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Vitals

Birthday
• 1989-09-24
Gender
• Female
Location
• in the shadows of my own dream
Member Since
• 2003-08-08
Occupation
• a lazy demented idiot
Real Name
• I wasn't given a name at birth. my parents disowned me and I grew up in a cardboard box that I bought on ebay.

Personal

Achievements
• won a halloween contest when I was 7...I was a peacock...o.O please don't ask...i was a demented little kid...still am.
Anime Fan Since
• sence speed racer came on cartoon network I was around six-ish
Favorite Anime
• Trigun, Blue Seed, Soul Taker, Zenki, Cowboy Bebop, Boogipop Phantom, Ranma1/2, Excel Saga, Angel santcuary, Naruto, Eatman, Death Note, Futari Ecchi, Golden Boy
Goals
• love to have a shop, make plushies and maybe comics.
Hobbies
• I love to create things; anything. Making plushies.
Talents
• drawing, writing storys, manga, plushies, dreaming

myOtaku.com: Kuronekosama

Sunday, April 22, 2007

The Real Deal

I redid 'Alice in Redux'

Alice in Redux

[first page]

His name was Alice,
He was gender confused
So perhaps that is why
He wore Pinafores and cotton.
With his stuffed cat
Of which was named Cheshire.
He skipped,
And like a bad trip,
He fell into a pit.

[second page]

Where he found
White Rabbit,
Who wore red spats,
White Rabbit ran into a door
That smashed her flat.
White Rabbit got up and ran away,
While poor little Alice stood astray.
With a bottle that said ‘drink me’
And one that said ‘not’
His curiosity intrigued,
he drank what?

[third page]

And soon realized he had a turn for the worst.
Alice went to heaven,
Then came back down,
A wee bit far
For his concern.

[fourth page]

Hatter and Welsh Rabbit
Were having tea
“Oh! Shock! What is this?
Is this a plea?
What, his birthday?
A very unmerry one, you say?”
So Alice had his kicks
With his unmerry tricks.

[fifth page]

So he traveled along,
Until he came to stairwell
Of which he had to choose
Was he to dwell
Here of all places,
Or journey to more pleasant spaces?

[sixth page]

He went forth into the darkness
Instead of the light.
A small runt pig
That did a little jig
Kept close step behind
He found the Deck of Cards
{a bunch of rubbish questions are written here to fill up back ground}
They just hindered his plight.
Little Alice ran
Straight into the Queen.
Her great bosom of roses
Were like a red stream,
That tickled his nose

[seventh page]

The King was furious,
His tart was gone. {pig eats king’s tart}
And the Deck of Cards
Went after poor little Alice
And the wee runt pig
Ran far into the night.

[eighth page]

He tripped and fell
And went to hell.
The stars fell with him
And so did the night.
Everything fell without a fight.
A little Dorbat came tumbling after {sings ‘twinkle twinkle little mouse’}
{Dorbat hits Alice on the head, Stars fade into background through out entire page}

[ninth page]

The apples have been dug,
The tweedles have been dummed,
And the Jabbers have been wocked,
And so ends our tale
With a little sleepy Alice and a curious Chesire.
{ends with Alice in a field with Cheshire}

[never end]

So please tell me what you think, yes? As Sahkiryce claims, no one will read this yes I know.

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