Monday, June 7, 2004

   Chapter 5
Yay!Its the last week of school!Hey sorry i didnt post yesterday but i came home late.Ya so since my parents wont let me get a Katana yet i asked for a bebe-gun they said no cuz i might break a window.But i can get a paint ball gun.Yay!And i think if i dont act stupid with the paint ball gun they might think i responsible enough to get a Katana.Yay!Well here go's chapter 5 k..........

After a nice night of sleep Tenchu gets up and gets ready to go taks down the lepord."Well i killed four panthers befor how hard can one lepord be?" says Tenchu.He runs out of his fort and looks for the lepord.Then in the far distans he heres Ayame yell.He jumps tree be tree untill he gets to Ayame."What the hell" says Tenchu.He see's Ayame fighting the lepord."Hey!" says Tenchu "Thats my lepord".Ayame turns and says "i found it first and im going to kill it for my final test."Then the lepord jumps at Ayame and it hits her makeing her hit her head on a tree."Hay are you knocked out"
says Tenchu."Well i guess the lepord realy wanted to fight me".Then the lepord jumps at Tenchu slashing his arm."Dam it thats the same place you hit me the first time we met you stupid lepord" says Tenchu.Then he pulls out his katana and runs at the lepord.The lepord runs at Tenchu too and then Tenchu jumps over the lepord and cuts off its tail.The lepord lets out a loud roar and turns and looks at Tenchu."Hmmm i got faster than i expected" says Tenchu.Then the lepord runs at Tenchu and trys to slash him but Tenchu doge's the attack."But your quick too" says Tenchu."This sould end quick thoe".Tenchu runs does a back flip pushing off a tree and try's to salsh the lepord.The lepord maves out of the way and slash's Tenchu on his back.After slashing back and fourth with the lepord Tenchu jumps into a tree."Me and that lepord are just to quick for each other we keep salshing at each other but we dont hit" says Tenchu."I need to wait for the right momment to hit it".Then Tenchu jumps back to the ground to fight the lepord try's three times to slash Tenchu but cant.Then it jumps into the air to try and slash Tenchu."Now!" says Tenchu and he stabs the lepord.The lepord drops to the floor dead."Wow that was quick" says Tenchu.Then he wraps up his wounds and starts walking to the end of the forest.After waiting at the end of the forest for two hours Ayame comes."What took you so long?" says Tenchu."Lets get this over with" says Tenchu."Right!" says Ayame.........

Well did you like it.Tell me what you think k.See ya!:)
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Friday, June 4, 2004

   hi
Hey well its still thursday at my house but im going to my dads and cant post chapter 5 untill sunday.Ya i would have posted it befor but i was tiered and i had lots of homework.Sorry ^_^". I realy will post it sunday.See ya!:)
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Thursday, June 3, 2004

   Hi
Yo!So ya im sorry havent posted in two days.But ive had a lot of homework.Well once again its still the day befor this post at my house.Ya its 9:00 on wensday.Well since this post is for thursday im going to post again for chapter 5.So there should be a second post later after this one with the next chapter.I promise i'll post it this time cuz we shouldnt have a lot of home work cuz we have to play a dum soft ball game against the other classes at my school.Its going to be dum but at least we wont get a lot of home work.So there should be a second post with chapter 5 i promise i'll post it k.See ya!:)
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Monday, May 31, 2004

   hi
Whats up!So i think i beat that new game its confuseing me now.I beat the main story and this evil robot named Rahu then at the end it asks if you want to play the game all over again with the custom robo parts you got or go to the BIG BATTLE.Well i picked the big battle its like you come back from a long vacation after destroying Rahu then you have to go threw the hole city in a tournament with your Custom Robo.I just dont know when this game will end.-_-" Also you have to get this stupid lisence thing to be a Custom Robo driver on the game well i got the best lisence Class S makeing me one of the best fighters on the game.Well when the stupid tournament started it said i have to start all over with the lowest lisence Class D.This sucks.
Well thats all about that game for now.So im not going to stop the story after all.But im not going to post it now.Ya ill post it later today so if you want to see it you'll have to keep checking in to see if i put chapter 5 up.It should be up on a second post later today k.See ya!:)
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Sunday, May 30, 2004

