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Saturday, July 3, 2004


   My fourth Post! Now I KNOW I'm bored...
...hmmm....I'm bored....so I'm gonna post a preview of my new fanfic....just for an opinion...
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"...A man, only a few years older than me, rode up laughing, dragging something that looked like a sarcophagus with him. He had white hair, mysterious, almost creepy eyes, and an odd scar on his right cheek. His scarlet robe brushed me as he walked past, not once looking at me or even noticing my existence.And after he entered the temple, I sat longer, now thinking not of revenge, but of that man. Who was he? What did he have in that sarcophagus? Was he a friend of my brothers'?
I was interrupted when the man came running back out, looking over his shoulder and cackling evilly. But he stopped once he set eyes on me.
"Who are you?" he asked, not realizing that I was the girl he had passed just a little while ago. I looked straight into his eyes. I saw this gleam...it meant something...he was not about to harm me...
"Manu," I said,"Manu Amentet. And you are?"
He stared. I blinked. I heard my brother's guards inside, sounding as if they were running toward us. The man, too, heard this. He leaned over me and before I knew it, he had carried me to his horse and rode off, the guards yelling far off behind us. I held tight to my captor and we soon lost them..."
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So....is it bad?

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