Wednesday, May 17, 2006

An Angel's Daughter (chapter 1)

Before time began there was a goddess named Lupala Duraye and a god named Dunwall Lauge they created the angels who became their children. On the last night of their lives they brought their eldest son, Gunpala Ceres, and told him he would be the leader of the angels and that his daughter would be a goddess that would hold the key to peace among angels, demons, and humans alike. A few years later Gunpala married Branwen and they had a daughter whom they named Crimson Ceres. When she was just a few weeks old a demon that knew of her power captured her and took her to the mortal world. Though Crimson was young her crying drove the demon mad and he fled back to the underworld leaving Crimson alone in the rain. Lola was a 30 year old woman who saw this baby left in the rain on the way home from work which only a crimson colored feather around her neck with the words Crimson. Lola took her home and has raised her ever since she now goes by the name Crimson Song and her mortal mother and father are Lola Song and Futan Song. She became the lost daughter...(17 years later) No one knows how I feel, no one cares how I feel, everyone denies me and pretends to not know me around their friends... Sometimes I feel like I don't belong to this world let alone this universe. Actually forget that I know I don't belong to this race called humans. How could I belong here? Sometimes I hear people when I dreaming, people who I can't see but I know they're there and I can feel that their souls are tainted. Yet for some reason I pity them. I don't see them but I know they are watching me with those hopeless eyes calling out to be purified. In a dream I usually have there's this beautiful guy with crystal blue eyes and coal black hair I’ll never forget his eyes. His wings rose and fell as he spoke to me I couldn’t understand the language he was speaking but somehow I could feel it and understood perfectly. He said in a voice I don't know how to describe, "I am Sogen, I will revive you Crimson Ceres." Then I usually woke up screaming but this time I was floating in the air I gasped and fell to the floor. This was crazy!!! What is wrong with me? I don't think this is just a dream anymore I think its some kind of a sign. I wish I understood it though cause it was starting to get worse like the night before I woke up in a different room!!! Ok I thought that's enough of this for today I need to get to school. I walked to school and met my so-called friends outside where they were arguing over who the cutest guy in school was again. I saw a guy against the pole who I’d never seen before he had silver colored hair and piercing yellow eyes. She glared at me and I heard someone speaking in my head... "Crimson Ceres, I am Dueson Don I shall destroy you!" I couldn’t believe my eyes he now had ruff black wings sticking out of his shoulders and disappeared before I could speak. I walked to class alone and sat in a desk as far away from everyone as I could I was tired of them commenting on how it was weird that I had dark pink eyes and black hair that was down to my waist. During class I heard people crying again... I wish sometimes that I could just mute them out but I cant. Maybe there's something wrong with me am I forgetting something I mean all I know is Lola found me in the rain. "Crimson can you hear me?" What whose there why are you talking to me? "Crimson wake up class is over," my teacher Mr.Tenata said. "Oh shit," I said and ran out of the school building I was going to be late for work again!!! When I was walking through the park home from work that night there was that silvered haired guy again. He stood in front of me so I couldn’t get past him. "Would you move please I don't have time for this," I said. "What's the hurry?" he said grinning. Sigh.. These people are annoying I thought. "Too bad I’m not human," he said chuckling. "Um, did you just read my mind?" I said. "Come with me,"He said pulling my wrist. I kicked him in the stomach and ran as fast as I could to get home, but in my mind I was thinking oh god I hope I didn’t hurt him to bad. Then I ran straight into someone and fell to the ground. "Oww," I cried. "I'm so sorry," I said looking up to see whom I’d run into and it was the silver haired guy. "Oh, not you again would you please go harass someone else," I said. "No,” he said and grabbed me he pulled me close to him and everything went black. I had that dream again but yet It didn’t feel as if I was sleeping. What was going on my head ached and I was cold. I woke up floating in the air with crimson colored wings in a light blue colored room that I’d never seen before and I screamed. The guy from my dream ran in the room as I fell to the floor. "Oh I see you’re afraid of flying?" he said smiling. This is a dream this is a dream I repeated over and over in my head. "No I’m afraid its not," he said. "Who are you?" I said standing up. "I am Sogen Raine," he said in that amazing voice. "Where am I?" I asked looking around. "Your in my house on the star Fefta but don't worry its not far from earth," he said calmly. "Why am I here?" you said wondering what you did now. "You are the chosen one Crimson Ceres you hold the key and I will train you," he said. "Then what am i?" you don't know why you asked him but you just had to know. "You Crimson are a Goddess a high angel that was lost and I am your fiancé," he said calmly. Just then the silver hair boy walked in and said, "hey Sogen is she awake yet?" I hid behind Sogen that kid was crazy I thought. "I'm not crazy," he said glaring at me. "Then why were you following me and saying you were going to destroy me?" I yelled annoyed at him. "Oh that I was just testing you don't make it a big deal," he laughed mockingly. "Ignore him," Sogen said. "Are you both angels to?" I asked. "I am but Dueson is a fallen angel meaning he’s a demon but he’s a good demon when he wants to be," he said laughing. Then he got a more serious tone and said, "it's time." and with that they were both gone and I was left in the room alone. (this is a story me and my friend are writing if you have any ideas let me know and comment plz ty ^^)

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