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Saturday, December 2, 2006


Story.
Well I wrote a really depressing story... . I was hurting inside and I had to get it out so I wouldn't implode. It is VERY depressing. .. .T.T very sad and very drepressing so ha u have been warned!!!

So just so everyone knows. I am NOT DEPRESSED ANYMORE. Just tired from all the fighting.


An Angel wearing a pure white robe with gold ensigna with a golden shash across her body.
A pure silver helment that sparkled as the light gently caressed it, adonerd her head.
The Angel also held a giant sword it also sparkled but the cold steal matched the cold heart of its carrier.
The Angel moved slowly forward to the cages where the two lovers were caged.

They new their time together was coming to a end.

They began to reach for eachother their strength renewd. Their middle figures touched but they wanted more and they reached and reached till it was too late.
The Angel was upon the boy with sword in hand she stabed the boy. Once, Twice, but he kept reaching for the love of his life that was crying and screaming his name.
Three times. He was becoming weak. Four. Five. Six. Their middle figures no longer touched but he still reached as his body sank to the floor. Seven. Eight. Nine. He told her he loved her one final time. When she struck him for the tenth time her sword and the cold metal bars that had held him captive disinigrated and became like dust in the wind.

The Angel then reached up into the sky and above her hand came a ball of light that fashioned itself into a lengthy and very sharp spear. It was the girls turn to pay for her crimes. She began to back up to the back of her cage but it was too late.
The angel launched the spear with such speed that no blood was spilled until she and her new limb hit the wall.
She cried and twisted and tried to pull it out of the wall and out of her aching and tired body.

After a while she began weaken and began to give up on life as the thing protruded out of her young body.
As the angel just stood their in silence watching her through that cold cold metalic helmet.
The girls vision began to blur but as she looked to her love still laying on the floor in a bloody mess his arm still outstreched. She saw his chest rise.
She thought impossible but she continued to watch and soon she no longer cared if she was crazy there was a chance that he was still alive.
Since the spear was going to permently part of the wall she grabed the spear and began to pull herself . .away from the wall. She was shaking it was more than any eighteen year old body should be able to could take. Blood dripped to the floor, she was dying, yet still she pulled on. Finally she reached the end of her new capture. She put both hands on end and pushed. As she fell to the floor the angel disinigrated as did her cage.

She had just pulled herself halfway across the cage which ment she was half way to him. She looked up and there he was still laying there. She began to crawl. It was slow and even harder than pullin herself along the spear. As she crawled and got closer she touched his hand and held it. Then she touched his hair and his face. It took all her strength to sit up but she manged.

Then she gently put his head in her lap and caressed his hair. Her tears messhed with her blood as they traveld down her now distored body. His face was soon soaking wet. So she tried to dry him but nothing seemed to be working. It was almost as if he was.... ..melting. She soon found to her horror that he WAS melting. Her figures became mear strainers as she tried to hold on to his dark brown hair. His face went from pale to a light shade of pink as he began to blend in with the blood. Soon there was almost nothing left of the man she had loved.

She was on her hands and knees shifting through the water, trying to find him in this puddle of blood and tears. She tried in vain. Her hair once light brown was almost balck because of all the caked on blood. Her bright blue eyes were red from all the tears she had shed everything was red just plain painful red and as she looked down her hair fell to cover her face and as she stared at her own reflection in the calming water she not only saw her reflection but the reflection of something else.

When she turned around to face the angel she only had time to read the red giant read letters on the sash before she crashed down into the puddle that was now a cold deep dark ocean. She reached for the light but the light didn't try to reach for her back and the light began to fade until it was just a twinkling speck.

Then. .. there was nothing.

Poor girl.All she ever wanted was for some one to love her.

The End.


Alright yes a I kno I have bad spelling sentence grammer blah blah blah and yes I kno I never said wat was the sash and thats so u can use ur imagination on wat it says. So ya.. . umm thats it. I guess. So ya ok bye.

Have a good day.

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