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Tuesday, January 16, 2007


   PART THREE OF MY BOOK!!!! WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!
Suddenly, larger footsteps rushed near and a large gust of wind blew across his body as two large hideous creatures ran before him. Eyes like deep red rubies where embedded in a skull of sharp yellow teeth and a wolf like resemblance. Their black claws were long and sharp as they clawed up the dirt beneath their massive paws. Ellon ran after the creatures, fearing that they were after that woman. Ellon ran through the dense forest, dodging looming trees and leaping over roots like a cat. Ellon rushed into a clearing where he saw the woman lying on the meadow’s ground. She pushed the bundle into a near by bush and turned to face her death. The creatures stalked toward her exchanging howls and grunts, drool escaping their strong jaws as they loomed over her. The woman screamed as one of the creatures clawed into her side. Ellon ran to her as the creatures feasted on fresh flesh and blood. Ellon attacked one of the beasts but he just went right through them. The woman looked into his eyes, blood dripped from her mouth as she whispered.
“Nincougth el las fregcoon.” Ellon watched her die and he turned to the bundle. He crawled under the bush and removed the cloth from the small bundle to reveal a tiny baby with pale skin and blue eyes. Ellon stared at the tiny creature. The baby yawned and turned over, Ellon’s eyes widen as he saw a winged shaped birthmark on its left shoulder, the same as on his shoulder. Was this frail child him before he lost his memory? The earth gave way below Ellon and the world caved in as a black hole absorbed all into its dark depths. Ellon ran deeper into the forest as the meadow evaporated and the forest was slowly being absorbed. His heart raced and his breath escaped in large amounts out of his lungs. The hole grew absorbing all before it, Ellon tripped and the hole pulled him into its depths. He reached disparately for a ledge but all was gone and he fell through a dark void of nothingness. Ellon fell into a strange room of tall clear mirrors; the ceiling was a vast imitation of a night sky dotted with shining stars and a cresset moon. Ellon stood and examined the mirrors his reflections imitating his movement. How was he to get out?
“Hello?” his voice echoed through the vast room the only answer to his call. He tried again as fear gripped his heart. No answer. Ellon tried again over and over no reply, so he finally gave up. Every wall was blocked with a giant mirror, escape was probably impracticable. Ellon pushed against each mirror with hopes that they’re maybe a hidden door behind one of the glossy surfaces. Ellon sighed and rammed his body against the walls trying to break the exterior, not even a scratch! Ellon’s heart raced as he tried over and over to escape the mocking prison that enclosed him. No way out, the glass walls seemed to close in on him, an endless suffocation grabbing at his throat.
“Ellon…”
Ellon fell to his knees as the walls crawled toward him.
“Ellon…”
His breath slowly came to a halt as he chocked to breathe what air he had left.
“Ellon…”
The whisper scraped his mind like nails against a chalkboard.
“Ellon!”
It screamed.
“Ellon!”
Ellon’s throat tightened, he couldn’t breathe!
“Ellon!”

What a loss! What a loss!
The mountains fall and cry
The savior suffers to the power of the earth
As his mother steps aside!

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