Tuesday, October 10, 2006

   Naruto Story Chapter 8!
Chapter 8: Rima's Rage!
When he finally started breathing normally, he thanked me for saving him. "Is....Mizu....alright?" I looked over at her.
Keiko was examining her. "She has completely exausted her chakra, but she should be okay after she gets some rest."
Suddenly Rima was angry. "You almost let us get killed!" He shouted at Keiko. "Rima...are you okay?" I asked. He
ignored me. "You did'nt lift a finger to help us!" He was getting angrier by the minute. "Ninja need to know how to
rescue themselves in the toughest situations. I'm not going to always be there to get you out of trouble." Keiko
lectured. "She has got a point...." I said, trying to stop a problem before it started. "What if we would have died?!
What would you do then?!" He shouted. "I would have failed you. That is the only way you can fail by me. Die." She said.
I looked shocked. "So, if we could'nt defeat you in the first test, you would have killed us?" I asked. "Yep." She
replied. "Grrrr!" Rima ran at her. He lifted his fist to punch. Keiko grabbed his arm. "Do you want me to punish
you?" She said holding him up off the ground. "Rima, please stop it! Don't cause more trouble!" I begged. But
he would'nt listen. He broke away from her grasp, then pulled out knives and threw them at her. "Did'nt you learn
your lesson the first time?" She caught them and threw them back. He sank into the ground. After a few moments,
he shot up under Keiko and tripped her. Then he came out of the ground and punched her in the back while she had
her guard down. She spun around and grabbed him by the neck. "You have been very bad. I'm going to have to punish
you now." She said glaring at him. "No! Don't kill him!" I got scared. "Do your worst." Rima said, looking at her
with a bring-it-on look. Moments later, she had tied him up to a tree with an iron chain. He did'nt struggle a
bit. He just glared at her. "You all pass. Remember to tell Mizu when she wakes up. Dismissed!" She smiled and
left.