   Hello
Hi.I would have posted sooner but im hooked on this new game i got.Its called Robo Custom.Ya its for Game Cube.Its realy cool.I think a almost beat it already thoe.But im not sure if not then im realy close to beating it.Well im going to hold off on chapter 5 tell tomarrow.Or i might just stop the story now im not sure.Well ill think about it.Ya well atleast i dont have school tomarrow.....ya also i got the 1st Samurai Deeper Kyo yesterday.Its cool and funny.But i have to order manga 2 3 4 and 5 of it from Barns and Noble cuz they only have manga 6 of it.Well thats about it ill see ya tomarrow mabe.See ya.
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Saturday, May 29, 2004

   Chapter 4
Well today is going by good.Later im going to Target to see if they have the new Game Cube game Custom Robo.Ya its like Gundam but more cartoonie and you can customize your robot.Also im going to Barns and Noble to get a manga i ordered.Ya its Samurai Deeper Kyo.It looks like a good manga.Well
anyways here go's chapter 4.......

As Tenchu wakes up he desides to go train with his katana.He go's to the bamboo tree's and starts cutting down bamboo as quick as possable.Every time he started cuting down bamboo he got faster and faster.It took him two minutes to cut down 70 bamboo tree's."Wow that was quick" said Tenchu."Im getting faster and faster".After two hours of training with his sword he stoped to take a brake."Wow thats every bamboo tree in this area" said Tenchu.After a five minute brake Tenchu desides to train on his ninja sneak attack skills."Hey its a black panther" says Tenchu."It might not be the lepord but it should get me ready to fight the lepord".He quietly jumps tree to tree untill hes right over the panther.Then he jumps down from the tree and stabs the panther through the back.The panther lets out a loud yelp then falls to the floor dead.Just when Tenchu thinks the fight is over a small pack of three panthers come out of the thick forest.When they see there fellow panther dead they all run at Tenchu.Tenchu jumps into a tree and so does one of the panthers."There isnt a lot of room on this tree i have to end this quick" says Tenchu.The panther jumps at Tenchu and he jumps over it then makes a quick slash the rib of the panther.The panther turns at Tenchu and slashes his arm."Ow" said Tenchu.Tenchu jumps onto the back of the panther and stabs it through the head.As he kicks the dead panther off the tree it falls on top of one of the other panthers."Hahaha now its your turn!" says Tenchu.Then he jumps off the tree slashing open the panther killing it in one quick attack.Then Tenchu searches for the last panther.He see's the panther in the distance and hides behind a tree.The panther see's its two dead friends it runs over in search of Tenchu.Tenchu comes out from behind the tree just at the moment the panther is by him and with a quick slash cuts off its head."Eww i got blood all on my new ninja suit" says Tenchu."I got to go take a bath".He walks farhter into the forest and see's a hot spring."Aaaa now ill take a nice hot bath" says Tenchu.As he gets in to the hot spring he see's the lepord from the day befor.He quickly dives under water and hides for about a minute.When he comes out gasping for air the lepord has left."Well now i know the lepord is still alive" Tenchu says.When he's done with his bath he starts heading back to his little fort in the forest.Then he notice's a second path and he here's foot steps.He quickly hides in the bushs near by.Then Ayame comes out of the second path."Awsome a hot spring" says Ayame."Hahaha now its time to have a little fun" says Tenchu.He runs back to the dead bodies of the three panthers.He grabs the head of the panther that he choped the head off of.He quickly goes back to the bushs by the hot spring.He sticks the head of the panther out of the bushs and lets out a roar.Ayame turns around and screams.She reachs for her twin blads and pulls them out ready to fight."Hahaha you can do nothing i am a deamon panther" says Tenchu in a eirie voice."Please dont hurt me" says Ayame "i have done nothing to you".Then Tenchu falls out of the bushs leting the head drop to the floor."Hahahahaha! you actualy bealived that that was a deamon panther hahahah!" says Tenchu."Thats not funny" says Ayame.As she picks up the sheive of her twin blade and throws it at Tenchus head."Ow what was that for" says Tenchu."For being a stupid ass" says Ayame."Well anyways i got to go" says Tenchu."See ya" says Tenchu.When he gets back to his fort he skins and cooks the panthers for dinner.After hes done eating he go's to sleep."Ill take out that lepord tomarrow" says Tenchu as he fall asleep........

