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Wednesday, April 20, 2005


   For anyone who cares
Hi ppl I am posing the first chaper of my story The Golden Sword of Majesta. hope you like it.
this chapter goes under the copyright law. thanks for your participation


Chapter 1 The Legend
Long ago there was a war of worlds. This war was believed to end our race for good. The creature known as Ridills would capture humans and shown no mercy even for mothers and their children. The Ridills were evil bird human looking creatures; they had blood red eyes and didn’t care for anything but there own. After the prisoners were there for only a day they would kill them and eat them.
A sword master and blacksmith created a golden blade to kill the Ridills but before the blade could kill them he had to take it to the fairy of death and she enchanted it to kill Ridills with one hit. When he got back home his wife and children were gone. Outraged by their disappearances, he retrieved the new blade and his armor and went to get them back. But by the time he got to the Ridills hide away it was to late for his wife. All he could save was his son Larry. Trevor Majesta named the golden blade after his last name.
A huge party was held for him for killing the Ridills. But deep inside he didn’t want to celebrate, one of his two real treasures were gone.
The King of Krela had the blade laid in a secret temple in the Castle to keep it from ever being touched before the time it was to return to the light. Trevor told the king in a mild tone, “No one but my family ties would be able to bring the blades true power out.”


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