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1991-09-13
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2007-04-23
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Hiya, I'm Lou. If your on my site your probally here to read my story. please i ask you any critism would be apperciated.
thank you, Lou
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Sunday, May 20, 2007
If Small Towns Were Found: Post 4
Victoria walks out into the yard leaving Owen alone in his anger. She looked acrossed the street to see a tall muscular boy with locks of ashen hair curling down near his ears, looking back at her. Their eyes met for a second and then a basket ball came flying at his head.
The ball hit him right in the temple and Victoria came running acrossed the street. the boy who threw the basketball was laughing hysterically. he looked just like the boy on the ground just older. Victoria reached the guy and kneeled beside him.
"are you ok?" she asked.
"I'm adam" the guy said.it was all he could say. Well "your pretty" came to his mind but he didn't want to look like a bumbling idiot.
"Victoria. It's a pleasure to meet you. you want to get up"she said.you could hear her accent."he is cute." she thought "really cute. Ok he was hot."
"oh yeah" he said with a smile. he was in love with this girl.
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Wednesday, May 2, 2007
If Small Towns Were Found: Post 3
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Victoria walks into the quiet house , her brother following closely behind her.
"I wonder where Mallory could be?" Victoria asked Owen with her light british accent. mallory was supposed to pick them up at the airport. but according to the fact that she wasn't there her cousins had to hail a cab.
"She's probally in that patrick guy's bed right now." owen said as he stomped into the house. she just left him there with his freaking 16 year old sister. he look like an idiot.
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Thursday, April 26, 2007
brief pause in the story
i think i'm in love
my heart is beating,
my head is sturring,
i think my smile is even brighter,
i want,
i need,
i'll die with out,
him
Words aren't able to explain this feeling i have.
i think it's love
it feels like what love should be
i had i everlove before,
should it feel like it does now
for not it doesn't
now feels like an intense whirlwind of everthing i have and will ever feel
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