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Monday, July 16, 2007


Boredom...= Story!XD
Alright!Time to describe another failed idea for a manga story(Note,don't steal them!I may use them again one day!)

Today's story = "Memory Log"

Modern day Tokyo.A new video game has swept the nation of Japan,The Aurean Chronicles!However strange things happen to people who play the game!

Meet Yume(I was really wanting to name someone this.Luckily,I've found a little magician to fill in the spot!^^).He's a wonderful story writer.Every year,his school has a literary arts festival,and he wants to create a great story to impress his childhood friend and current love interest,Takara.Yume's very shy,and always acts differently around her at school than he really does at home.However,as he and Takara may be making a connection while talking in the classroom after school one day,Miko,Yume's little sister,comes and forces him away.(She later asked him if there were "developments").Yume and Miko are quite close siblings,so he often goes places with her.Today,he and his video game obsessed sister are off to the game store to buy the new game.Takara shows up there while Miko is talking with the game shop owner,and she accompanies them home to watch the game.After awhile,she begins to leave for home.Yume walks with her outside,where she tells him,"I feel happy with you!",with a shy smile.She leaves for home.Yume runs into the house to tell Miko what happened,only to find that Miko is unconscious on the floor!On the screen,it says,"Game Over" over three red X's...

Yume and Takara are then at the hospital.She tells him that this has happened to a lot of kids already.Yume discovers that there must be a link between the red X's and the coma's people have been falling into.He hurries home and quickly starts up the game.When he's lost three life's he's suddenly sucked into the game by one of the characters,who turns out to be an evil sorceress.Yume is trapped in the world of the game,with his mind under the control of the woman.Her son,Espiritu,rescues Yume,but then dissappears,leaving Yume alone with only a mysterious sword made of glass...

Yume finds Miko working in a noodle shop in a nearby town,but,she is almost abducted by a strange man...

Who is this sorceress?And her son?Who is he?And can Yume escape the world created by them?Sadly no one will know,because I haven't continued it!^^;


I'm thinking of making a compiled comic to put on here with all of my failed ideas in it.The stories would be unfinished,but it would be entertaining for Koldoon fans,wouldn't you think?Oh,by the way,Koldoon is pages away from being completed at last.It's a bit sad,really,but it's 1 more step to publication!

Well,that's all for now.See you all next post!

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