Friday, May 20, 2005

fourth story
Chapter 4, Not the right battle

Kai leaned against the wall in the locker room. Tala and the rest of the team sat at a table tampering with their blades. Their match against Tyson's team was up first. I've never been so tired before. I didn't fall asleep last night until 3:00 in the morning. Kai tired his best not to yawn, but he couldn't help himself. Tala and the others looked at him. Kai saw them looking at him so he quickly closed his mouth and closed his eyes.
"You were up late last night weren't cha, training right?" Tala asked.
Kai didn't answer him.

Tyson ran out of his locker room. I can't believe Hiro not letting me battle today. This is the match I've been waiting for. My match against Kai. He can't do this to me. Why let Kenny and Daichi.
Tyson ran with his head down through the hallways. Tyson turned a corner and ran right into some one. Tyson fell backwards on his butt.
"Hey watch were going," said a voice.
Tyson rubs his head about to say something rude when he looked at the person he ran into. A girl sat on her butt rubbing her head. Wow she's beautiful. She stood up. She wears a long dark red drench coat and black baggy cargo pants with black boots. She also wears a red tub-top with black gloves.
"Sorry," Tyson said.
She looked down at him.
"Your Tyson aren't you former team mate of the bladebreakers and now leader of BBA revolution?" she asked.
She put out her hand and helped him up.
"Yeah," Tyson answered.
Wow, some how I feel like I met her from somewhere.
"What wrong you seem up set over something?" she asked.
"My couch let me go up in the next match against Kai. He feels that I am not strong enough. So he's letting Daichi and Kenny go up instead," Tyson said.
"Well you did lose your last match terrible," she said.
"Hey it wasn't me Daichi lost to," Tyson said.
"But who was the one who was overconfident in winning," she said.
She walked past Tyson.
"You should give your teammates a little create, you’re always hogging the spot light. Is it about time to let Daichi and Kenny shine in the spot light," she said.
"But I've been waiting for this match for along time," Tyson said.
"Don't worry, you'll get your match against Kai soon or latter. Right now you are too weak to face Kai. Right now you should go and support your teammates like a good friend that’s what I'm going to do right now," she said.
"What do you know?" Tyson shouted.
Tyson turned around, but no one was there. Where did she go? I must be going crazy I need to get out of here. Tyson ran down the hallway. Around the corner stood the girl. No worries he'll come back.

The DJ announced the next match against Blitzkrieg boys and BBA revolution. First he announced the Blitzkrieg boys. Tala, Spencer, Bryan, and Kai walked out. Kai threw his head back to yawn. Suddenly Kai felt he was being watched and not by the crowd. He looked up behind him. There at the very top stood Raven. Kai noticed that she wasn't wearing her bandages anymore and she wasn't hiding herself under a cloak. What is she doing here? The DJ then announced BBA revolution. The entire team walked out but Tyson. The crowd started questioning where Tyson was.
"Where is Tyson?" Kai asked himself.
First up was Kai vs. Daichi. They both approached the dish. Kai glared at Hiro. I believe he has something to do with this. The match started. Once there blades hit in mid air.
Kai's blade hit Daichi's and flew outside the dish toward Hiro. The blade flew right past Hiro's right ear. The blade came flying back towards Kai's hand. Take that as a fare warning if you try anything like that again. Kai walked off and sat down at the bench. With in 30 seconds Daichi had won, because Kai forfeited. Kai looked up and saw Raven smiling at him. What are you smiling at?
(The next match was Kenny vs. Tala. Kenny was nerve. Kenny lost match, but only to find a secret in Tala's wolborg. So he gave that information to Daichi so when he battles Tala for the third round. Daichi used that information and won the battle. All long Tyson was at the sidelines watching the match.)

