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Wednesday, November 5, 2003
I PM an apology, and this is what I get?
Too late for apologies, dude. Your ass is mine. No offence.
Seriously, though, you need to re-evaluate who you think you are and realize that you don't know very much about anything. I mean, you know who you look like right now? Kevin. Do you remember Kevin? I think you were here when he was. He thought he knew stuff, but he didn't know anything, and when met with a differing opinion, he overreacted, much how you do now.
I draw comparison to Dayday, TaylorHewitt, and to a lesser extent, Raiha.
My advice to you is, until you've got your shit together, chill out.
Also, I really don't think you should be in charge of the Fiction forum, but that's just my opinion. You base all of your literary "knowledge" on your own unfounded and generally incorrect opinions about writing. I mean, dude, get with the program okay?
How many times over AIM (and how many times on OB) have you resorted to "It's my opinion" or a variation thereof?
You've got to drop the ego, Mitch, cause you can't back it up, and look like a total tool when you try.
No offence, but you're all bark and no bite. You should start taking the advice of those around you, because those giving you sound criticism do know what they're talking about.
I mentioned your instructor as to provide character background. You're caught up in a delusion, dude. Snap out of it. Your teacher's crit was totally sound. Metaphors are used sparingly in literary essays, and they're used minimally in creative endeavors.
Your writing and stories are overly hazy and unfocused because of your "style." Using 14 metaphors in a paragraph doesn't make your writing better. It makes it worse.
I can barely read anything you post on OB because it's so poorly written. You flame other people on OB? You flame your teacher? Dude, chill out and learn something before you open your mouth.
And you know, every time you and I have debated on OB, you've degenerated into throwing little hissy fits, and people DO notice. I've got quite a few IMs saved with people who don't like you at all. I'm not going to name names, because that's not what I do.
My biggest crit is...know something for once.
Hope that helped,
PoisonTongue
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