So what did you think?Did you like it.Comment and tell me k.See ya!:)
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   Hi
Man im tiered.Ya its still friday night at my house but i know this post will be for saturday.Ya well only 3 people came to see chapter 2 yesterday that was Blue Hawk,
Anime girl 67,and Sw33tsamurai90.So thank you all 3 of you for reading my story.So heres the deal im posting chapter 3 now since its still friday at my house.But since the post is for saturday on myotaku if you come back later today there will be a second post for chapter 4 k.So after you see this post keep comeing back tell you see chapter 4.Ok here gos chapter 3..........

"So ill go on the path to the right and you go on the left all right" says Tenchu."Ok" says Ayame."Hahaha i bet ill make it to the end first" says Tenchu."Ya right" Ayame says."Lets get going".
As the two ninjas split up Tenchu see's something moveing in the bush's."Nice try Ayame" says Tenchu.Then a lepord jumps out of the bush's.Tenchu pulls his sword out and doges the lepord.The lepord jumps at Tenchu again and slash's his arm."Dam it to hell" says Tenchu.As he turns and runs and quickly jumps into a tree.The lepord searches for Tenchu but can find him."Mabe we'll fight for real next time" says Tenchu.As tenchu go's further into the forest he finds some bamboo tree's and starts to chop them down."This should be enough" says Tenchu.Then he finds a big tree and use's the bamboo to make a fort in the tree."Mmmm banana's"."Well since ill be here for two weeks i guess this is where i'll live" says Tenchu.Then Tenchu rest's up for the next big day of training......

Ya its a small chapter but chapter 4 will be a big one k.Come check it out later today k.See ya!:)
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Thursday, May 27, 2004

   Chapter 2
So im going to continue my story for my manga like you all wanted.Well not everyone only 4 people commented and said they wanted to read the rest.Oh ya for all of my friends who havent read the first part of my story you have to look for it.It should be one of the post under this one if not look in my post archive its a realy long post you cant miss it.Ya also i chose a name for the main carecter i guess his name will be Tenchu named after my favorite game.Is Tenchu a good name?Ok here it goes..........

