Wednesday, March 9, 2005

Mischievious Fairies, Chapter 1!!!
Yay! I wrote the first chapter for Mischievious Fairies. Normally I wouldn't want to post this and bother others, but I really want your advice. I also colored the pics and they have been posted, in case anyone wanted to know what the two fairies look like. Let me know what you think! It's a little long, but here goes!

Chapter 1: Broken Houses, Big Surprises!

Tsubasa: *waves* Hey! Rika! *runs over* Have you seen Yasuo and Kiyoshi anywhere?
Rika: *sitting on a tree stump, tying her shoes* You should know as well as I do. They are at the same place where we always find them.
Tsubasa: Oh Yeah! Guess I shoulda checked there first.
Rika: Ya think?
Tsubasa: Geez, what's wrong with you.
Rika: Nothing. Come on, I'll go with you. If we don't get them now we'll miss the field trip. *starts to walk away*
Tsubasa: *staring for a moment* OK! *runs to catch up*


*sitting beneath a tree to the side of the school*

Yasuo: Ah man, I am so tired.
Kiyoshi : Yeah wll, if you weren't such a goofball the teacher wouldn't have made you run extra laps.
Yasuo: Hahaha, what can I say I...
Kiyoshi: Here comes our beloved:
Yasuo: Huh.

*Tsubasa and Rika running over to the boys, Rika leaps and knocks over Yasuo*
Rika: My Love!
Yasuo: *pushin Rika aside* Geez, be more carefull will ya?
Tsubasa: * sitting next to Kiyoshi* Kiyoshi puts his arm around her shoulders* What's wrong with him?
Kiyoshi: He's sore from Gym, that's all.
Rika: Is that so my love, let me give you a massage! *starts to massage Yasuo's shoulders rather hard*
Yasuo: Ahhhh!!!! You Crazy Ass! That Hurts!
Rika: I'm sorry..I only wanted to help" *tears well up in her eyes*
Kiyoshi: Anyways, what's up?
Rika: Oh yeah! It's time to get going. We're gonna miss the field trip.
Kiyoshi: Ah, that's right. That was today.
Tsubasa: Yes, that was today. You ready?
Yasuo: I don't know why we have to go to that thing anyways. It's just a stupid trip into the mountains. What's the big deal?
Rika: You know we're supposed to be investigating the plants n stuff.
Kiyoshi: Man you really don't pay attention in class, do you?
Yasou: Hey! Off my ass!
Tsubasa: Well why don't you argue about this when we're ON the bus or else we're gonna MISS the bus.

*Scene changes to inside the bus*

Kiyoshi: Man, it's taking forever to get there.
Tsubasa: Yeah, and sleeping beauty knocked out in the first 15 mins.
Rika: My love, wake up and keep my company.
Yasuo: *snores*
Tsubasa: Isn't that lovely?
Rika: Hey! Leave my boyfriend alone and pay attention to yours
Kiyoshi: Looks like we're finally here. Better wake him up.
Rika: Wake up Yasuo, Wake up.
Kiyoshi: That's not gonna work. Move over. * grabs yasou's nose and cover his mouth*
Yasuo: *wakes up gasping for air* What the hell?
Kiyoshi: Hey man, we're here.
Yasuo: Huh? Oh, hahahaha. My fault.
Rika: My love!!! *grabs Yasuo* Did you sleep well?
Tsubasa: We're the last ones on the bus, don't you think we should get off now?
Rika: Huh? Oh! Let's go! *grabs Yasuo and drags him along*
Kiyoshi: Shall we?
Tsubasa: Umm hmm.

*Outside the bus*

Teacher: Ok class, you have two hours to collect the specimens. I want you all to go in groups of four and when you are done, report back here. I'm trusting you all to act like adults. If there is any problems, report back here immediately. I'll be waiting inside the cabin. You are dissmissed.

Yasuo: Alright! Let's Go!
Kiyoshi: We're excited now, are we?
Yasuo: *rubs back of neck* Yeah well, I was tired earlier.
Tsubasa: Ok, let's go.
Rika: Yeah!

* an hour later, the group is walking through the forest.*

Tsubasa: I think we have enough plants for the project. What do you want to do now?
Rika: I dunno.
Yasuo: Let's explore!
Rika: Huh, no! What if we get lost!
Yasuo: Don't be such a cry baby! * Grabs rika by the hand pulling her behind him as he goes running.
Kiyoshi: C'mon * Grabs Tsubasa and runs too.

* a few minutes later the group comes to a sudden stop. There are tiny little houses everywhere in a small clearing in the middle of the forest. Dewdrops glisten everywhere and fireflies fly around shining their lights in this somewhat dark area. *

Rika: Where are we?
Yasuo: I don't know, but this place freaks me out.
Tsubasa. It's amazing. There's tiny little houses everywhere.
Rika: Are you sure those are houses.
Tsubasa: That's what it looks like.
Kiyoshi. Whatever they are, they're everywhere. Even on the tree trunks and branches.
Tsubasa: It almost seems magical.
Yasuo: I don't like it here, let's go.
Rika: Now who's being the crybaby! Let's look around. *grabs Yasuo*
Yasuo: Hey! Let go! * Yasuo pulls back and loses his footing. He falls backwards and lands on Kiyoshi who falls over too.
Kiyoshi: Watch it you big idiot! *gets up wiping dirt off of his clothes.*
Yasuo: It wasn't my fault.
Tsubasa: Are you guys alright?
Rika: My Love! Are you hurt? I'm sorry I...I... *tears well up*
Yasuo: Ahhww, save the tears. I'm fine. * Gets up and wips his clothes too*
Tsubasa: Look, you guys broke two of the little houses.
Yasuo: So?!?! They probably were some kid's way of filling boring time out here. Let's just go.
Kiyoshi: Yeah, it's almost time to meet up at the bus...
Tsubasa: But.....
Rika:C'mon Tsubasa. It'll be alright.
Tsubasa: Ok.