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Sunday, October 8, 2006

   Naruto Story Chapter 7
Chapter 7: The Second Test! Life or Death!
"Are you okay, Rima?" Mizu asked, looking at him sitting by the tree. "Hmph. She can't take me down that
easily." He said in a mean tone. "Okay....test two...hmm...ya know...I did'nt think you would get this
far.....so I have'nt thought about a second test yet." Keiko said, smiling. "WHAT?!" We all shouted.
"Hehe.." She rubbed the back of her neck. "How about we take a lunch break and take the second test after
wards? It's almost noon." She asked, looking at her watch. I decided to take my team to my grandma's res-
araunt for lunch. We ate alot of ramen and talked about ourselves. Even Rima said something. When we got
back to the forest, she said we would be around water for our second test. "Oh yeah!" Mizu said. "Water
is my element!" She exlaimed proudly. "Swimmming is a great way to build muscle. The stronger you are, the
more chakra and better control you have." She winked. When we got to the river, she told us to swim from one
end to the other. It's not a race, so you don't have to rush to get ahead of each other. Just make it to the
other end." She dissappeared. "I'll be waiting at the other side! Ready...set.......go!" She called. We swam
off. Mizu was ahead of us. I swam as fast as I could, but I could'nt keep up with Mizu. Rima was way behind.
"I....hate......swimming!" He shouted. We were running out of energy and getting slower and slower when we
heard a roaring noise. "It's too loud out here!!" Rima called. By that time, we were all together. Soon,
the water started pulling us along. "Oh no! It's a waterfall!" Mizu shouted over the roaring noise. I saw
Keiko on the riverbank. "Oh I forgot about the waterfall....this will be a great way to pass the second
test! Save each other from drowning!" She called. "What?!" I thought. "She wants us to try to get out
of this by ourselves?" I thought. "We are all gonna die!" Rima said. We were getting closer to the waterfall.
Rima spotted a rock standing up from the top of the waterfall. He pulled out some rope, and grabbed the rock.
He quickly tied the rope around the rock and grabbed my arm as I was falling down the waterfall. Then Mizu
grabbed my foot. "Gotcha." Rima smiled as we hung there. But, the rock was so slippery and the water was
rushing so fast that the rope slipped off and we all tumbled down. Rima and I held on to each other and
screamed. Mizu concentrated her chakra. "It's no use! I'm not strong enough to break our fall! She called as
we tumbled closer to the sharp rocks and rough water. "Rocks! Rima shouted. Rima
let go and made some hand signs. suddenly the rocks busted into sections big enough to land on. I grabbed
Mizu and Rima's hands and turned so I would hopefully land on my feet on a large section of rock. "Are you
insane? You'll die if you try to land like that! Mizu mustered up all of the chakra she had and we floated safely
to the rock. We sat there gasping for air, soaked. But our troubles were'nt over yet. The rock flipped over and we
were back in the water again. Mizu was too weak to swim because she used all of her chakra to break our fall. Rima
was holding on to her, fighting the tide. Keiko was watching. "Keep going guys you are doing great!" She called
from the bank, running after us. "Worthless teacher! Is she trying to get us killed?" Rima said, fighting the
water and holding Mizu at the same time. Suddenly I remembered a jutsu I had just learned. I threw some roses
in a straight line accross the river to the bank. Rose whip jutsu! I shouted, making signs. The roses turned ino a
whip. Keko picked up the end of the whip avoiding the sharp, poisonus barbs. She carefully pulled me in. I reached over
to grab Rima's hand, but he was too far. "Rima!" I shouted over the rushing water. "Don't worry, I'll find a way out of
this!" He shouted, still fighting to get to the shore. "We've got to save Rima and Mizu!" I shouted when I got to the
riverbank. "Yes I know!" Keiko said as we ran after him as the current carried him down the river. Soon, he got to an-
other waterfall that dumped into the ocean! I got an idea. "Hold on Rima! I'm coming!" I pulled out a rope I was
carrying, and tied one end to a tree. Then I tied the other end around my waist and jumped into the river. I fought
the rushing water as I got closer to Rima. "Here.....save Mizu.." He pushed her to me. I grabbed her around the waist.
"What about you?!" I called as he got closer to the fall. "Don't worry about me!!" He shouted, and then he dissappea-
red over the waterfall. Keiko pulled us back to the shore. I felt like crying. "We have got to go see if Rima is okay!"
I shouted to Keiko, then took off down the river. When I did'nt see him anywhere around the waterfall, I started to
cry. "He sacrificed himself to save us..." I said to Keiko. "Hey! Is anyone up there?!" I heard a voice call from the edge
of the cliff. I looked down, and saw him hanging on to a rock sticking out of the cliff. He was so far down, he was almost
about to be swept away by the water. "Rima!" I was so happy. "Hold on, I'll save you! Keiko, do you have any ropes or
anything?" I asked her. "Yeah....she reached into her coat, and pulled a rope off her belt. "Here." I threw it down to
Rima. "Grab a hold!" I called. He reached up and grabbed the rope. He clung to it. Keiko and I had to struggle to pull
him up. He sat on the bank, breathing heavily.
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Thursday, October 5, 2006