Kai walked down the hallway after leaving Tala in the stadium.
"Oh, don't look so down Kai, though you always look like that. You'll get your match against Tyson soon," said a voice.
"How do you know?" Kai asked.
Kai turned around and saw Raven leaning against a wall. She looks much different without the cloak and all the dirt from our battle.
"Don't know, but I have a feeling. Its destiny," Raven answered.
"Destiny," Kai laughed.
She stood straight up and got in his face.
"You saying you don't believe in destiny?" Raven asked.
"Yeah, Destiny hasn't done anything for me," Kai answered.
Kai turned away from her and walked down the hallway. Then how did you and I meet, luck. She shook her head and ran after Kai. She jumped out in front of Kai. Kai didn't stop walking so she started to walk backwards.
"How did you get here? To Spain" Kai asked.
"I hitched a ride on your plane, I m planning on going to all the tournaments," Raven answered.
"Great, so that means I can't get ride of you then," Kai said.
Raven shook her head like she didn't care.
"So where are you going now?" Raven asked.
"Trying to get away from you," Kai answered.
"You don't mean that," Raven said.
"Your right, I'm "going" to get away from you," Kai said.
Raven continued to walk backwards when she crashed into some one.
"Tyson are you alright," said Kenny.
She got up and saw that she ran into Tyson and his team.
"Nice running into you again Tyson," Raven said.
Tyson pushed himself off the ground.
"Hey it's you from earlier," Tyson said.
"I saw you came back to cheer your teammates on," Raven said.
Tyson team stared at him.
"Tyson introduce us to your friend?" Hilary asked jealously.
"I ran into her in the hallway earlier," Tyson answered.
"Your pretty," Daichi said al starry eyed
Daichi started to drool.
"Daichi you alright?" Kenny asked.
"He's just sick in the head," Hilary said.
Hilary punched him in the head. Raven laughed. Suddenly she focused her intensions on Hiro. Hiro noticed her eyes on him. Glaring at him.
"You must be the couch, it's nice to meet you," Raven Said.
She put out her hand. He Hesitated a minute before shaking her hand.
"Nice meet you, uh," Hiro said.
"Raven. The name is Raven," Raven said.
She tightened her grip on his hand. They released each other’s. Hiro shook his hand. What was that? It felt so wired and evil.
She looked back. She could only see Kai's outline in the shadows. Best not to call him out after what just happened.
"Hey is some one back there?" asked Tyson.
Raven saw Kai back further into the shadows.
"No one," Raven answered quickly.
They looked at her.
"Well I have to get going so I'll see you later. Oh and Tyson maybe you and I you can have a match in the future," Raven said.
"You're a blader?" Tyson asked.
"Whose aren't these days," Raven answered.
Raven turned around and ran down the hallway.
"See' a!" Raven shouted.
"Bye," Tyson shouted.
"Let's go," Hilary said.
The team started to walk off, but Hiro stood there. He stared into the darkness were she ran off. He looked at his hand. Raven stood behind Kai in the Darkness looking over his shoulder at Hiro. Hiro looked down the hallway again then walked away.
"What did you do?" Kai asked.
"Nothing just spooked him a little," Raven answered.
"Your one weird person," Kai said.
Kai and Raven walked out of shadows, and down the hallway.
"Are you ever going to leave me no?" Kai asked.
"No way, you're way too much fun leave alone," Raven answered.

Can't think of comment for this one *hits head against keyboard*

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third story
Chapter 3, Thank You

Kai leaned against a tree. Finally all her wounds are cleaned and bandaged. The girl lay on the ground with bandages around her wounds: her head, arm, and ankle. What Kai could see is that she wearing she wore a little black tub-top underneath with black baggy pants. I had almost used my entire scarf on her wounds. His wounds were not as bad as hers.
Kai couldn't think straight. All he could think of was her shouting at him. She says that we know each other, but I don't remember her, heck I can barely remember my own past. Though I feel something familiar from her. I don't know what it is, but I don't feel alone around her.
Suddenly she started to twist and turn. She began to moan.
"Hey girl, are you alright?" Kai asked.
Kai walked over to her and kneeled next to her.
"Hey?" Kai asked.
Kai put his hand on her shoulder. Her eyes popped open and she threw her fist out in the air. Her eyes widen when she saw what she had done. Her fist was in Kais face. The whole forest went quite. Kai fell backwards.
"Kai are you alright," she asked.
She got up and looked down at Kai. Kai put his hand to his face and shock his head.
"Yeah," Kai answered.
Kai sat up quickly and almost hit faces with her. For a minute they stared at each other. She got up and brushed off the dirt on her. She then noticed that there were bandages around her wounds. Kai stood up. She was only wearing a tub top and baggy cargo pants with her black gloves.
"What are you thinking bandaging up my wounds? All I could know that you may be a pervert!" she shouted.
"Hey, I didn't do anything to violate you. I only bandage up your head, arm, and ankle!" Kai shouted.
*snort* She turned around from Kai.
"Anyways, what time is it?" she asked.
Kai pointed to the clock near the fountain through the trees. She didn't notice until now that they were at the spot Kai hit her into the trees. Did he carry me all the way here? It was past midnight.
"Do remember what happened before you past out. What you said to me?" Kai asked.
She turned around. Kai was leaning up against a tree.
"Sort of," she answered.
"You shouted at me at how you had a terrible past and you remembered me from somewhere," Kai said.
"Sorry about that I just lost it, but it is all true," she said.
"Sadly I can't remember you or my own past that well," Kai said.
"I specked that much," she said.
They were quite for at least 10 minutes.
"Raven" she said.
Kai looked at her.
"What did you say?" Kai asked.
"My name is Raven. Raven Phoenix. That’s one thing I can remember," Raven said.
"Oh," Kai said.
"Is that all your going to say?" Raven shouted.
Kai didn't say anything.
"You know you should head back to your hotel and get some rest for your next match," Raven said.
"Yeah, right," Kai said.
"Not much to say is there," Raven said.
Kai got up and walked past her.
"Are you going to be alright?" Kai asked.
"Yeah… Maybe I'll see you around," Raven said.
"Maybe….So long," Kai said.
Kai walked through the woods and out of the park. What's wrong with me I never felt so lonely though I'm used to being lonely. Raven stood in the woods alone and cold. *laugh* I'm alone again. With him near I felt so happy.
Kai arrived in front of the hotel. He looked back. I hope she'll be fine. As soon as Kai arrived at the hotel he was told to get ready for their plane to Rome. Kai looked back before getting on the plane. I wonder if I'm going to see her again. Whatever. The plane took off for Rome.

