Monday, November 27, 2006

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Day 1
The Troubles Of Getting Ready
(ok just so you all know this story has me and my friends in it and they are dating some of the characters, please don't kill me if there are parts in my story that get you mad at; let me explain...Namine and Namari Inuzuka are made up and related to both Kiba and Kakashi, Koli and Mio Nara are made up and lil sisters of Shikamaru, Ari and Nakamura Aroshitori are made up, Sera and Yuko of Setsuna are made up, Sayuki Mideroshi is made up and is Anko's big sis(no Anko isn't in the story), TanRan is also made up,and Kira Inuzuka is also made up and related to Kiba and everyone else...ok lets begin)


"Lets move it people, we are waaaaaay behind schedule" Sakura yelled into the megaphone she had brought with her to the Inuzuka's house from home.
"Sakura shut-up and put that stupid thing away; after three hours of yelling into it it really gets annoying" Namari yelled into the megaphone she had grabbed from Sakura and yelled into it while it was right next to Sakura's ear.
Everyone was rushing around so they could meet the deadline for their summer week stay at the beach house down the shore. Namine and Namari had rented it at least a month in advance, but had to wait till the other people had left which was this very day so they had to hurry before someone else took it for the summer(don't know how those rented summer homes work so i'm guessing).
"Destiny says we're gonna hit traffic" whined Neji from inside his silver mazda convertable.
"Tell destiny it needs to seriously shut-up" yelled Tenten from under the car as she was checking for anything wrong before the trip.
"I agree fully with that" said Sera from the maze of trunks and boxes lining the Inuzuka's front lawn.
Everyone had been looking forward to this for weeks, and now they were extremely excited since summer had finally arrived and they could take a week off. In order to make it go faster they were each given a certain job to do. Sasuke, Neji and Itachi were to drive down to the beach house so all they had to do was bring their cars and be lazy, which no one liked. Naruto, Ari and Sera were given the job of putting the suitcases into the cars. Mio, Namine and Namari were in charge of packing important things like medical supplies and food they could use down by the beach. Kiba, Nakamura, Kira and Koli were to call all their sensei's and family's, and tell them they were going to be away for a week. Tenten was told to check all three cars, Itachi's red convertable corvette, Neji's silver Mazda convertable and Sasuke's black Mustang convertable since she seemed to know more about cars then the others(ok i don't think there were cars then, but there are now becuase it makes everything so much easier). Lee was to watch and make sure Naruto didn't try to sneak any ramen into any suitcases, since Namari refused to come at all if Naruto brought ramen. Lee had cuaght Naruto red handed about six times in the past hour. Sakura had given herself the title of supervisor, which by this point everyone was regretting even letting her come on the trip.
"Don't get your panties in a bunch" said Ari as she tried to push someone's extremely over packed suitcase in the back of Sasuke's car.
"How can I get my panties in a bunch if I'm wearing a bathing suit" asked Sakura confused at the comment as Ari just stood frozen with an eyebrow raised.
And this is the idiot who is supposed to be suppervising " Sera stated coming over with another suitcase to squeeze into the trunk.
"Ah the stupidity, it burns" yelled Namine, Namari and Mio from their spots on the porch and pretending to sheild there eyes and fall to the ground dead.
Sakura seethed over with anger as everyone broke into luaghter, and tossed the megaphone into the air without thinking. Soon remembering the laws of gravity as the megaphone came crashing back down onto her head. Everyone luaghed again as Sakura sat there trying to figure out what happened.
"Hey where's Gaara and Temari" asked Nakamura after finishing leaving a message for Gai that Lee, Tenten and Neji would be away for the week and to leave them alone.
"Yeah, Ino and Shikamaru haven't shown up yet too" said Kira after hitting Kiba for falling asleep again.
"Where the hell is Ino-pig and the lazyass, not to mention Mr. Sandman and his medical assistant aren't here as well" Sakura screamed into the megaphone forgetting about the large bump on her head and cuasing everyone to cringe around her.
"Shut your fat mouth forhead girl, we're here already" said Ino from the back seat of Gaara's redish-purple Mercades.
"Hey guys, what took ya" Ari and Nakamura yelled from their spots at the same time.
"Sorry, we would have been here earlier, but we had to wait for Temari to finish packing her make-up" said Ino as she rolled her eyes.
"Hey, you brought make-up, too" yelled Temari stepping out of the passenger seat of the car and stomped over to Ino.
"No, I brought a make-up bag" said Ino shoving the bag into Temari's face,"You brought a make-up store" said Ino pointing to the trunk that had to be tied down with rope.
"Shut-up slut" Said Temari poking Ino in the shoulder.
"Your the whore" said Ino.
"Bitch"
"No what, you need that make-up"
"Oh, no you didn't slut"
"Your the bigger slut"
"No you are"
"No you are"
"No you are"
"No you are"
(A/N: ok if your a true fanfic reader u would know its the same 2 ppl and it says 'said Ino' and then Temari talks and then Ino and then Temari again and then it keeps going like that, k good)
"Go Ino, kick her ass" Yelled Ari and Sera as Ino sucker punched Temari.
"Pimp slap her to show her who's the real slut, Temari" Namine and Namari yelled as Temari slapped Ino across the face.
Shikamaru and Gaara, finding the fight pointless, left the area to go by the other guys who found it pointless while Nakamura tried her best to break up the fight with help from Kiba. When they reached the porch they saw Sasuke was troubled by something.
"What? Itachi say his quote again" asked Shikamaru with his hands shoved deep into his green swim trunks.
"No, we're having seating probloms" stated Itachi simply.
"Seating probloms how?" asked Gaara crossing his arms.
"Well we ran outta cars" stated Sasuke frustrated.
"And seats in the cars" said Neji trying to keep cool and not get frustrated like Sasuke was.
"What are the seating arrangements so far" asked Shikamaru, not like he cared.
"So far in my car Namari is sitting in the passenger seat and Namine, Deidara and Kira are sitting in the back" said Itachi keeping his eyes on the sky and pretending to shoot the birds that passed overhead.
"In my car Mio's sitting in the passenger seat and Ari, Naruto and Lee are in the back and Sakura's sitting on the floor or something" said Sasuke with his fingers laced infront of his face.
"My cars got Sera in the passenger seat and Tenten, Mura and Kiba in the back" said Neji plainly.
"Wait you guys put Tenten, Sera and Neji in the same car, what about the rumor that Tenten liked Neji" said Shikamaru afraid of another fight like the one that Mura and Kiba were already trying to break up.
"It wasn't a rumor, but we got her over him" said Naruto finally joining the conversation.
”Wait, what about Koli and Choji” asked Shikamaru stopping Naruto.
“They drove ahead in Sakura’s car” said Naruto referring to the missing pink jeep.
"Anyway the problom is you have nowhere to put me, Gaara, Koli and those two" said Shikamaru pointing to himself, Gaara, TanRan and Temari and Ino who were still yelling threats from their seperate areas on the front yard.
"Yup" said Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi and Neji at the same time.
It was silent for about a few minutes before Gaara gave a sigh of impatience and spoke up to give his idea.
"Fine...I'll take my car with TanRan in the front and Shikamaru, Temari and Ino in the back" said Gaara almost horrified at the thought.