   Naruto Story Chapter 6!
Chapter 6: The Three Trials!
When I got home, my mom and dad began asking questions about my new teacher. "Her name is Keiko Megumi. She
acts like one of us." My dad looked worried. "Don't underestimate her. Looks can be deciveing." It was gett-
ing late, so I decided to go to bed. I had a dream about my dad. He was talking to my mom about Keiko. "You
are worried about Ari, are'nt you?" My mom asked. "Yes...Keiko may be young...but she is a powerful jonin.
Her parents are from the Land of Wind, The Village Hidden in Sand to be exact. She picked up alot of her
jutsus from them and thier home village. She may not act serious, but will get scary when she's mad." My
dad said, with a scared look. As a black ops agent, he knew alot about people from the village. Then I
woke up to my mom calling that if I did'nt wake up soon, I was going to be late for my training with
my new sensei. I got up and got dressed as usual, then walked downstairs. "So you're finally up." My
mom turned away from the stove and smiled. "Dad already left. Want some pancakes?" She asked, in her
usual cheerful mood. I ate and left. I had to run to meet everyone on time.
"YOU'RE TWELVE SECONDS LATE!" Keiko screamed when we got there. "I'm sorry Keiko Sensei! I got here as
soon as I could!" I said, scared by the dream and the way my dad acted. "What's wrong with you?" Rima
asked, looking at me like I was insane. Mizu looked disgusted. "Calm down! I was just kidding with you.
Can't you take a joke?" Keiko said smiling. I felt humiliated. "Anyway, you have to pass at least two
out of the three tests to move on to become a real genin. I will explain the goal. If
you are real ninja, you should be able to figure the rest of it out it out." She winked and then dissappeared.
For the first test you have to do is find and defeat me!" She called from nowhere. I remembered something my dad had
told me once during a brutal training session. "The only way ninja can defeat the opponent is to attack
them with the intention to kill." I thought for a moment. "What are we supposed to do?! How can we find
what we can't see? I can't even sense her with my psychic jutsus!!" Mizu went crazy. Rima kept his cool
and thought through the problem. "Listen up! Whe have to work together to find her!" I finally spoke up.
"You see, if we don't work together, we will never be able to defeat a jonin!" I explained to Mizu and
Rima. "Wow, she's smart. I did'nt expect those brats to figure it out." Keiko thought from where she was
hiding. Mizu concentrated. "I can feel her now!" She whispered something to Rima, then he took off. "Fol-
low him, Ari!" She instructed. So Rima and I rushed through the woods. Then we finally saw Keiko. Rima
pulled out some kunai knives, and threw them at Keiko. She did'nt even look up. She caught them with
ease. "Oh no! She caught them without even looking!" Rima said quietly. When I looked back to where she
was standing, she was'nt there. "What's up?" She said from behind me. Suddenly I was deep in the forest
all alone. "Rima? Mizu?" I called. No answer. I walked a little bit, them saw both my teammates badly
wounded. I was about to scream, but then I thought, "How could they be hurt so bad when no one is around
to cause it? Keiko could'nt do all this so quickly!" I got mad. Keiko was using an illusion to trick me.
"Hey Keiko! Your stupid illusion whon't work! A ninja should be able so see through cheap tricks!!" I
shouted. "W-what are you doing.....?" The Rima illusion said. "Help....us...!" The illusion Mizu said.
"You're not real! It's all and illusion!!" I closed my eyes. She still would'nt give up. Soon, the ill-
usion faded. I heard my teammates saying somehting from below. I jumped out of the tree I was standing
in, and saw them holding Keiko. "Just in time!" Mizu said, grinning. I jumped in, and punced Keiko. The
Keiko I punched turned into a log. "A replacement jutsu!" Rima said, shocked. "Very good!" Keiko jumped
down and kicked Rima hard. "Aagh!" He flew backwards and hit a tree. Mizu made hand signs and then held
out her hands. Water came from no where and splashed over Keiko. I looked up, and saw a Keiko watching the
fight from a tree. I pulled out some roses I kept in my sash, and threw them. They burst into needles, which
struck Keiko in the tree. She fell out. "Okay, okay you got me." She said, standing up. I was distracted wa-
tching Mizu blow away my clone, I let my guard down for a second. I did'nt know you were keen enough to spot
me in the tree. I should have been on guard at all times. Anyway, you pass the first test! She stuck her
thumb up and smiled with approval.