Ok you may say "Hey she put her name in the story" well my name isn't really Raven it's really Rochelle. Everyone beside my family calls me Raven. Raven Phoenix is a name I always use for a hot chick kicking some guy's ass. The name is from my other story about vampires. Please don't call me Rochelle lets keep it Raven okay.

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Thursday, May 19, 2005

sceond story
Chapter 2, Clash of the Dranzers

It was nearly ten a' clock at night as Kai walks the streets alone. Who was that person? Kai remembers when they whispered in his ear. "Meet me tonight around 10:30 near the parks fountain. There we will find out whose Dranzers is better, mine of course.
I don't even know why I'm going to meet them. I have no deal with them. Mine deal is against Tyson, but something about them having another Dranzer bothers me. I guess this can be a warm up. Kai grins. Though I must know who or what is under that cloak, I won't sleep until I know.

"10:30, where is that jerk," they said.
The cloak person sits on the rim of the fountain starring at a big clock in the park. They tap there foot on the ground. No worries he will be here, but what if he doesn't care. He can't put down a challenge, but he might not show cause I didn't sound convincing. They jumped up and started to walk back and fourth.
"I swear if he doesn't show up I'm going to kill that," they shouted.
"And what would you do to me," Kai interrupted.
Kai stood on the other side of the fountain. They looked at him in embarrassment. *cough*
"You’re here I didn't think you were going to show," they said.
"I wasn't going to, but I had to get my practice, so you will do," Kai said.
"This is going be more then just practice," they said.
Kai grabbed his blade and snapped it on to his launcher. They pulled out a red blade. I've never seen a blade like that before. They then pulled out their launcher. A black and blue launcher. A simple one, a lot like Kai's. They had a long red easy hand rip cord.
"Won't that cloak get in the way," Kai said.
Kai aims his blade at her.
"Only if you defeat me I will show myself to you," they said.
They aimed their blade at Kai. The wind bowed through the park. The moon was high in the sky behind Kai. I can almost see their face. (From their nose down to their chin.) As soon as the wind stopped they both launched their blades.
Their blades collide in the air. Kai knocked they're blade back. They're blade flew past them missing there face.
"How was that," Kai said.
"Not bad, I didn't think you're going to hit with such fourth. I won't underestimate you again," they said.
*Battle cry*
"Go Dranzer!" Kai shouted.
Kai's blade trusted forward.
"Now Dranzer," they shouted.
Just Kai's blade came close to they're It disappeared.
"What!" Kai shouted.
Kai looked around as his blade stayed in one place. They're blade and they disappeared. Where did they go?
"If you can't find me then your worst then I thought," they said.
Kai turned around only to be hit in the face by a foot. Kai hit the ground hard as his blade did the same landing next to him still spinning.
"I didn't think you sucked that bad. I actually thought you were going to put up a better fight then that," they said.
They stood the place Kai was in last with her blade next to them. Kai slowly stood up.
"You're underestimating me again, I won't go down that easily," Kai said.
Before Kai could straighten himself out he lunge himself at them. He so fast all of sudden. They jumped up in the air dodging him. They looked down. What? Where did he go? They looked around in mid air. Where is he? They looked behind them then back. Kai appeared in front of them. He got me I can't move in mid air. He raised his fist over his head and hit them right in the stomach good. *Scream*
They flew right for the wood in the park crashing into trees and bushes. (As did their blade. If you don't understand what's going on. The blades react to the movement of the blader.)
Kai landed on a broken branch. A cloud of dust surrounds the area they hit.
"You wanted to play rough so I did!" Kai shouted.
Kai spit some blood to the side. Kai started to here something laughing in the dust.
"Now that’s the kind of fighting I like," they shouted.
The dust started to clear. They stood in a pile of dirt and ruble them and their blade. They had dirt all over them self. Their right sleeve was ripped from shoulder down. Such a skinny arm, no muscle
"You were probably hoping my hood was down weren't cha," they said.
"Sort of," Kai said.
Kai could see a little shine in their eyes. He threw off his scarf behind him.
"Let's go," they said.
They jumped up at Kai. Kai jumped off the branch. They jumped at Kai again but missed as Kai hit the ground. Kai tried to kick them but they jumped back. For what seemed like hours they ran through the forest dodging each other and hitting each other with little hits. Their blades danced around them imitating them. Who is this person I feel, like I know them from somewhere. Kai, your great blader and I've never faced anyone like you before. Somehow I feel some connection between us. No matter who wins I still will show you what I am, *laugh* I bet you didn't think I was a…
