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Birthday
1985-04-03
Gender
Female
Location
Flagstaff
Member Since
2005-01-11
Occupation
amature writer,artist,
Real Name
Thou shall not know
Personal
Achievements
getting the internet and updating
Anime Fan Since
7th grade
Favorite Anime
Inuyasha, Chobits, Tenchi,...
Goals
to finish stories and get a new job
Hobbies
drawing, writing and having fun
Talents
drawing & writing
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Tuesday, November 15, 2005
extremely happy.. comments and critique welcome
It's been a long time since I worte in this here old blog/journal. Anyways things have been going great and umm I have deciced to enter a contest, but I'm not sure that it's still going on righ now. ^^ Yeah that's me. always will be. I will work on my stories and update whenever I can. So here are three new poems that I worte rescently. Hope you like them. ^^
Ending
By: Lonedog
Trees sway to the breath of Mother Earth
Leaves dance as they descend to the carpeted terrain beneath
Colors of autumn blanket the U.S in a dazzling
Array of sunset and sunrise mixtures
Twilight enters
Stars peek, sparkle and dance
The stage is set
Kids are sent to bed, dreams emerge in their tired minds
Scenes from the day play like a late night movie
Smiles enter and exit
A thin stream rises and dissipates into the air scattering joyously
Laughter fills the silence
Jokes are heard through the night
A soft crackle is heard in the distance
One song comes to mind
Unheard and yet still heard softly singing in the ears of the young and old
Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
How I wonder what you are,
U p above the world so high,
Like a diamond in the sky.
The day draws to a close.
Autumn
By: Lonedog
ALLURING CHURNING COLORS
UBIQUTIOUS SPLENDER INSPRINNG
TUNES OF BIRD SONGS WAFTING IN THE
UNRIVALED NIGHT SKY
MESSERIZING NATURAL BEAUTY OF
NUMEROUS MYSTERIOUS WONDERS
(No title)
One by one leaf fall
As the sun sets
Branches stretch out
For one last drink of
Of the beams
Crawling into slumber
The leaves provide a
Natural blanket as the
Tiniest of living life
Closes their eyes
Each is a breath taking
Canvas of dazzling
Paintings teaming with
Warm cooling colors of the
Sun sets amazing glow
Thin smoke rises like
A snake rising forth
To a charmers call.
Stars rise up gracefully, peeking
They glimmer, making
The scene all the more wonderful.
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