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Friday, October 12, 2007


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Intro

Hey guys, how’s it going today? Well I’ll tell you why my picture is smiling, he is smiling because “The Cursed Knight” chapter 23 has FINALLY been completed…I know it has been well over due…trust me I know. But you know what they say, “Rome wasn’t built in a day” and sometimes my story’s chapters can not be completed in one…two…or three weeks. But at least I’ve finished it, and it also looks like I’ve add in some new characters, a new villain and a new hero. Anyways as some of you probably noticed yesterday, I wasn’t able to post due to work…the reason why is because I was still at work during my normal posting time (12:00 AM). And when I finally got off work (4:00 AM) I was beyond tired, so I went straight to bed, and didn’t wake up until 2:45 PM, so needless to say I had myself a good long rest. Man I hate counting Circuit City, but I wished I was getting paid a dollar for ever ten I had counted, why do I say that you ask? Well to put it simple the first time in which I had to transmit my counts I had well over $800,000 in my machine, and that was just in the back room. Anyways I think I’ve talked enough about so I’m going to end my post right here. So I shall talk to you guys later, and I truly hope you guys enjoy today’s chapter, and of course the rest of the post.

Q & A

Well it’s time to answer your questions, and today’s first question is from Alphonse13, and she asks “Should I start calling you by his Nickname "Perverted Kappa"?” Ahh…sure, why not. I suppose it wouldn’t hurt. Besides I’m already considered the Pervy Sage, why not the great Perverted Kappa? The next question is from Yensid, and she asks “Did I miss something; they are making your story a movie?” Yeah I wished they would make my story into a movie, and then I wouldn’t have to worry about my money issues. Man that would just be great if they did that, I’d make money, get more readers for my story, and maybe even become popular. The last question is from Gidra, and she asks “I thought you wanted your story to be a book first?” I do want it to become a book first, that’s why it isn’t a movie…or a book yet.

Discussion

Well now it’s time for today’s discussion area and the first discussion is from Iruka, and she says “Naw you are too lazy to direct it so nope not gonna happen.” Well, I never was going to direct the movie, I was just going to get paid for the movie studio to use my story as a movie script, then I would have been used for informational ideas on what certain characters would have done. So not once would I have to anything. The second discussion is from Sesslover18, and she says “If you get your lazy butt off the chair and start making a script, maybe.” Well maybe if I could get a free copy of that script writing program…I don’t remember what it’s called, but if I could get it then I would start writing the script, so HA! The third discussion is from Lordsesshomaru, and he says “Maybe someone let the air out of the tire as revenge... someone who has a little girl and a green troll as henchmen... not that I know anyone like that...” Oh you better not have been the one behind the whole tire thing…I swear if I find out you were I am so going to think of something that I may want to do to you if it weren’t for the simple fact I was too lazy to try anything. The fourth discussion is also from Lordsesshomaru, and he says “If monkey crap like "Eragon" got a movie, your story could get one too.” Wait a second…is that an insult or a compliment? Because you either said my story is better than monkey crap, which could be taken a good way, and it could be taken as if you were saying it’s down there next to monkey crap…Anyways the fifth discussion is from Gidra, and she says “I see U now have time for your story. I’m glad to hear that.” Yes I’ve got some time for my story, just enough to actually get a chapter done. But as I’ve said before as soon as I get out of this English class I should be able to get back onto track with writing a chapter a week, but right now my essays come first.


Random Questions

Well today is the day were I give you guys my answers to yesterday’s questions. So they’ll be posted below this, and then under my answers will be a few more questions for you guys. Well have fun laughing at my answers and the new questions if they are funny. And today is the start of a new Question of the day, from now on it will only have one question.




Yesterday’s Question


1.) So would you say there may be a chance for a “Cursed Knight” movie? There just might be a chance for it to become a movie, but first I have to finish writing the story, then I need to add a lot of details to the story to give it more depth, and then I’ll need to get a publisher and then get it published, and then maybe there will be a movie…just maybe…








Today’s Question


1.) Could you be able to tell me what Edge (story character) looks like from reading this story?


2.) What did you think of today’s chapter 23?














The Cursed Knight



Chapter Twenty-Three

“ Darkened Ice”



As the years turned to decades, which transcended into a century. I found myself walking around a much industrialized world. The old training grounds in which I honed my skills was now nothing more than a fortification built by the Nazi Germans on their conquest to gain power over the world, as I saw the horrible crimes their leader had in mind for the magnitudes of people he deemed lesser than his own. As those atrocities were put into action I myself found a just cause for joining in on this mighty of wars against a tyrant among men. As this war started a many of nations fell to the ground under his mighty military power. The once great nation of France was one of the first, as the French fell to this mad man I wondered to myself what would have France’s greatest general thought of his once mighty nation? But that no longer matter to me, as I saw the masses of the world deploy onto Germany I too found myself heading to Germany’s capital to take care of their so called leader.