Kai stopped at a hill. Where did they go? I lost tract of them. Kai's blade dances around his feet.
"Gotcha!" voice shouted.
They flew out of the bush at Kai. Kai looked behind him.
"No wait!" Kai shouted.
Kai threw out his hands locking hand with them.
"What are you doing?" they asked.
Kai gave them an unusually look.
"What?" they asked.
"We're about to fall down a really steep hill," Kai answered.
"Oh," they said
Kai fell first fallowed by them. Their blades tumbled down the hill also. They both kept there hands locked for some reason. The moon disappeared behind the clouds. When they got to the bottom the cloak one was on top of Kai. They threw Kai's hands away from theirs. And threw their fist at his face. Kai moved his head to the side. They're fist hit the ground. Kai flipped them over so now that he was now on top. Kai threw his fist up ready to punch them. The moon then appeared behind the clouds.
Kai stops just before he hits their face. They're hood is off. A girl. I should of known by her movements and voice.
"What is it?" she asked.
Kai lead back a little still on top of her.
"You’re a girl," Kai answered.
"So what. Your guard is down," she said.
She pushed Kai off of her and jumped on him. She pinned him to the ground with her legs and hands. She flipped her head to get her short black hair out of her face. She put her face in Kai's.
"Now you can't get up," she said.
"Why didn't you tell me you were a girl?" Kai asked.
Kai struggle to get up, but it was no use.
"Cause I felt like it and I wanted to mess with you," she answered.
Kai couldn't help but star into her grayish blue eyes.
"I thought at least you would've thought I was beautiful girl," she said.
"I had a feeling by your movements and when you torn your sleeve. Girl yes, but beautiful I don't know. You're no supermodel," said Kai.
She glared at Kai; she threw her head back and hit him hard in the chest with her head. *Cough* Kai gagged.
"Watch your tongue boy," she said.
Kai struggled again.
"Are you going to let me or not?" Kai asked.
"I don't you were really rude to me," she answered.
She smiled at him in a devilish look. Suddenly they both heard clinging sounds. They both turned their heads. Both of there blades rolled down the hill and land next to them. They both stopped spinning.
"A tie," they both whispered.
"I'll ask again, would you get the hell off of me. You're crushing my wounds!" Kai shouted.
"Oh fine, I was comfortable," she complained.
She jumped off him quickly. Kai got up slowly examining his wounds. They were fighting for about an hour and were both cut, bruised, and bleeding. Kai looked at his clothes. Great I'm going to have to get a new pair. He looked at her. She was about the same as him. He hadn't noticed before until now that her entire cloak was ripped up pieces. It was barely hanging on her. He could only tell she was wearing baggy pants.
"What are you starring at?" she demanded.
Kai blushed.
"Nothing," Kai answered.
Kai pick up his blade and hers.
"Hey don't touch that!" she shouts.
She walks up to Kai and grabs her blade, and turns around.
"Nevaeh Doesn't like being held by wondering hands," she said.
"Nevaeh?" Kai said.
"Oops" she said.
She turns around and faces Kai. Kai had a very irritated look on his face. She started to back slowly.
"That’s not blue Dranzer is it?" Kai ask.
"Well it can be if you want it to be. Say I have to go somewhere way over there," she said.
She turned around and started to walk away. A hand grabbed her shoulder and spun her around.
"What going on? Are you trying to tell me this was just a put on? You lied about having a blue Dranzer," Kai shouted.
She pushed Kai away and slapped him across the face. Kai put his hand to his face.
"You don't understand I spent my whole life as nothing. I don't have a childhood because I don't remember anything that happened to be. All I can remember is me being on the street when I was 10 years old. All I remember is that my parents died when I was 5 years old and you. Somehow for years I would often dream of a boy yelling at me to run and then hearing a gun shot then I see you just standing there. When I was 10 years old I remember holding a picture of you. Then when I saw you on TV with the bladebreakers in Russia I new I had to find you. Do you know how hard it is to find you? Well it’s very hard. I new you wouldn't want to come willingly so I had to trick you!!" she shouted.
Kai was to in shock to speak. Less in a minute she spoke her entire past right to my face.
"I'm sorry Kai. I didn't mean to shout," she whispered.
She wobbled from foot to another and then she fell forward.
"Hey!" Kai shouted.
Kai fell to his knees letting her fall on him. Kai put her in his arms and looked at her. She fainted from exhaustion. Kai picked her up and her blade and walked up the hill into the woods.

