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Monday, November 14, 2005


POEM
ok 2day at school we wrote poems and i did 1.Everybody knows i'm the class writer so they wanted 2 switch with me and since they call me the all knowing person they wanted me 2 proof read theirs and stuff.NE ways,i was done in 2 minutes and our teacher is fan of my stuff so she was watchin my friend read mine.My friend was like"It's soooo good"She's so supportive and i know 1 day she'll be famous 4 singing.

NE ways,my teacher read it and she was like"This is great.It belongs-it needs 2 be in printing!"My other friend said she didn't get it,I was like,then that means that it's good because she never gets poems in reading

Ok well here it is.IDK what ur comment is,i just NEED 2 know what others think and if people r only being nice coz it mite be soooo bad they can't tell me!

"If ever there was a time when i
had a time to think
I'd feel some rapid passion
Spread feverishly 2 my fingertips
It attracts a pen like a magnet 2 my hand
And pen on paper makes its debut
And exhibition of words gliding across a page
Until 1 final dot ends it
And there is no more"

PLS,dont be shy.Feel FREE 2 comment WHATEVER u feel about it.I just want more opinions and what better from people that r great like u guys?

By the way,the title is:

THE URGE TO WRITE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My clubs:Without Wings,Hiei & Kurama,Shigure,Kurama,Bishounen,Otaku Angels,Color Red Club,Neko Miko Club,Inuyasha Fight Club,Goddess,Earth Club,Fruits Basket,Poet,Friend's Club,Protect and Save the Cute,Kenshin,Sanosoke,Evil Side,Writing,YGO,Pokemon,Misunderstood Clubs By Me:Mabudachi Trio luvrs,Fruits Basket Fan Club,Seto fan club

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