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Wednesday, March 23, 2005


Spring Break!
Wooo!! Spring Break!!! Wait... not so woo.... I have rehearsal tomorrow! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Curse yopu Mr. Socki!! lol. I'm making omelets tomorrow! (finally) I think the last time I did it, was like... a couple months.... But then I go to ma dad's house! woooo!! wait.... no cape May... no!!!!! lol.... this is getting long.....
I'm writing a poem, if ya wanna do some critism, go ahead, as long as it is contructive:
I wander deep in the cold bowels of forgotten hatred
That's seeped into my deepest fears.
My wordy footsteps echo in the corners of the cold, dark mind,
A warning to those who'd dare mock or follow me
I've dug far beneathe this earthy shell I've dubbed submission
Into a private cell
Into a private torment
Down into a personal hell
Down into a personal eternity.
Your words merely reflecting back at a sombre gaze
Or simply pass me by as I'm rooted to my spot on this path of time
Rooted in my own depressing rhymes
My inky black children
That once looked up to me, as well as I look to them
Have become an omnipresent mockery to an impure soul
A cage for the hopeless
the armless, the coldest
Till my world comes crashing down
And the darkest bowels meet cold steel of regret.

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