Ah how touching *tear*. There'll be a lot of that. I got the name Nevaeh from my mom, its heaven spelled backwards.

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Wednesday, May 18, 2005

story of beyblade
This is taking place during the tournament in beybalde G revolution. When every one split up on there own teams. Don't mind my spelling or grammar. I know it's terrible. I wrote this "Fan Fiction" one day when I was board. So I thought I should put all my fantasy of beyblade on paper. I might have the matches mixed up a little and the places they go to also. If you know what is what please do tell me. *Sighs Kai*
Hope you enjoy!

Chapter 1, Mysteries shadows

"Tyson, hey Tyson your blade is glowing," said Hilary.
"What?" asked Tyson.
Tyson looks down at his dragoon on the table. A bright blue glow comes from the center of the blade.
"Hey mine is too," said Daichi. A bright yellow light comes from Daichi blade also.
"I've never seen anything like this before," said Kenny.
Tyson picks up his blade and stairs into it.
"Maybe dragoon is hungry," said Daichi.
Daichi reaches for a rice ball. Hilary grabs his hand.
"Dacihi you idiot," said Hilary.
"Tyson are you alright?" asked Kenny.
Tyson gazes into the light. Everybody crowds around him.
"Tyson, earth to Tyson anybody home," said Hilary.
Hilary pokes him on the head. Suddenly Tyson jumps up and run to the door. He swings open the door.
"Nobody's here," said Tyson.
"Tyson are you alright?" asked Kenny.
"I thought some one was at the door," answered Tyson.
"What is going on, you guys should be training," said a voice.
Hiro stands in the hallway.
"You're match against White Tiger X is up in a half an hour," said Hiro.
"Yes surer! Big brothers are such a pain," whispered Tyson.
"What was that," demanded Hiro.
Tyson looks at Dacihi and sees him holding his blade. Both of their blades had stopped glowing. I know someone was out side our door and dragoon could feel it to.

Ray sits cross-legged on a bench (meditating). His team stands around talking.
"I can't wait for the match Lee," said Mariah.
"I know, I just can’t sit still," said Lee.
Lee stands up on the table.
"Lee get down you may break something," said Kevin.
"I'm going to wipe the floor with Tyson," said Lee.
Ray opens his eyes and glares at Lee. Lee could feel ray cold eyes on him.
"Remember Lee I'm the one who is going to fight Tyson, got it," said Ray.
Lee gets off the table and walks over to ray.
"I know. I just meant as in our team is going to wipe the floor with him," says Lee.
"Ray. Your blade is glowing," said Gary.
Ray and Lee look at Ray's Driger glowing on the table a green glow.
"Ray is that a new trick of yours?" asked Kevin.
"I wish Kevin," said Ray.
Suddenly Driger stopped glowing.
"What was that?" asked Mariah.
"I don't know," answered Ray.
Everybody was quite for a few seconds.
"Lets get back to training, our match is in 20 minutes," said Ray.
They all nod their heads. Rays picks up his blade and concentrates on it. Maybe Driger knows about our match against Tyson and his team is up next.

