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Sunday, June 27, 2004


   just a made up story. (i added my friends names it ok)
Ok the story begins with you a slave in Egypt. Your name is Gabby, and your ages is 18, you have drity blode hair and green eyes. But no one knows what you look like because you hide yourself from everyone. They say who ever lays eyes on you say you look like a goddess from the heavens. than it was said that a goddess from the heavens gave you beauty beyond any of the gods and mortals, and the gods would become so angered by this. They even sometimes tried to kill you but the goddess who gave you beauty also knew this would happen so she put like a magic sheild around you. So it would protect you from any harm , but no one could see the shield not even you. Oh and you are also the slaves leader like someone to look up and protect them too. but they dont even know what you look like as well. you always a white cape over you so know one can see you. than one day when you were in your room some of your guards came in and said that "the pharaoh is going to kill one of the salves because they stoped working on the pyramids." (that is not fair to do that but back to the story). so you told them that you would go to the pharaoh and tell him to take your life instead of the slaves. So this is your first time going to see the pharaoh and you fell a little bit scared but you dont want a nother preson of your kind dead. So you saw the pharaohs guards just a but to kill the slave when you yelled out "STOP!!!", and ran over to the slave and untied him. that you saw the pharaoh come off his throne and you saw what he looked liked had gold tips and brown at the bottom and he had brown eyes. Than you hear him say in a angery voice"WHY DO YOU STOP MY GUARDS FROM KILLING THIS MAN?!". Than you say i am Gabby and i wont let you kill a man who was tied and wanted a brake!!". Than he said in a half angery and half nice voice "Well i am Cameron and you know that your people can not stop from making my pyramids." than you told him "well than you will have to kill me instead than" so than Cameron said "so be it but you will have to take your cape off first." Thanyou say "why can i just have the cape on when i die?" than he said "well than i well make my GUARDS take the cape off you than" so the guards start coming at you and one of them grabbed yor arm and than the other one took off your cape. Than everyone looked at you amazed because they saw how pretty you were. Than Cameron saw you and said "Guards take her to my room i need to talk to her ALONE"
WELL WRITE MORE LATER, AND LEAVE A COMMENT ABOUT THE STORY SO FAR!!!

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