Saturday, October 6, 2007

Im back......with an update! ha ha

Ok....For those who commented and told me to stay and not delete this account, I thank you so....I dont know what got over me, sorry.....can you forgive me? :sob: I hope you do!!! YupYup!!! uh-huh!!

For those who did, I am so glad!!! Hugs for you all!!!!! Also, you get a free sticker. *hands you a sticker*

updating on story!!!!! ok.....this will be sorta long, so imbrace yourself....But first disclamers!!!!

1. I am not calling this FF of NaruHina mine.
2. I do not take credit of Naruto or Hinata, that belongs to the creator of this series.
3. This FF belongs to Brant Kogasu on Narutofan fourms.
4. the person who is posting this on their site (he got permission) is Sword Man on Narutofan fourms.
5. If you want to keep this alive comment!!!
6. It contains *NAH NAH* if you know what i mean, so look away children!
7. Hi. :)
8. Enjoy!!

part 10...

This chap is HOT!!!!!

(yes, this is the previous chapter, so if you still remeber what happen lasted. scroll down....Also, A warning to those who cant handle NAh Nah....LOL so look away!!! Protect your innoce!! is that spelled right? oh well....on with the story!!! Whoot!)

“Don’t worry, this village will always be your home.” It was the First Hokage, the man revered not only for his abilities, but for his heart. He was talking to a young boy no more than twelve, the boy's tears sparkled in his fiery red and orange eyes. “Your destiny is with them, they can help you with your… special abilities more than we can.”

“But I don’t want to leave, my friends are here. I want to live here forever.” His tears began to fall down his face, his lower lip quivered but he fought back his torrent of emotions.

“It’s not goodbye my young friend, you can come back whenever you want. You have a Konoha soul so when you return you will be welcomed with open arms.”

“But…” A ninja dressed in blue patted him on the back. His blonde hair fell in front of his right eye, his left eye was the color of the sea and sparkled as if the sun danced off of the ocean’s waves. He had a genuine smile, one that calmed the young warrior and helped ease the tears.

“We’ll be back kid, and guess what.” He wiped a tear out from under Atohi’s eye, “The sooner we train you and the harder you work, the sooner you can come back to see your friends. So the faster we get going the sooner you get to come back here.” Atohi nodded, took one last look at his Hokage, then turned and walked with the man in blue into a thick fog.

“Hey kid, I want to show you something I’ve been working on, hold on tight.” With that, the blonde man jumped into the mist faster than the strike of a snake.

“He will get training from people like himself, this is all I can do for him. Good luck Atohi, you’ll always be my star pupil.” The Hokage turned and walked toward town, “I’ll see you again, someday.”

* * *

“Naruto, come quick!”

It was the loudest Naruto had ever heard Hinata speak, Naruto woke up and immediately ran towards the noise. She was deep into the castle, the part they hadn’t yet explored. A mix of excitement and fear filled his gut as he wondered what she found.

“Where are you? I can’t see through the mist.” In his excitement, he failed to notice how out of place the mist was, or how the smell was so familiar. Then, he saw the light at the end of the tunnel. It was faint, but he could make out the shape of a doorway and he immediately ran towards it.

Then the mist cleared and revealed a hot spring. There was Hinata, her face stuck in an overjoyed expression as she dipped her feet into the water. “The water is perfect, I’ve missed my bath so much.”
She turned and looked into Naruto’s eyes, but soon turned bright red and let her gaze fall to the floor. “Can we… can we… take a bath?”

Naruto sighed, he hadn’t thought about her statement earlier about being with him much. But he looked at her, she was so beautiful with her feet dangling playfully into the water, maybe she was the family he needed. “Yes, I’d love to.”

He took off his shirt, which made her turn a brighter shade of red and then began to walk towards the water. “Hinata, you might want to look away.” She nodded but didn’t move her head, he could tell she was still watching from the corner of her eye. Oh well, he thought, here goes nothing. He took off his pants, slowly at first but then shoved his embarrassment into the depths of his being and completely stepped out of his clothing.

He started walking into the water, little by little he let himself get deeper into the water, and little by little Hinata’s gaze crept over only to rest on Naruto’s form. When he was waist deep in the water he found a place to sit down, then turned to face her. “Sorry if I was too…”

“No, I don’t mind.” She smiled uncontrollably and stared off into the nothing in the corner of the room. “I guess, if I saw Naruto…”

She didn’t finish her statement before she began taking off her shirt. Naruto couldn’t help but stare in awe as she slowly showed more of her body. Her skin was perfect, even from a distance it looked soft and had a seducing creamy color, she looked like a goddess. As she revealed more, Naruto could see the curves of her body. She started looking remarkably feminine, the curves of her back and stomach and… chest.

