Sunday, October 14, 2007

Holly Cow a lot of people updated today....Thats going to keep me busy. LOL anyways, I wasnt on the last couple of days because I had to go out of town for a baby shower thing. And by grosh it was fun! You would think it would be boring with all the older ADULTS around you talking about the good oh days and how wonderful it was when we were little babys they could cuddle.....eh......but it wasnt like that at all! ok, it was for the first 30 mintues, but then it was loads of fun! We played fun baby shower games, Wii games, Gamecube, Xbox 360 games, the whole shabang!!! Yeah...I mean, have you seen a 45 year old adult try to "GROOVE" to DDR? Its hailouros scary....very scare....LOL


Tomorrow I get to skip school all day for a field trip with my Ag. class. We're going to this FFA confrence thing or something somewhere in town. I really hope it'll be fun! My teacher sadi there was going to be a laser show. I want a laser sword! Then I can renact my favorite scenes from Star Wars! LOL Total geek! LOL just kidding, Im not a huge fan of the star wars movies or anything. I just like the little glowing sticks thingines....LLH

well, enough about my life, heres the next chapter of The NarutoxHinata FF. Enjoy!

Special thanks to

MEUN

who was the only person who kept this alive!

come on peoples! Want this to die?

Disclamiers....
1. I am not calling this FF of NaruHina mine.
2. I do not take credit of Naruto or Hinata, that belongs to the creator of this series.
3. This FF belongs to Brant Kogasu on Narutofan fourms.
4. the person who is posting this on their site (he got permission) is Sword Man on Narutofan fourms.
5. If you want to keep this alive comment!!!
6. It contains *NAH NAH* if you know what i mean, so look away children!
7. Hi. :)
8. Enjoy!!

Part 12

Chap:HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Naruto scanned the surrounding darkness. His ears had found a new level of clarity since he began his fight in the pitch black caves. He heard the smallest movement to his right and jumped out of the way just as his opponent struck. Then a kick flew directly at his face. He blocked what he could not see, his ears were beginning to see through the darkness, or he was extremely lucky.

“There is no darkness that equal to this in the entire world, unless you are on the bottom of the ocean floor. This is perfect training for any ninja.” Naruto spoke aloud and mocked the words of his first Hokage. He was reading one of the training scrolls in the library that spoke of the true intention of a paradise hidden deep within a cave. ‘It is pivotal for a ninja to trust in any and all of his senses, and to realize that sometimes he may not be able to trust in any of them.’ After that enlightening but confusing quote, the scroll gave instructions for an ancient training method for the ears. It required a perfect dark, just like this.

If it weren’t for the training he had done, he would have been beaten by now. But he also wouldn’t have been in the cave and gotten into this fight in the first place. What a cruel ironic game fate played.

Naruto heard the sound of a hand flying through the air and moved his head to the side, barely dodging a crushing blow. He tapped the wall with his fist, as was taught in the training. And waited for the sharp sound of his strike to bounce back from the walls of the cave. Then he saw perfectly.

He jumped towards the wall to his right, his opponent jumped with him. He touched his hand to a stalactite and let his chakra flow from his hand and attach himself to the stone. It was a much more dense material than wood, which he was used to clinging to with his chakra, but he still managed to use the stone to spin himself around at his opponent.

Another sharp tap to the wall and he realized he was flying towards air, his retaliation was in vein. But he was still a step ahead. He landed on the floor of the cave and spun with a great enough velocity to block a kick aimed at his head. But his defence was his downfall. He slipped on the wet ground and fell to his back.

“I won.”

“But it’s not fair, you have those eyes.” Naruto rolled over. He was getting better, and this was only the first of many training exercises the library had to offer. “If you didn’t have your eyes I would have won.”

There was a silence through the darkness, but with a sharp tap of his fist to the floor, he saw Hinata smiling. “You’re getting much better Naruto-kun.” She held out her hand to help him up, he smiled too. After their kiss, everything became less awkward between the two of them. She was losing the habit of stumbling over her words, she turned red of a much less frequent basis, and best of all, he was falling for her more and more.

“Hinata, can you make that sushi like you made a few days ago? I’m starving!” With that he lit a torch and traveled with her back towards the secret room.

It had been about a month since they stumbled across the cave. They had become so accustomed to each other that he started to feel weird when they weren’t in the same room all of the time. He smiled, but then frowned at a thought. Sakura was still in the village, he just gave up the girl he had obsessed over for all of these years.

The dim light from the secret room began filling his eyes, he looked at Hinata. She had a new confidence that was delightful about her. She no longer looked at the floor when she spoke, she no longer had difficulties saying what she wanted to say. She was happy, so was he. He found someone he truly cared for, maybe he…loved. His stomach was churning with butterflies, maybe he was in love.

He had never felt this way about Sakura, he just wanted to. She seemed so perfect to him in his youth, the good student with friends and above all, a family. He watched her go home to a house where people cared about her, then he’d go his house and be alone in the silence. He envied her, and soon his envy turned to ****. But it was never really her that he wanted, but what she represented to him.

But Hinata was different. When he saw her he wasn’t thinking of the family he never had, he thought about how beautifully the light bounced off of her raven dark hair. And when she stared at him he didn’t see pity or anger in her eyes, he saw love. He didn’t need to become Hokage for her, he was already the most important ninja in her world.

He was beaming with joy, he had found love, and it was returned to him in full force. He put his hand on her shoulder, she turned to him and stared into his eyes. He pulled her into himself and kissed her.

Her muscles relaxed an she let her weight fall into him. He held her tight into himself, letting the warmth of her body against his fill him with ecstasy. He let the kiss continue until her breathing became thick with passion. She softly moaned with her breathing, each sweet moan ignited him with delight. He kissed her neck and the moans became louder.

As he kissed lower down he neck, she slowly moved to take off her jacket, then threw it to the floor. He reached his hand down her back, felt the bottom of her shirt, then moved his hand through the cloth as he slowly and softly touched her up her spine. Her skin was silk under his fingertips, and as he allowed his hand to explore more of her skin she pushed herself closer into him.

He kissed all of the way down her neck until it met her shoulder and was moving onto her collar bone. Then, he took a step back. She was breathing hard and her eyes were half closed. She was alive with passion, and his fast beating heart told him he returned the emotion.

She grabbed him by his shirt and pulled him towards her aggressively, her infatuation causing her to forget her inhibitions. “Naruto-kun, I want another bath.”

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