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Wednesday, October 4, 2006

   Naruto Story Chapter 5!
Chapter 5: Keiko Megumi!
I decided to take a nap during lunch. As I began to walk away to my secret hide away on the hill,
Mizu stopped me. "Since we are on the same team, wanna have lunch together? I'll go drag Rima out of wherever he may be hiding ." She said, smiling. "Well, have
fun with that. I was just going home." "Why would you want to take a nap now? You could get sunburn!!" She said accusingly. "What?! How did you know that?!" I could'nt
believe it. She knew exactly what I was planning on doing. Mizu grinned. "I'm psychic. I have'nt
told anyone yet, but since we're on a team you would have found out anyway. My specailty is reading
minds. It's fun to see what people are acually thinking." She winked. "It takes chakra and concen-
tration to do, though." "My team really is full of wierdos!!!" I thought as she explained.
Rima met us after lunch. (Mizu made me sit and talk to her the whole time.) "So where is our jonin?"
He muttered so quietly I barely heard him. "Wow, that's the most I ever heard him say..." I thought.
"Iruka gave me this letter. We should have met him in the classroom, but Iruka said he would be wai-
ting for us out here." Mizu said as we walked through the woods. "I guess our sensei does things a
little differently...." Rima said. Soon we reached a clearing. A woman was standing there with her
back to us. "So where is our sensei? Maybe that pretty lady over there can tell us." Mizu said.
(Poor naive Mizu.) "I'll go talk to her." I said boldly. I crept over. She did'nt seem to notice.
Mizu ran off straight for her, kunai knife in hand. "Hey lady! What have you done with our sensei?"
Mizu stopped right behind her. She turned around. Pretty green eyes, long blonde hair, and very
thin. "Who are you three rugrats?" She asked, looking at us disgusted. Mizu looked suprised. "I'm
Mizu Hyuga!!" She exlaimed proudly. "Oh...I'm Ari Yukino.." I said quietly. "Me? Rima Hime." Rima
said, practically whispering. "And you guys are Team 11?" She asked in disbeleif. We nodd-
ed. "NO WAY!" She swung her hand, slapping Mizu because she was the closest. "Aaaah! What was that for?!"
Mizu exlaimed, reaching up and lightly touching her cheek, which was red and swollen. "Oh I'm so sorry.
I just could'nt believe I had you weird looking children for students. A purple fairy, a loud-mouth brat, and Mr. Mystery."
She lauged. "I'm not a fairy. I'm a Purple Rose." I said, angry." "I'm not a brat, I'm not a just a brat, I am an ESP brat." Mizu said proudly.
Rima said nothing. "Okay I guess I'm stuck with you guys so we need to get to know each other. Each of you tell me about yourselves. Ya know, likes, dislikes, dreams
for the future..hobbies...stuff like that. Purple Rose Fairy can start." She said giggling. "What about you?
We don't know who you are yet!" I yelled at her. "Oh sorry. I'm...." She began, doing a little pose. "Keiko
Megumi!!!! And....let's see....I like alot of things...I don't really hate anything...I haven't really thought
about what I want in the future...and I have alot of hobbies." "What?! You did'nt really tell us anything but
your name!! Anyway, I'll go ahead. My name is Ari Yukino, as you know. I like....umm...."I blushed and thought
about Neji. "Strong ninja guys....desserts...animals...and flowers. I dislike school, siblings, and exersice.
My dreams for the future are to be the first female hokage, and my hobbies are gardening and working at my
grandma's ramen shop. I also like to spend time with my precious Kitty." "Umm.....okay...let's move on to
hyper blue hair." Keiko said. "I'm Mizu Hyuga,which means Water. I like....swimming,
marine animals, and fish. I hate fire, sand and quiet people. My dreams for the future are...I want to
live near the ocean with a family, and my hobbies are, swimming, fishing, eating, sleeping and...
reading people's minds." Mizu said, sticking her tounge out. "Interesting...okay next." Keiko pointed
to Rima. "Rima Hime. I hate alot of things, I don't really like anything....I can't explain my hobbies
to you and my dream is none of your buisness." He glared at Keiko. "Ummm....okay...." She
looked scared and confused at the same time. "Tomorrow we will start your training. You have to pass three
tests to start your missons!" She held up three fingers. Bring your ninja stuff with you tomorrow morning.
Be here around....like seven okay?" She grinned and left. We watched her until she was gone. "This is
going to be very wierd." I thought as we left for home./ Chapter 6 coming 10/05.

