Wednesday, October 25, 2006

wow i cant beleive I got 7 comments on my last post!
thank you all for your support and today I'll post a peice of a story I'm writting. so tell me what you think.

Mystical Knights

Ch 1: The dream world Riturica
"Huff puff" a girl breathed heavily as she ran through the dense forest that surrounded her. She was being hunted by something very fast and she didn’t know if it was closing in on her or not. The only thing she knew for sure was to keep running. The girl had short pink hair that was pulled up into a small ponytail on the top of her head, and was parted down the middle held by a green barrette on the left side. Her physique some would describe as short and pudgy other would say just plain short. Just by looking you could tell she wasn’t very good in her P.E. classes as she had a hard time breathing as she ran. She looked behind her and could not see her pursuer. All she could hear was the sound of the bushes rattling as they both moved through the forest.
“Sakura!” said a small but commanding voice, “You must Change! You can do it! Trust me!” the voice called out.
But Sakura couldn’t pay much attention to the voice, she was much too frightened to do anything other than run, run or die, run or die, that was constantly going through her head. It was her main focus, the most basic of animal instincts, to live.

so what do you think so far. if you like it I'll post more.... so like yeah.... hehe

also this is a poem by a friend. and they wanted me to post it on my site for them so here it is....


"Fade" by Ceolst

The turmoil bubbles within her
Tainting her mind
She remembers the rapture of his loving arms
And wonders
If its worth it?
The fall
That only poisons her soul more
Then she remembers him
And what he did
She takes a step
And, for a moment,
Feels that rapture once again.


yeah nothing much has been happening,
just I'm gonna go to cant escape's costume part!
It's gonna be kool. ^_^

goodbye for now...
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