of you and your damned attitude. Who made you the leader?" As Kiba and Tsume faced each other in a silent battle of wills, Cheza stepped between them.

"We can rest a little longer." She smiled.

"Cheza." Kiba snorted startled.

Turning to him she continued, "I am tired, too. I think I could use a break. Why not stay here until tomorrow?" cajoled the flower maiden.

"Fine, Cheza. We'll stay here until tomorrow." With that Kiba lay down with a plop.

"Humph!" Tsume grumbled as he stormed off, Blue and Hige in tow.

When the others were gone, Kiba turned to Cheza in confusion. "Why?"

"We really could use a rest, you know. And besides, Tsume is hoping for Toboe to show up."

"He is?"

"Yes. He's been checking every town we go into or by. He's really worried." She explained. "Admit it: so are you."

"He'll be waiting for us at paradise."

"You don't know that. What if he needs help? Tsume feels that Toboe won't be at Paradise, so he is looking for him."

"You're right, Cheza. It's just that I so want to get to paradise." Wined the white wolf.

"I know, Kiba." She sighed as she rapped her arms around him.

(A.N.: See? That's why I don't do Kiba and Cheza that totally sucked!)

The fight pits

I really hope that Toboe is up for this, muttered Tala as she watched her young friend enter the fight pit. She had been watching him every day since he came to the pits. So far, he had shown great promise in the practice ring, but she knew that it didn't mean a thing in the real pit. She had tried to help him, in her own way. Sure, she was rude to him, mocked him, and even snapped once or twice, but what else could she do to make him wary? Damn it!! I actually give a crap about that stupid pup! Snarling she raised her voice into a howl, Toboe! If you get hurt, I shall rip you a new one! Idiot!

Glancing up, Toboe could just make out where Tala stood, recouperating from the last fight. Snorthing to himself he thought, Ha! A wolf can beat a dog any day! If only she believed me! he would have continued along these lines, except that it was time for the fight to begin.

"TODAY WE HAVE A SPECIAL TREAT FOR YOU! FROM THE FIGHTING TIGERS, WE HAVE CLAW, A 2 YEAR OLD PIT BULL MIX!" The announcer started as the crowed cheered, "CLAW HAS ONE THE LAST 5 FIGHTS HE HAS BEEN IN AND IS TODAY'S PIT FAVORITE FOR THE MATCH!" at this, many of the spectators ran to the nearest betting table, "AND FACEING CLAW IN TODAY'S MATCH IS AJAX, OF THE SPITTING VIPERS!" Toboe snorted at this. Ajax was the name he had been given in this God forsaken place. He quickly zoned out to the rest of what the announcer was saying in favor of watching his opponent. Claw as defiantly a veteran fighter, his bridled fur was covered in old scars and he was missing half an ear. Toboe snorted in disgust. Claw might have the experience of former fights, but nothing could beat a young wolf in his prime.

Before Toboe had even finished the thought, he was shoved into the ring. Yelping in surprise, he noticed that Claw was already charging. WA!! He yelled as he jumped over the charging Pit bull. Claw, unable to stop, plowed head on into the wall. This didn't deter the scarred killer for long though, spinning at an incredible speed, he charged again, nailing the startled Toboe in the shoulder before spinning away. Why you! Toboe snarled as he charged after the pit bull. With a quick lunge he nailed his hind foot, tripping the beast. They both went down in a flurry of snapping teeth and flailing claws. Quickly Toboe shoved away towards the wall. As Claw scrambled to his feet, Toboe launched off the wall right into him. As our little hero hit he snapped his jaws shut, killing his opponent instantly.

"I CAN'T BELEIEVE IT FOAKS, AJAX WON! THIS IS AN UPSET PEOPLE!....." The announcer started as an exhausted Toboe was lead out of the ring. Glancing back at the body of his former opponent, Toboe sighed. I didn't mean to kill him He thought as he was lead away.

"Let's move out," Kiba called, waking the others. "We must..."

"Yes, we know : 'we must find paradise.' let's just go." Tsume griped as the others headed out.

"Tsume, wait." Kiba called. As Tsume tuned, Kiba whispered, "any word?"

"No."

"We'll find him. Cheza says our paths will cross." Kiba smiled as he walked pass. If he had waited a little longer, he might have seen the slight smile on Tsume's face.

Wow! Toboe, you were awesome! Or should I call you Ajax? Tala yipped.

I don't wanna talk about It.

Why?

I only won because I was a wolf. It was not fair, I'm faster and stronger then him.

Is that all? You won because your GOOD! If your stronger of faster, use it!!

But... Toboe started.

But nothing! If you hadn't won, it would have been you on the ground! You fight to win. And if you lose, you die. If not in the ring, then somewhere else, and I don't want that to happen to you.

Oh.

Now stop trying to look like a human and get some sleep. The double forms are giving me a headache. Tala grumbled as she lay down.
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