"Ok, thats the last thing we need...just to get it in the car now...but I don't wanna walk over there" Namine said to herself.
She didn't want to walk down there becuase one she was lazy and two she was afriad of getting cuaght up in a fight with Ari about who Shikamaru will end up with, and start a violent fight like last time. Last time wasn't that good since Ari sprained both her wrists and an ankle, and she gave Ari a black eye, and sprained both ankles. She shudderd at the thought since she could do nothing at all for a long time.
"Maybe I could get someone else to do it for me, wait everyone's doing something...Naruto's helping Ari and Sera's yelling at Neji...hey wait Sasuke's not doing anything" namine said to herself noticing that Sasuke was just watching everyone from the porch stairs.
"Hey Sasuke, heads up" Namine yelled as she tossed the medical kit Sasuke's way.
"Say wha-" was all Sasuke could get out before he was nailed in the head with the heavy, metal kit.
"Ohhhhhh...that had to hurt" Namine said wincing at the thought of the amount of pain that Sasuke was enduring at the moment.
"What the hell...Sasuke you alright" exclaimed Mio as she leaned out one of the windows of the Inuzuka house to her semi-concious boyfriend.
"I don't think so" said Shikamaru who didn't bother doing anything to help.
"You could help him Lazyass" Mio yelled to her lazy older brother.
"Nah, I'm good" said Shikamaru putting his hands behind his head and staring up at the clouds.
He got lucky though becuase his loving little sister Mio picked up a large suitcase and tossed it his way, but just missed him and only scaring him to death.
"Damn it...I missed" growled Mio and instead of attempting it again she shut the window violently.
"Hey don't break those windows" yelled Namari carrying one of the cases she had packed to car, unlike her lazy twin Namine.
"Shut-up" yelled Mio with flames in her eyes coming out the front door.
"Don't fuck with me right now" Namari yelled at the top of her lungs.
"...Uh I'm gonna check up on Sasuke okay bye" said Mio quietly and fast, afraid of Namari who was obviously in one of her moods.
"You might wanna keep out of Namari's way" whispered TanRan to a clueless Mio.
"Why" asked Mio becuase she wouldn't know since she had slept in and arrived late.
"Well Namari's mad becuase old man Hokage wouldn't let Konohamoru come with us and she wasn't too happy about that" TanRan whispered back and got an 'oooo' from the blue haired girl.
The two finally reached Sasuke who was still knocked out cold thanks to Namine. Mio sighed and grabbed a cold water bottle out of one of the coolers, and poured it on Sasuke's face. The freezing cold drink woke him up with a scream of sheer shock at the sudden drop in temperature.
"Ahhhhh...what the hell my head hurts and my face is cold what happened" asked Sasuke rather fast.
"You fainted on the set of Oprah now get the hell up" said Mio sarcastically.
"Oh aren't you the comedian" said Sasuke with a scowl standing up off the ground.
"Ok Sasuke's alive" TanRan yelled so everyone could hear, but no one really cared.
Sasuke scowled at everyone for not caring, and Mio, almost as if reading his facial features and his mind, smiled to him.
"If it makes you feel any better I cared at least" said Mio kissing his cheek(don't kill me fangirls) and walking away leaving Sasuke there to blush.