Max lies on a bench staring up at the ceiling. Tyson and Ray's match is up next. I wish I was the one facing Tyson.
"What are doing Max," said a voice.
Max sits up. Rick leans against a locker.
"We have a match today if didn't forget. Against Barthez Battalions," said Rick.
"I know. I just like to relax before a big match instead a using up all my energy," smiled Max.
Rick snorts. Max smiles and gets his blade of his pocket. I know you can't wait to go against Tyson, Draciel. Draciel starts glowing a purple glow.
"Max what's up with your blade," asked Rick.
"I don’t know," answered Max.
Whatever it' is, I feel something nice about it. Suddenly Draciel stopped glowing. Max and Rick stare at each other. The door opens.
"Hey you guys, what are you doing?" asked Michel.
"Nothing," answered Max
"Max was there just a person here with you guys?" asked Emily.
"No, why?" asked Max.
"Cause there was a person just standing outside the door," answer Eddy.
"What did they look like?" asked Max.
"Couldn't tell, they had a large black cloak over them, but they're hand was on the door," answer Emily.
Max looked down at his blade. Max looks up at Rick to see him glaring down at his Draciel. Who ever that was, Draciel felt something from them and so did I.

On top of the stadium stood Kai. He watched as the crowds started to gather into the stadium. Kai's scarf flapped in the wind. He started to think of when Tyson confronted him the hallway. All I care about is going up against Tyson and winning my title of being the best. I won't lose.
"Tyson," whispered Kai.
Kai pulls out his Dranzer. We will get our revenge we deserver. Dranzer started to glow a bright red. What is this? This glow it feels familiar and warm. Dranzer light started to glow brighter.
"Dranzer" said Kai.
The light grew so intense that Kai dropped his blade. Kai watched as his blade rocked back and fourth until it stopped. The bright red light seems to point behind Kai. Kai turned around. A dark shadow stood in the light. A person in a long black cloak. The bright light from Dranzer stopped glowing.
"I finally found you," they said.
"Who are you?" demanded Kai.
The cloak person walks toward Kai.
"I'm just fan. Kai Hiwatari," they answered.
How did they know my last name? Kai couldn't move as they came closer. They reached out with blacked gloved hands. (A lot like Kai's.) They put there hands on his shoulders. They were a just a little shorter then Kai. They're face was only inches in front Kai's face, but Kai still couldn't make out their face.
"Actually, I'm just wondering blader looking for the one who possess the red Dranzer," they said.
"The red Dranzer," said Kai.
"I have the blue Dranzer," they said.
Kai's eyes widen. They leaned over and whispered something into Kai's ear. Kai got his strength back and swings his fist at them. They jump back a few feet in the air and land perfectly on the ground.
"Technically, My Dranzer looks nothing like your big Phoenix. Mine is more like a dragon, they just have the same names as each other," they said.
Kai picks up his blade.
"Remember what I said Kai, and you better accepts or else," they said.
They turn around and run off they stadium. Kai runs over and looks down. They're gone. Kai stands up. Who was that? Who ever they are I feel something familiar from them. Kai looks down his Dranzer. Though Nothing will distractive me from my match with Tyson.
(Tyson and his team go up against Ray's team. Due to Tyson and Dacihi's lack of teamwork they lose against Ray and Lee in a Two on Two match. The second match is Kai's team and against F dynasty. Both Tala and Kai win their rounds. The last match was against Max's team and the Barthez Battalions. The match doesn't goes good due to the Barthez Battalions cheating and making Max's team look bad though they won the match)

Anyways that’s only the first chapter hope you liked it. Actually I got the idea putting this up on otaku by another person on otaku who put her "Fan Fiction" of beyblade up. Her name is BeybladeIsSoCool you should read hers too. Anyways this story is mostly about Kai and someone else. Just thought I should put that down. Please comment.

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Wednesday, May 11, 2005

beybalde
okay i finaly came up with something to put on this site. i ask to anyone who is a beyblade fan. have any one seen the movie ferce battle. i must know. all i know is that i'm the only who has seen it so far.
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