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Thursday, January 20, 2005

   Plz review this...
I got bored today so I wrote a poem... Plz review it n tell me what I should change n how I can improve it!!

People always say,
That love makes you
Take off the mask
That you are afraid
To take off

The mask that you’re afraid,
That you can’t live without,
The mask that protects your heart and soul,
While also holding it in,

I finally found the courage,
To take off the mask,
I showed you my true self,
We had some laughs,
And times I will never forget,

I thought u were special,
But you took my heart,
While vulnerable and weak
And crushed it
Like it was nothing
But a (something that rhymes with weak!)

I die a little inside,
Every time I see you smile,
Because I wasn’t the one,
Who made you smile,
Every time I see you hug,
Because I wasn’t the one,
You hugged,

I decided to leave you alone,
For you don’t need me anymore,
I hope the special person you chose ,
Will make you happy,

Now here I am,
Scarred for life,
As I put my mask back on,
I pick up my scattered heart,
And walk away,

As I walk away,
I close the door ,
That was left open for you,
Hoping,
That one day,
My heart,
Will be whole again…

I lost my original copy so this is just a quick over view of the stuff I remembered from it -.-'
This poem is far from done
Thz for helping!!
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