"Are we done yet" whined Sera getting really sick of carrying suitcases to cars and then trying to get them into the trunk of the cars.
"Don't worry, we'll be done in a sec" said Ari bringing the last of the suitcases.
"Thats good cause if I hafta carry one more suitcase, I'm throwing it at someone" said Sera getting mad.
Ari pretended to duck behind one of the trunks, and Sera just made a face to her and shoved her playfully.
"Stop being stupid, I didn't say I'd throw it at you...maybe Neji" said Sera helping Ari shove the last suitcase into the trunk.
"What about me" asked Neji who popped out of the fron seat to see what they were saying about him, but the two just luaghed and walked away.

"I'm so bored" Namine nearly cried since she had nothing to do and they still had to wait till Tenten was done checking Gaara's car and Sakura had to run home and return the megaphone.
Namine looked around trying to find something to do to pass the time. She could annoy Kiba, but she had done that so many times it wasn't fun anymore. She could confuse Mura since that was always fun, but then she remembered that Mura had started bringing pepper spray where ever she went. She could bug Shikamaru to start going out with Temari because she was sure she was so close before, but Ari would have a fit and annoy him to go out with Ino and he'd be stuck in the middle. Wait she could try annoying Ari and seeing if she liked Naruto.
"Hey Ari, do you like Naruto" Namine asked sitting down next to Ari and then quickly using her mind reading jutsu to see if she did.
"As a friend" said Ari as Namine got aggrivated since Ari had blanked her mind...yet again.
"Ah, damn it" said Namine trying again and getting aggrivated over and over again while Ari luaghed at the failed attempts(this reminds me of how you tried to hack into my site ShikaIno Grl, Namine, but my password is really long and you wouldn't know it).

"Guys, I'm back" said Sakura all jumpy arriving back at the Inuzuka's house.
"Oh joy" said Namari with her arms crossed still mad at old man hokage for not letting her bring Konohamoru.
"Oh come one Namine turn that frown upside down" said Sakura cheerfully with a smile.
"Buzz off or I'll give you a permanant frown" said Namari raising her fist and scaring Sakura away.

"Alright, Gaara's car is fine" said Tenten wiping the sweat off her forhead.
"Does that mean we're ready to go" asked Kira who was bored out of her mind.
"Yeah, we can go now" said Tenten getting the grease off her hands.
"Finally" yelled Kiba who was bored as well.
Everyone scrambled into the cars they were assigned in. of coarse it wasn't as easy as thought to be.
"Come on Sasuke, I know you wouldn't mind" said Sakura pulling at Sasuke's unbuttoned, blue T-shirt.
"I said no already so get lost Sakura" yelled Sasuke trying to get to his car, way from Sakura
"Come on Sasuke I know you want me to" said Sakura still pulling on Sasuke's shirt with puppy dog eyes.
"Listen Sakura bitch...Sasuke doesn't want you sitting on his lap so get lost or your going in the trunk" said Mio trying to pull Sakura off Sasuke.
"What do you mean, Sasuke loves me, but he's to shy to admit it" said Sakura forgetting all about Sasuke's shirt as he snuck away to get in the front seat of the car.
"Ya know what..." said Mio boiling over with anger.
"What" said Sakura putting her hands on her hips in a mocking type of tone.
"I guess your going in the trunk" said Mio grabbing Sakura's hand and dragging her towards the back of the car.
"Come on Mio, don't put her in the trunk" said Naruto who didn't like the idea of his team mate in the trunk.
"Yeah, you shouldn't be mean to Sakura" said Lee who had to help the girl he had a crush on.
Mio stood and stared at them, and would have left Sakura alone if it weren't for Sasuke and Ari waving like refs at a game, telling her they did not want her in the same car as them.
"Fine she can stay, but she sits on the floor and nowhere else.
"But the floor is uncomfertable" whined Sakura who Mio dropped on the ground.
"Keep whining and I won't listen to Naruto and your boyfriend" said Mio loudly and scaring Sakura into the backseat floor.
"Ok we can go now and Ari stop slamming your head on the car roof" said Sasuke as Ari pounded her head and fist into the roof muttering 'damn it' over and over again.
Ari crawled back into the seat holding head as the ehadache started to settle into her brain, as Sakura wimpered and whined about the uncomfertable floor and Naruto asked if Ari was okay, which she was not.

