Tuesday, August 23, 2005

   Sketches

Mood: Creative Music: Down With The Sickness, Disturbed Total Visits 1731 Popularity Ranking # 431 (out of 33,578 active sites) I've had an alright day yesterday. I mean, I just got off the phone with my best-friend...But I had a creative day...o.o;; I drew pictures, yes I drew, more like a small sketches that I would like to improve though. But in order to know what I should improve on I need to be criticized, which doesn't bother me at all. People can go on for days telling how crappy my art is and I'd agree, take a note, and try to improve that. Eh, it's a little different with my writings though, if it's not toooo bad, I'll let it slide by. But here are the links so you may critique the drawings, now I do forwarn everyone that I am teaching myself it is very cruscial that I do get these critiques so I get a more wide expanse on how I can improve. Okay here's the first one: Amelia I do know that her face is messed up, and figured that I could just say her feet are hidden underneathe the skirt.o.o The second one: Bethany I think I did a little better on her, but somehow I ended up losing her neck in the drawing so her neck looks weird..@.@ Please critique them, I'll really appreaciate it.^-^! Oh and sorries that they're done on notebook paper, but that's because I sketched them on the piece of paper that I wrote down their character profile for the story that I am writing. WARNING: This song contains mature language, blah, blah. (Putting this so I don't get in trouble with all the cussing in the lyrics..e.e) "Down With The Sickness" Drowning deep in my sea of loathing Broken your servant I kneel (Will you give in to me?) It seems what's left of my human side Is slowly changing in me (Will you give in to me?) Looking at my own reflection When suddenly it changes Violently it changes (oh no) There is no turning back now You've woken up the demon in me [Chorus:] Get up, come on get down with the sickness [x3] Open up your hate, and let it flow into me Get up, come on get down with the sickness You mother get up come on get down with the sickness You fucker get up come on get down with the sickness Madness is the gift, that has been given to me I can see inside you, the sickness is rising Don't try to deny what you feel (Will you give in to me?) It seems that all that was good has died And is decaying in me It seems you're having some trouble In dealing with these changes Living with these changes (oh no) The world is a scary place Now that you've woken up the demon in me [Chorus] (And when I dream) [x4] No mommy, don't do it again Don't do it again I'll be a good boy I'll be a good boy, I promise No mommy don't hit me Why did you have to hit me like that, mommy? Dont do it, you're hurting me Why did you have to be such a bitch Why don't you, Why don't you just fuck off and die Why can't you just fuck off and die Why can't you just leave here and die Never stick your hand in my face again bitch FUCK YOU I don't need this shit You stupid sadistic abusive fucking whore How would you like to see how it feels mommy Here it comes, get ready to die And for the ones that did critique, thankies..^-^ I will be checking on the pictures daily. In other news my best-friend and I talked on the phone and we talked alot about first dreams and how scientist try to figure them out, and then we talked politics, and science which lead into religion and biblical debates and political. It was a good discussion that we both lost track of time, ^^; I'm going to go, have a nice day..^-^! Ending mood: Excited Ending music: Motivation Proclamation, Good Charlotte

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