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Thursday, May 27, 2004


   Chapter 2
So im going to continue my story for my manga like you all wanted.Well not everyone only 4 people commented and said they wanted to read the rest.Oh ya for all of my friends who havent read the first part of my story you have to look for it.It should be one of the post under this one if not look in my post archive its a realy long post you cant miss it.Ya also i chose a name for the main carecter i guess his name will be Tenchu named after my favorite game.Is Tenchu a good name?Ok here it goes..........

"So you think your ready to train with me" says Ressai."Ya ya old fart i was born ready"."Ok" says Ressai."First you must train in Karate"."But im all ready good at Karate" says Tenchu."Yes your very good but not quick enough" said Ressai.Then Ayame walked into the room."This will be your sparing partner" says Ressai."Hahaha this should be quick"."Hey im better at karate then i look" says Ayame.As Ressai steps back to let the two fight they run at each other at fool force.Then Ayame throws a quick kick at Tenchu.Tenchu doges the kick grabs Ayames leg and throughs her to the floor."Hey your not to bad at this" says Ayame.Ayame quickly gets back on her feet.Tenchu runs at her and throughs three quick punches.Ayame doges the first two then grabs Tenchus hand on the third punch.Then she throughs him over her shoulder.Then Tenchu spins around on the floor and trys triping Ayame.She jumps over the trip but the Tenchu kicks her in midair.The two jump to there feet.Ayame trys another kick and hits Tenchu right in the face.As Tenchu gets up Ayame gos for another kick from behind Tenchu.Tenchu quickly does a back flip over Ayame and kicks her to the ground.She gets up and they both start bocking and throughing punches.The fighting goes on for about an hour.Then they both fall to the floor gasping for air."Hmm not bad Tenchu" says Ressai."What do you mean not bad old fart ive been fighting for an hour and a half without stoping and all you can say is not bad!""I did a hell of a good job fighting your grand daughter"."Yes yes you did do good but you didnt win the fight and shes only a middle rank fighter".
"Your lieing" says Tenchu."No im not" says Ressai."Thats why i still need to train you.".........
After two months of training Tenchu masters karate."So you finaly mastered karate and you did it quicker than i thoughed you would now its time to learn how to use a katana" says Ressai."I know how to use a sword" says Tenchu.
"Is that so".Then Ressai hands Tenchu a sword."Lets see how good you are at useing a sword" says Ressai.Tenchu runs at Ressai swinging his katana in every direction.Ressai moves out of Tenchu's way and hits him over the head with the handle of his katana.
"This is gonna take longer than i thought" says Ressai.........
After two weeks of training with Ressai Tenchu wins in a sword match with Ressai and masters the ninja swords menship."Now heres your final test" says Ressai.Tenchu and Ressai walk to a huge dorme filled with trees like a forest."Hey theres no way that sword shop makes you enough money to give you a big house and a dorme with a forest in it old fart"
says Tenchu."That shop and this house has been in my family for years plus a lot of rich sword callecters buy those swords there worth a lot of money" says Ressai.
"This is your final test you will learn your ninja sneak attack skills by stay in this forest for two weeks and i have camras watching your every move and Ayame will be in the forest also you will both take different ways to the end and shall face off when you meet each other at the end by the way there are some wild animals in this forest you must learn to sneak up on them to kill them"."And what if i choose to leave th forest"."Oh this will keep you in" says Ressai.Ressai presses a botton and a huge steel door closes keeping Tenchu and Ayame in the forest for two weeks............

So was it good?I know its really long but i think its not half bad.So tell me what you think k.See ya!:)

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