*scene changes back to the college. The final bell of the day rings and students are pooring out of the school building. Yasuo and Kiyoshi come walking out hand in hand with their girlfriends.

Yasuo: Man, classes were boring today.
Rika: Thank god it's Friday.
Tsubasa: Yeah, and I'm loaded with homework.
Kiyoshi: Well if you want, you can come over tomorrow and work together.
Tsubasa: *etes light up* Sure! I'll call you.
Rika: *gives a deadly stare to Yasuo.*
Yasuo: What? Oh, yeah, you should come over too.
Rika* Smiles with a big grin* Ok! See you then. Come on Tsubasa, let's hit the mall!
Tsubasa: Ok!

*Scene changes to Yasuo and Kiyoshi walking down the street*

Yasuo: Man, I'm hungry. Whose turn is it to do the cooking?
Kiyoshi: It's yours.
Yasuo: * hangs his head low*
Kiyoshi: Fine, fine! I'll cook today. Your cooking sucks anyways.
Yasuo: Hey! Off my ass.
* they reach their house. The front door is wide open.
Kiyoshi: Hey, did you leave our door open this morning. ?
Yasuo: Huh? Why?
Kiyoshi: *points to door* Look idiot.
Yasuo: * looks up* What the hell.
Kiyoshi: Come on.

* Inside the house all of the lights are on. There house has completely changed. The living room is filled with lamp shades and rugs and pillows. There is incense burning in the air.

Yasuo: What the hell is this? What's with all this girly stuff!
* noises are heard from the kitchen*
Kiyoshi: Is someone there? Hellooo?

* A head peers through the door*

Sayuri: Ah! They're here. * Walks into the living room* Hi!
Yasuo: Who the hell are you?
Sayuri: I'm Sayuri. Please don't raise your voice. Our neighbors will hear us.
Kiyoshi: Our neighbors?
Sayuri: That's right, we live here now.
Yasuo: Excuse me, what did you say?!?!
Kuniko: *walking into the room*. You heard her. We live here now, with you two.
Kiyoshi: There must be some kind of misunderstanding.
Sayuri: Nope. You broke our houses so by our laws, we take over your house. By the way, that is my sister Kuniko. Be careful, she upsets easily.
Yasuo: What?!
Kiyoshi: Your laws? What do you mean by your laws?
Yasuo: Yeah! And what houses!
Kuniko: LOWER YOUR TONE OF VOICE!
Sayuri: Mah,Mah, calm down now, both of you. Kuniko, let me handle this, hmm? You both landed on our houses when you fell over in the forest. Those were our houses you broke.
Yasuo: Yeah and?
Sayuri: And our laws say that should a human or animal break our houses, we are to take ownership of theirs until an undetermined amount of time. By the way, we're fairies.
Yasuo* faints to the floor*
Kiyoshi: Well then, I guess there's nothing we can do.
Kuniko: * Hey, is your friend going to be alright*
Kiyoshi: Give him a few seconds. It's more than his little brain can handle.
Yasuo: *Bolts sitting up.* Whose got a little brain!?!?! And what the hell do you mean your fairies? There's no such thing as........ *his ranting fades into the background *
Kuniko: I'm going back to the kitchen.
Sayuri: Oh! That's right! I made dinner.
Yasuo: Lunch?!?! Where???
Kiyoshi: Done ranting are we?

*in the dining room, Yasuo and Kiyoshi sit down. There is an amazing display of the food on the table. *
Sayuri: Hai, Dozo (Please, feel free to eat.)
Koyishi and Yasuo: Itadakimasu! ( Thank you for this meal)
Yasuo: Ooh! Delicious! * starts to eat furiously*
Kiyoshi: Yes, this is very good.
Sayuri *grins* Well Thank you!
Kuniko: *serves the tea* Sorry, it took longer to boil than expected. Your stove sucks.
Yasuo PFFFFFF* spitting out rice*. What did you say?
Kiyoshi: Yeah, we know. It's old and there are some tricks to it.
Kuniko: I see.

* a little while later*
Yasuo: Man I'm full. Think I'm gonna explode.
Kiyoshi: That's his way of saying thank you.
Yasuo: Err....well....Hey! Off my ass.
Sayuri * fake grin* Oh.
Yasuo: Err..well...I guess it's alright if you guys stay.
Kuniko: Just like a human male. Satisy the stomach, win over his heart.
Yasuo: Hey I said Off My Ass!
* everyone starts laughing*
Kiyoshi: Well, it's late. Think I'm gonna hit the sack. I take it you found the extra room.
Sayuri: Umm Hmm.
Yasuo: I'm gonna knock out too.
Sayuri: Night!

*Next Morning*

*Bang Bang Bang*

Kiyoshi: *half asleep* Yeah, I'm coming.
*starts to walk into the living room. Sayuri is at the door*
Kiyoshi: Sayuri, wait!
*too late, Sayuri opens the door*
Sayuri: Hi!
Tsubasa: Who are you?
Rika: ERRRRR YASUO!!!!!!!


And there ya have it. Hope you like it and please be honest!
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