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Wednesday, October 29, 2003


morning is off to a decent start, I haven't broken anything, (amazing considering the amount of things I've dropped) and I feel slightly better than yesterday. my dad however has a fullblown cold, so I'm steering clear from him. but colds have a way of taking you down sooner or later, so I might as well prepare for impact.

I've rewritten a short story I did about 5 years ago. made it shorter and hopefully better, but I've not decided wether to put it here in the blog, or take my chance at OB. if I put it here not many will see it and save me embarrassement. but if it's put on the board people might be so kind as to give me a few pointers and thereby help me improve my writing. I am ambivalent.

Autumn leaves fall silently
shielding my hidden palace
Walls that were built of love
now wither away
Rooms filled with laughter and love
are empty and bare
The miracles planted in the gardens
faded to oblivion
Still I linger here alone
unable to let go

-
Mimmi






spent another couple of hours rewriting and translating old stuff. I didn't think I had that much lurking in the dark corners of my room, but there you go. I'll probably post it here, rather than at OB. or maybe I will post at OB. my descisions are fickle and change from one moment to the other.

Tears fall down an empty face
Burning skin that is torn
Blood boils in veins slashed
Where anguish once was born

When Darkness shifts to Light
All will be clear to see
Upon that day I know for sure
My life will return to me


- Mimmi

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