Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Story Time!!!

Chapter 3: Part 3

“I really need to find a better way up here,” Kai said to himself as he struggled up the rope he made of vines only two days ago.
“I have to agree with you,” a sweet sounding voice said to Kai. When Kai pulled himself up to the porch, he saw a raven-haired girl sitting on his windowsill. As she smiled, Kai caught himself losing his grip.
“Most of us use tool-kits to get up the trees,” she said as Kai continued to struggle at the ledge.
“A little help, please?”
The girl hopped off of the windowsill and offered him her hand.
“So, what’s your business here?” Kai asked when he finally stood on the platform.
“Well, it isn’t holding your hand, Kai.”
“Oh, sorry! My bad,” Kai said when he realized he hadn’t let go.
“Yes, so I was sent to give you this.” She handed Kai a bag about the shape of a deflated football. The black bag weighed heavily in his hand when she dropped it.
“This is your tool-kit. Before you use it, remember how it is packed.”
“Wait,” Kai stopped her when she turned away. “What’s your name?”
“Yuna,” she replied before she stepped off the platform.
Alarmed, Kai looked over the ledge just in time to see Yuna land safely 100 feet below.
“There’s just too much going on today,” Kai muttered.

Kai secured the sword by bundling it in some t-shirts he had in his car. “I knew I should have packed more shirts,” he said as the blade sliced through his ‘Body by Nintendo’ shirt.

‘I wonder why she was sent to give me my tool-kit. I’ll ask Booshi later at training. Right now is the scary part… If Konsetsuo is so messed up, I don’t want to imagine how his parents are.’

...HOORAY! This is my first stab at an "awkward situation" in my writing, I liked it. Yuna is going to be a major character in my story, so watch out for her.

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"What a dork!" - my sister after reading this

Yeah, she loves the story and threatens to punch me when I don't write for awhile. I'm not so wary of her threats, because well... she's always punching me anyways and it doesn't really hurt. Just a good reason to keep writing and avoid more of her "punishment". I've had excuses, and they always tend to make me feel like less of a writer... blah blah blah. Ah well, I intend to make this a comic someday, and the story has to be there first...

Questions:

Well, this doesn't mean the end of the post this time:

It actually kinda feels awkward to answer these... I won't think any less of you if you have problems with me, I'll still come to your site if you hate me, and I'll respect you more for answering honestly. Please answer all the questions that apply. If you don't feel comfortable answering these, don't feel that you have to either.

What would you think if:
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1.I committed suicide:
2.I said I like you
(for opposite gender):
3.I kissed you
(for opposite gender):
4.I liked someone you didn’t:
5.I was hospitalized:
6.I ran away from home:

What you think of my:

7.Personality:

8.Who are you?
9.Are we friends?
10.When and how did we meet?
11.What do you think of me?
12.How long do you think we will be friends or enemies?
13.Do you love me?
14.Have I ever hurt you?
15.Would you hug me?
16.Would you kiss me?
17.Are we close?
18.Give me a nickname and explain why you picked it.
19.How long have you known me?
20.Describe me in one word.
21.What was your first impression?
22.Do you still think that way about me now?
23.What do you think my weakness is?
24.Do you think I'll get married (if yes to who)?
25.What reminds you of me?
26.What's something you would change about me?
27.How well do you know me?
28.Ever wanted to tell me something but couldn't?
29.If so tell me now? (or PM me)
30.Do you think I would kill someone?

31.Are you going to put this on your otaku site and see what I say about you??
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Back to Writing...

I'm actually going to be writing ahead now, so I can have something new every week (even if I have writer's block). I'm gonna be tempted to post more and more often the story, because I don't want to hide anything about it from my number one audience (yeah, that's you guys!). I've got most of part 4 written now, and it isn't nearly as short as this most recent part (sorry about that! ^-^). I'll post it next Wednesday unless I have about four part written ahead, then I'll post it earlier...

New Job

I'll have to probably make some adjustments to my posting schedule and everything, so I'll be happy to post as much as I can when I can. (I really need a computer at home if I'm gonna post anything worthwhile to read & my hand is starting to cramp when I write the story by hand).

I'll have more details next week since I'm going to have lunch with my new boss on Friday. I'll be really glad to work downtown (so much good food!).

New Wallpaper Project

This'll take awhile, because only the covers of the MT books have color on them (as well as my lack of daily time on the computer), I'll have to search my 'paper' site to see if there are any MT Scans or scan my own in there (which will need color). The MT fans have spoken and it seems the wall goes to 1337 M4573R L4RG0! I'd also have jumped at the chance to make a Junpei Wallpaper... That is definitely the next one I get to (if ever...).

Thanks for all of your comments! I don't know what I'd do if I was still here and was never getting any input on my ideas. I thank you all for your opinions and reassuring my lack of insanity. You're all good friends!
-Krustyknuckles
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