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Birthday
• 1989-09-24
Gender
• Female
Location
• in the shadows of my own dream
Member Since
• 2003-08-08
Occupation
• a lazy demented idiot
Real Name
• I wasn't given a name at birth. my parents disowned me and I grew up in a cardboard box that I bought on ebay.

Personal

Achievements
• won a halloween contest when I was 7...I was a peacock...o.O please don't ask...i was a demented little kid...still am.
Anime Fan Since
• sence speed racer came on cartoon network I was around six-ish
Favorite Anime
• Trigun, Blue Seed, Soul Taker, Zenki, Cowboy Bebop, Boogipop Phantom, Ranma1/2, Excel Saga, Angel santcuary, Naruto, Eatman, Death Note, Futari Ecchi, Golden Boy
Goals
• love to have a shop, make plushies and maybe comics.
Hobbies
• I love to create things; anything. Making plushies.
Talents
• drawing, writing storys, manga, plushies, dreaming

myOtaku.com: Kuronekosama

Sunday, April 22, 2007

I had a brainstorm.

I figured I do a redo of Alice in Wonderland.
Please tell me what you think!
I'm going to do this in a sort of poetic comic. I'll ask her on Monday, if that is okay. I'm sure it is as she loves my art. :D

Everything that is in brackets or italics, won't be in the comic, 'cept the "drink me" part.

Alice in Redux

[first page]

His name was Alice,
He was gender confused
So perhaps that is why
He’s in the house for loons.
With his stuffed cat
Of which was named Cheshire.
He skipped,
And like a bad trip,
He fell into a pit.

[second page]

Where he found
White Rabbit,
Who wore red spats,
White Rabbit ran into a door
That smashed her flat.
White Rabbit got up and ran away,
While poor little Alice stood
With a bottle that said ‘drink me’
And one that said ‘not’
His curiosity intrigued,
he drank both.

[third page]

And soon realized he had a turn for the worst.
Alice went to heaven,
Then came back down,
A wee bit far
For his concern.

[fourth page]

Hatter and Welsh Rabbit
Were having tea
“Oh! Shock! What is this?
Is this a plea?
What, his birthday?
A very unmerry one, you say?”
So Alice had his kicks
With his unmerry birthday tricks.
Perhaps if he would have picked
A more pleasant place
His birthday would be much merrier
In a happy, joyful space.

[fifth page]

So he traveled along,
Until he came to stairwell
Of which he had to choose
Was he to dwell
In this land?
Or to rise to the land above?
“Up! Up!”

[sixth page]

He went forth into the darkness
Instead of the light.
He found the Deck of Cards
{a bunch of rubbish questions are written here to fill up back ground}
They just hindered his plight.
Little Alice ran
Straight into the Queen.
Her great bosom of roses
Fluttered in his face.
He fell to the ground
In a hardy thud.
He sat dazed

[seventh page]

The King was furious,
“Off with his head!”
And the Deck of Cards
Went after poor little Alice.
He was lost!
He was confused!

[eighth page]

He tripped and fell
And went to hell.
The stars fell with him
And so did the night.
Everything fell without a fight.
He was found at the bottom,
With the whole universe at his feet.
He felt a tug on his pinky,
An amazing string,
Drug him into the puzzled universe

[ninth page]

{ends with Alice in a field with Cheshire}

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