Friday, February 15, 2008

   YAY!
I finally fingured out what to name the two most important characters in my story. ^____^
I decided to go with Katelyn Brown(yesh it's kinda boring last name...) for the girl and Hirashi Kishimoto<-(to honor my fave Manga-ka)....
I still don't have a name for the prince.... *sigh*
I just posted a piture for my story...kinda like a cover. When it's up I'll paste a link. ^_^
I'm going to post the first chapter today!
But first I wanna say that, I didn't have school! ^_^ The teachers were all at meetings so that means a 4-day weekend!!! ^_^
Enough random stuff now here is my story.
I Hope your enjoy "Beyond The Crystal Mirror" Book 1 "The Crystal Water Fall":

Chapter 1
It was a chilly day in the country of Nepal. A young explorer of 23 was waiting for her assistant to arrive with their gear. She was about 5ft 6in high and had long mid back light brown hair pulled into a pony tale, brown eyes and nicely tanned skin. She was dressed in jeans, a thick blue winter coat and matching hat, scarf and gloves. She had on hiking boots and was sitting with her legs crossed on a snowy bench. Now some may call her pretty, but her beauty was unmatched by any at her old High School.

“I’m sooooo bored......” She sighed.

Just then a young Japanese man dressed in a huge orange winter coat, winter pants and snow shoes ran up to her huffing and puffing carrying a ton of stuff. He had short slightly spiked black hair and black slightly smallish black square glasses that framed his blue eyes. He was very pale and seemed like the type of guy who lives with their mom and would stay locked up in his room all day playing games on his computer. He was shorter than his partner our young explorer and had been best friends with her since the days in the sandbox.

“I’m *huff* Sorry *huff* I’m late! *huff*” He said gasping for air.

“You wouldn’t be so tired out if you didn’t bring all that stuff. You could leave behind some of your technology.” She said impatiently.

“ No way! We would get lost without my technology. We’ll need it if we are going to climb the world’s tallest mountain. Why do you want to climb it any ways?”


“I always wanted to climb Mount Everest ever since I could remember. Besides it sounds like fun.”

“Yeah if you think getting hypothermia is fun....”

“Stop complaining you volunteered to come with me.”

“Only because you guilted me into it by using the, ‘We’ve been best friends since kindergarten!’ card and the, ‘I can’t do this with out you, Hirashi!’ card.”

“I did no such thing. Besides with you along I know we’ll have the latest technology to help us survive. ” she said crossing her arms

“ Whatever you say, Kate. We better leave now if we want to make some distance up the mountain before we have to set up camp for the night.”

It's a short chapter....
~Chero~
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