Monday, January 9, 2006

the first chapter of one of my older fanfictions
this is one of my good yet older fanfictions i am re-writing it to make it better. and it's a inuyasha fic btw. well..plus one person from FFX-2 slightly...he's almost the same...

the unexpected alliance: ch 1.

"Mother! Father! Where are you going?! don't leave me here!"

The girl woke up

(again, the same stupid dream again! why does it keep appearing at the worst moments?)

"are you alright Rose?"asked one of the surrounding wolves.

"yeah i'm fine it was just the dream again."

"oh again was it you should find a way to get rid of it."

"maybe i should but how? i don't know of any way to make it dissapear."

"you could go to the northern tribe and have them interpret it."

"it's just a stupid dream i can live with it."

"but Rose it scares us when oyu cry out at night." whined one of the younger pups.

Rose sighed "alright but if i'm mistaken for a human it's midnight's fault alright?"

midnight was the first wolf to have talked to Rose when she joined the pack and could easily see why they would believe she was a human. she walked like them and dressed like them but because of her ears and eye's they had known that she was not. her ears are pointed at the tips(think of koga's ears and you'll get it)but her hair which is long and black is always covering them, her eyes which you can only see in daylight are black with red lines making the shape of a rose in each eye. which is how she recieved her name as midnight had recieved his by his pure black fur and yellow eye's.

"i don't think that they will rose they just have to look at your eye's and they can tell that your a demon."

"then why is it that no one besides the pack can tell that i'm not a human?"

"no idea but you should get some sleep Rose if your heading out for the northern mountains tomorrow."

"thanks midnight i think i will. good night."

With that rose went back to sleep. The next morning Rose started heading north. while she was walking through a forest when she came across a clearing. in the clearing there was a well. Rose decided to look closer because there were vines all over the well and she also thought that it was strange that the vines were coming from the inside the well itself.

"now this is strange." rose said to herself "ther's no water and what's that shining at the bottom?"

Rose jumped into the well and picked up what looked to be some kind of shard. suddenly she felt strange as if the ground she had been kneeling on had suddenly dissapeared and she was falling slowly then it stopped and she was once again kneeling in the well. Rose looked up expecting to see the sun and sky, instead she saw the wooden roof of a small hut. Rose started to get scared and decided to climb out of the well. once she was out she sat down by one of the walls. a few minutes later she heared the sound of people talking.

"kay Grandpa i'm going to school now!" yelled one obviously in a hurry.

"but Kagome! i thought up a really good excuse for your absence!"yelled the other one seemingly irritated.

"not this time Grandpa! now i'm.....why do i sense a jewel shard?" asked the one called Kagome.

"no idea"

suddenly the door to the hut opened and a girl in a green skirt and a white blouse was standing there. Rose was hoping that the girl wouldn't notice her. but unfortunately she was noticed anyways.

"hey! how did you get here!?"


it's better in the re-write but i am on VERY limited time this moment so i ahve to go. tell me waht you think.
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