"So you think your ready to train with me" says Ressai."Ya ya old fart i was born ready"."Ok" says Ressai."First you must train in Karate"."But im all ready good at Karate" says Tenchu."Yes your very good but not quick enough" said Ressai.Then Ayame walked into the room."This will be your sparing partner" says Ressai."Hahaha this should be quick"."Hey im better at karate then i look" says Ayame.As Ressai steps back to let the two fight they run at each other at fool force.Then Ayame throws a quick kick at Tenchu.Tenchu doges the kick grabs Ayames leg and throughs her to the floor."Hey your not to bad at this" says Ayame.Ayame quickly gets back on her feet.Tenchu runs at her and throughs three quick punches.Ayame doges the first two then grabs Tenchus hand on the third punch.Then she throughs him over her shoulder.Then Tenchu spins around on the floor and trys triping Ayame.She jumps over the trip but the Tenchu kicks her in midair.The two jump to there feet.Ayame trys another kick and hits Tenchu right in the face.As Tenchu gets up Ayame gos for another kick from behind Tenchu.Tenchu quickly does a back flip over Ayame and kicks her to the ground.She gets up and they both start bocking and throughing punches.The fighting goes on for about an hour.Then they both fall to the floor gasping for air."Hmm not bad Tenchu" says Ressai."What do you mean not bad old fart ive been fighting for an hour and a half without stoping and all you can say is not bad!""I did a hell of a good job fighting your grand daughter"."Yes yes you did do good but you didnt win the fight and shes only a middle rank fighter".
"Your lieing" says Tenchu."No im not" says Ressai."Thats why i still need to train you.".........
After two months of training Tenchu masters karate."So you finaly mastered karate and you did it quicker than i thoughed you would now its time to learn how to use a katana" says Ressai."I know how to use a sword" says Tenchu.
"Is that so".Then Ressai hands Tenchu a sword."Lets see how good you are at useing a sword" says Ressai.Tenchu runs at Ressai swinging his katana in every direction.Ressai moves out of Tenchu's way and hits him over the head with the handle of his katana.
"This is gonna take longer than i thought" says Ressai.........
After two weeks of training with Ressai Tenchu wins in a sword match with Ressai and masters the ninja swords menship."Now heres your final test" says Ressai.Tenchu and Ressai walk to a huge dorme filled with trees like a forest."Hey theres no way that sword shop makes you enough money to give you a big house and a dorme with a forest in it old fart"
says Tenchu."That shop and this house has been in my family for years plus a lot of rich sword callecters buy those swords there worth a lot of money" says Ressai.
"This is your final test you will learn your ninja sneak attack skills by stay in this forest for two weeks and i have camras watching your every move and Ayame will be in the forest also you will both take different ways to the end and shall face off when you meet each other at the end by the way there are some wild animals in this forest you must learn to sneak up on them to kill them"."And what if i choose to leave th forest"."Oh this will keep you in" says Ressai.Ressai presses a botton and a huge steel door closes keeping Tenchu and Ayame in the forest for two weeks............

So was it good?I know its really long but i think its not half bad.So tell me what you think k.See ya!:)
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Wednesday, May 26, 2004

   Cool
Hey sorry i didnt go to all your sites yesterday.Actually its still 4/25/04 at my house but whenever i post at like 9:30 it makes the post for the next day.Well i made 3 new friends on myotaku today.Not bad.Hmm....well you all keep telling me its up to me what i do with my manga.But its kinda up to all of you cuz thats why im makeing it so all of my friends on myotaku can see it.Some of you said you will come back to see it in the summer even if i tell the story now.Since im trusting you to come back and see it in the it summer so im not waisting my time on it ill tell the rest starting tomarrow k. Please come back to see the manga in the summer cuz i dont want to try really hard to make a good manga for no reason.So today was a good day.This thursday we are haveing renissance day.We have to dress up for 25 extra credit points.Im going to be an exacutioner.Did i spell that right?Also we didnt have to do math or social studies because we were watching a play.But the play was boreing.They sang the same song like 5 times through th hole play.Well thats about it.Ill post my story tomarrow if you all want me to k.See ya!:)
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Monday, May 24, 2004

   I got an idea!!!!!
So today was an ok day.Ya my friend had some taco sauce from lunch he twisted one up and threw it at the wall and it blew up all over the wall.Now theres a taco sauce stain on the wall at school.lol.^-^" Well i got an idea.So wut if i finish typeing my storie then i make it in the summer and put it on my site.But if you all know the story will you come to see the manga in the summer?Hmmm......i want to do this but i dont want to tell the story then make the manga for no reason cuz no one wants to see the manga cuz they know the story.If i do this will you still come to see the manga in the summer?And dont lie i dont want to make a manga for no reason and waste my summer.So you tell me k.Hmm..... thats about it for today.If you want me to continue the story ill start tomarrow so vote as sooon as you read this post k.See ya!:)
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