As I walked through the snow covered mountains that would lead me to Germany, I found myself constantly being attacked my Nazi soldiers. In my older days I would have slain all of those fools for trying to attack me, but me being around for as long as I have I always left the men with their meaningless lives. One eventful day I came across a mighty fortress that normally would have been crawling with soldiers, and yet I saw not a single living soul, only dead bodies littered the ground around this fortress. As I wondered into this empty fortress I saw even more bodies of Allied soldiers everywhere. It had looked like some kind of beast had slaughter this poor soldiers. As I entered the fortress the continued site of bodies grew greater, and yet the deeper I went into the fortress the more horrifying the wounds upon the soldiers became. Men were sliced open as if they were just simple little fish being opened by a bear, but these were not fish, they were humans, and this damage was not done by a bear, no it was done by a blade.
The odd thing about ever one of those blade wounds on the soldiers was that it was not just some ordinary sword; it was a far too clean to have been a blade forged by human hands.



As the day went on I continued seeing the very same blade marks not only on the soldiers, but also all over the walls. “What kind of mad man slaughters people like this without any regards to his blade?” I questioned. “A mad man am I?” Asked a deep dark voice from a pitch black room. As I pushed the parted door open the room barely started to light up, as light filled the room I saw more and more of the massacre that had taken place. When the dark room was finally fully lit I saw that this mere room was actually a strategy room for the now dead army that once occupied this fortress. As I walked through the blood soaked floors the scent of blood and decaying flesh filled my nose almost causing me to choke. “Aw are you having problems breathing in this wonderful stench?” Asked a hauntingly dark voice. “Well it was either the smell of these decomposing bodies I smelt or it is you that is making me choke with disgust.” I remarked back to the dark voice. “Oh we have a funny man here…oh wait, you are not just a normal man, no you are far greater than that.” Sneered the dark voice for in front of me. “You do have a good point there; I am far greater than you first thought. Now why don’t you come out from hiding so that we may end this here and now.” I said forcefully as I grabbed Tatakai from my waist. “So you expect to defeat me with that tiny sword of yours? Why not use that far greater sword on your back, which would be a better challenge for my mighty blade.” Questioned the dark voice as he came walking out of the shadows holding a massive blade as long as he was tall.



“Well now, so you’re the crazy bastard that slaughter all these brave allied soldiers?” I questioned the dark figure that stepped into the little light that came from the illuminated hallway. “Yes I am the mighty warrior that killed these pathetic soldiers that believed they even should a chance against my mighty skills with a sword. Oh and I would prefer if you’d call me by my name, and not bastard.” Spoke the dark figure as he walked towards me with his sword on his shoulder. “And by what name do you go by?” I asked the blood happy figure. “Ah that’s right, my name is one you won’t need to remember for long, since you will be dead in no time. But I suppose a name would still be a good thing to tell you. I am Avicus, the strongest warrior in all of Europe.” Spoke Avicus with great confidence. “In all of Europe? Really, and here I would have never guessed some child would be the strongest of Europe.” I said mockingly to Avicus. “How dare you mock a mighty warrior like myself?” Shouted Avicus as he leaped into the air with his blade coming closer and closer to my face. “You truly are a weak minded fool.” I said as I quickly pulled Tatakai out to met with his blade. “Ha, I’ll break that blade like a child’s toy!” Spoke Avicus as he placed one of his hands in front of himself and a light blue aura glowed in front of it. “What are you up to?” I questioned him, “As I said I’m going to break your little sword.” When he said that Tatakai grew extremely cold, and the instant Avicus’ blade crashed into Tatakai my sword shattered like glass.



As I watched my blade scatter around the room my body was stricken by shock and I stood there motionless as Avicus continued on his path to slice me in half. It was at that time I found myself a new ally, as Avicus’ blade was about to make friends with my flesh a loud bang went off from the enlightened hallway, which knocked Avicus’ blade off its course for my flesh. As Avicus struck the ground with his blade another bang went off causing him to fall to the ground. “So I’ll take it as you are the one that slaughtered all these soldiers?” Remarked a dark figure standing in the doorway that leads to the enlightened hall. “Who in the hell do you think you are? This is a sword fight between two warriors!” Shouted Avicus. “Well what better to bring to a sword fight than a gun, or better yet two guns?” Mocked the dark figure as he held two guns up pointing towards Avicus. While Avicus was distracted by the masked figure I realized I couldn’t just stand by, I knew I needed to end this fight here and now. As the masked figured fired off two shots at Avicus I grab Acies from my back and swung in the exact place in which Avicus had no choice but to land. And as he jumped to the side he was finally were I had wanted him, as Acies was about to rip right through him like a sheet a paper a bolt of lighting crashed through the room causing the whole building to collapse.














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