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Thursday, September 14, 2006


jeez, i really DO never get to post!
well, im back!!! and, well, its been a pretty good three days!! i get to go to lunch, meet my friends, make new enemies, yeah, its all good!!

so, i didnt really get any HW, except for LAL2, where my first HW assignment was to-get this- write a poem. yeah, a poem. Its titled, "I Am", and it goes like this-each line starts out with "I Am", "I feel", "I wonder", etc., then we fill in ideas and thoughts about ourselves, imaginary or real. so, it took me a good while, but i wrote it. Honestly, the one line i had the hardest time coming up with was the "I am" line. but, since im so generous, i'll share my poem with you guys!

I Am
I am a melancholic shell of a man
I wonder about life after death
I hear the ongoing struggle in my mind
I see a world of tragedy and despair
I want to end the everlasting pain and torment
I am a melancholic shell of a man

I pretend to be happy, although it never works
I feel cold, no matter how warm it is
I touch the sharp blade against my dull wrist
I worry that no one will miss me if i were to leave
I cry myself to sleep each passing night

I am a melancholic shell of a man
I understand that I could've made things better for myself
I say things that i never mean
I dream-no, i LIVE a horrible nightmare
I hope that things get a little bit better than yesterday
I am a melancholic shell of a man.


well, what do ya think? i know its the first poem i ever wrote, even though its for school, but i think i didnt do too bad. my mom read it, and she sed it was good, but then asked me if it was true. i sed no. ...it really isnt!! i swear!!!

whatever. i still need a binder for my driver's ed class. since i cant seem to find one, and i cant go now, i'll go to Walgreens b4 i go to school, since it is open 24/7!!! and they're not expensive either!!!

so, i gotta go now. hope you enjoyed the very first poem i ever wrote!!!! laters!!! oh, and be honest with ur comments!

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