"God damn it shut-up" Gaara yelled into the backseat of his car to the two fighting girls.
"Come on you two are being stupid now...next person who fights or yells on this trip, I'm kicking them out of the car, while its moving" said TanRan who was getting extremly angry that her Gaara-kun was getting mad and that the two idiots wouldn't shut-up.
"No he likes me" yelled Temari over Shikamaru to Ino.
"No way he likes me, I'm on the same team as him and I've been friends with him since preschool" said Ino making a good point.
"...You know what...shut-up" said Temari to Ino, since she couldn't beat out that point.
"Ha, admit it he's mine" said Ino with a triumphant smile.
"Screw you Ino-pig" Temari yelled raising her fist to the long haired blonde.
"Go die Sand-Slut" said Ino raising her fist back to Temari.
"What a drag...hey TanRan can we please switch seats" Shikamaru begged the aggravated girl.
"Sorry Lazyass, but I wanna sit next to my Gaara-kun" said TanRan hugging Gaara as he twitched at the closeness.
"This sucks" whined Shikamaru as the two girls continued to fight over who he liked better.
"Can we please just get moving soon" said Gaara who's head was resting on the cold car window.
"No, cause we still got probloms in the other cars and i've only settled the one in Sasuke's car and your car" said Namine who was checking the cars for any probloms and had heard Gaara's question from Koli's open window.
"Damn ow damn ow damn ow" said Gaara like a broken record as he hit his head on the window as TanRan begged him to stop and Namine broke up the argument between Temari and Ino.

"Your doing it wrong" said Sera who was watching Neji look at and fix any engine probloms of the mazda.
"No I'm not" said Neji as he pulled nad fixed a few wires and oil things(no idea how to work a car).
"You missed a wire" said Sera pointing to an uncertain point in the engine.
"No...I didn't miss a wire" said Neji getting annoyed.
"Your still doing it wrong" said Sera as she watched Neji make mistakes that she thought she saw.
"You know if you know so much about ti then you fix it" said Neji pulling his head out from under the hood of the car and then making room for Sera who gladly took up the oppurtunity.
Sera worked at the engine for a few minutes before she pulled her head out from under the hood of the car and slamming the shimmering silver hood down, back into place.
"Alright Mura, start her up" Sera yelled to Mura who was leaning over the front seat by the keys, waiting for her cue.
"Ok" was the reply before the car roared to life.
"Well, lets go Mr. Mechanic" said Sera mockingly as she threw the rag she used to wipe the grease off her arms to Neji who was glaring at her.
"...So you made your point, big deal" said Neji throwing the rag into the drivers seat and getting inside.
"Well you guys seem ready" said Kira who leaned into drivers window as Neji and Sera argued over weather it was dumbluck that Sera got it working.
"Yeah we're good here sis" said Kiba who was sitting with his hands behind his head watching the argument like it was a TV show.
"Well we're ready to go ok" said Kira as she walked away to get into Itachi's car before he drove away.
"OK lets get going!" said Tenten excited about the trip and kicking Neji's seat to get him out of the argument.
The four cars were soon moving towards the highway, Itachi's car infront of the long line of cars, but a realization hit Namine.
"STOP"she yelled causing Itachi and everyone behind him to suddenly stop.
"What is it, Namine" asked Kira who turned off her headphones to figure out her sisters strange behavior.
"We forgot Deidara" she said as Itachi hit his forhead at his stupidity for forgetting his own friend.
All the cars quickly turned around and headed towards where Deidara and Itachi's hidden area and waited for Deidara to come out. They waited for about 15 minutes before everyone got restless and was ready to drag him out theirselves.
"Dei-Dei hurry up" Namine and Namari yelled out the window to the small abondoned shacks.
" I'm coming" came Deidara's irritated voice from somehwere inside the shacks.
Deidara just walked out the door of one of them and walked towards Itachi's car, where Namine had already moved Kira over to the middle. Namine though was being picky about who sat where and she wanted a window seat. So she opened the door, pushed Kira out and took Kira's spot. Deidara didn't notice and just sat in the middle as Kira ran around the car and took the other window seat next to Deidara. Once Kira was safely back into the car and listening to "Touchdown Turn Around" they sped off towards the highway and towards the beach.

To Be Continued....
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