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Saturday, June 10, 2006


needs comments!
okay I'm writing a book called "broken eternity" and I want you to read this takeout! Please tell me anything! and I'll be glad to add your ideas to my book! enjoy!

Screams. That's all I ever here is screams. Ever soul that arrives here is tortured for eternity. Why must it be this way?
Hirukin walked between the flamming pits where souls reached out for him. His great demonic wings followed behind him.Was there more than this?
Hirukin reached the forbidden gates and headed unto the world where humanity walked. He was always told humans were worthless, where they really?
He looked back unto his home, and headed out.

The spirits screamed in agony.
"No more happiness, broken eternity!"

Okay!

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