Then she started pulling her pants off of her hips, the curves continued and Naruto’s heart began to flutter. When the clothes were fully off, Naruto could barely breathe as he watched her.

“I…I don’t know if I’m attractive. Thank you for not laughing.”

He shook his head, “You are far from unattractive.” He was in such awe that his awkwardness was completely forgotten, instead he had a feeling in the pit of his stomach that compelled him to get closer to her. He fought it though, trying to force himself back into reason.

She walked into the water, and cautiously made her way towards Naruto. She sat beside him and allowed her leg to touch his, then, her shoulder against his. Naruto let his instinct take over and turned to face her, wrapping his arms around her waist and pulled her towards him.

Her chest touched his, one of Hinata's arms began wrapping around his waist and the other drifted to the back of his head. She ran her fingers through his hair and looked deeply into his eyes as he stared back into hers. “Hinata, I think I…” But she made the first move. She pulled him into her. Their hearts were beating in their ears, their eyes closed, and finally their lips met.

THIS IS THE NEWEST CHAPTER!!!!

Part 11

"By the way, this character is very close to me. I have been putting into stories since middle school. He finally found his place (with the help of some chinese mythology) in the world of Naruto. Hm... Tim needs some sleep. I hope that this update isn't so grammatically terrible that it melts the eyes of you my oh so beloved readers."
-Brant Kogasu

He stood in the shadows, a true ninja. He was not seen, not heard, there was not the slightest clue to his existence. From his vantage in the highest point of the forest he could see everything, yet there was not a trace of his prey. **** the snow, it covered their tracks and forced them into one of the thousands of caves that the forest was legendary for.

The cold snow bit at his face, but he stood still. He had lost the chase and there was no sting more painful the his self hatred. Even the sky above mocked him, the white clouds silent and unmoving, not even an uneasy churning in the sky to give change to his surroundings. The clouds were staying to protect the prey, to blanket the world in foot after foot of heavy snow.

Atohi shuddered, the cold was unbearable. He let loose his charka and unleashed fiery wings from his back. They wrapped around him, giving him heat, and more importantly, company. “I will always be here to protect you, you have proven yourself to be a defender of our spiritual world and so we will protect you here in the world of mortality.”

“Just let me die, I’ve been here too long.” Atohi spoke into the night, he was speaking to the beast inside of himself so he needed not speak aloud, but did anyway to differentiate his voice from the voice in his head. That was what separated him from the beast within him.

“The snow isn’t that bad, is it?” The voice was but a whisper of a thought, but it was soft and soothing, a woman’s voice.

“You’re just saying that because it’s warm all cooped up inside my soul.” Atohi shuddered again, but not from the cold.

“I am not trapped within you, I chose you to be my host. You have been given gifts that most could never dream of, it’s only natural that you have some responsibilities. I’ve told you before and I’ll tell you again, nothing is free.”

“By the way, I wasn’t talking about the cold. I want to die because my body has seen too many suns and too many moons. My body doesn’t show how many seasons I’ve seen, I haven’t changed since…” He shuddered again.

“I’m sorry…you hate me.”

“No, I have pledged my life to you by choice. I am no fool, I know our work here is necessary.”

“I love you.”

“Please don’t… it hurt’s too much.”

It became once again silent, but now Atohi allowed himself to enjoy it.

DONT YOU HATE WHEN I MAKE YOU WAIT? HA HA
FOR THOSE WHO WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT.......

Naruto scanned the surrounding darkness. His ears had found a new level of clarity since he began his fight in the pitch black caves. He heard the smallest movement to his right and jumped out of the way just as his opponent struck. Then a kick flew directly at his face. He blocked what he could not see, his ears were beginning to see through the darkness, or he was extremely lucky.

“There is no darkness that equal to this in the entire world, unless you are on the bottom of the ocean floor. This is perfect training for any ninja.” Naruto spoke aloud and mocked the words of his first Hokage. He was reading one of the training scrolls in the library that spoke of the true intention of a paradise hidden deep within a cave. ‘It is pivotal for a ninja to trust in any and all of his senses, and to realize that sometimes he may not be able to trust in any of them.’ After that enlightening but confusing quote, the scroll gave instructions for an ancient training method for the ears. It required a perfect dark, just like this.

If it weren’t for the training he had done, he would have been beaten by now. But he also wouldn’t have been in the cave and gotten into this fight in the first place. What a cruel ironic game fate played.

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