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Tuesday, October 3, 2006

   Naruto Story Chapter 4!
Chapter 4: Team 11!
The next morning I put on my leaf headband like I used to do with my old one. "Hmmm..." I looked
in the mirror. "It looks pretty good." I walked downstairs. "You are supposed to wear it on your
forehead." My dad said frowning. "It is on my forehead. I just pushed it up a little to hold back
my hair. I left quickly to aviod any more argument. At school, Iruka said we had to be in three-
man squads. "I just hope we get along and understand teamwork." I said as he called the teams.
When I heard him say Neji's name, I looked up. "Ari...say Ari next..." "Rock Lee," "Ari...Ari.
..Ari!" I hoped. "TenTen." "No no no no no!" I thought. He called alot of othere teams but I
wasn't paying attention. "Okay Team 11: Ari..." "Oh!" I looked up. "Mizu." He called the girl
beside me. She had short blue hair and was a Hyuga. "And Rima." He called the guy at the end of
the table I was sitting at. He had black hair spiked up similar to Naruto's and was as cool and
mysterious as Sasuke. He just was'nt as popular with the girls. He did'nt have any friends. "Why
am I paired with wierdos?" I thought looking at my new team. Mizu suddenly turned to me and smiled.
Rima just sat there, like he did'nt hear anything Iruka just said. "You will meet your instuctor
after lunch. Until then, class dissmissed!" Iruka said.

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Monday, October 2, 2006

   The Naruto Story Chapter 3!
Chapter 3: Naruto's Secret
My parents were there after I came out holding my headband. My parents were there, sure enough. "Good work.
You are a real ninja now!" My dad said. I looked over to the swing. Naruto was sitting there,
depressed. Mizuki walked over to him and they left. That was wierd..." I said. "What?" My mom asked. "Oh nothing. I've got to get to work." I said leaving. "Be home by seven!" My
mom called after me. I went to my gradma's ramen restaraunt and put on an apron. "Did you graduate
today?" She asked me as I started cooking. "Yeah but Naruto did'nt..." I said with a little dissa-
ppointment. "That troublemaker? After what happened twelve years ago, he would be a very danger-
ous ninja." My grandma said worried. "But he's not the fox! He's Naruto!" I hated it when people
compared him to the fox demon. He was much too nice and funny to be a vicous monster. "Dear, he
has the fox sealed inside him. He could unleash it any moment and destroy our village!" Grandma
always worried about stuff like that. A few hours later, Grandma said I could leave. I decided to
go to my favorite place, a hill near the woods. I sat there and watched the moon and stars. Soon,
I heard sounds. I walked into the woods a little ways and saw Naruto holding the Scroll of Sealing.
He was looking at Mizuki. "If you ever lay a hand on my sensei....I'll kill you!" He said, with an
evil look in his eyes. "Let's see what you can do, Nine Tailed Fox!" Mizuki said. Naruto used
shadow clone justsu and beat up Mizuki. "Wow...that is an avanced jutsu!" I thought. Then I decided
to leave. I did'nt want them to see me. I went home./Chapter four coming 10/3!

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Sunday, October 1, 2006

   Naruto Story Chapter Two
Since I have some fans of my story, i'll post one chapter a day! (Thank you fans of Naruto Story!)/
Chapter 2:The Final Test!
When I got to school, I saw Iruka was'nt there yet. I hurried to my seat, near my crush, Neji Hyuga.
Soon, Iruka came in, holding a tied-up Naruto. He lectured him and then told everyone we had to
take a review test on the Transformation Jutsu. And even the ones who passed still had to take it!
"Man, Naruto always gets all of us into trouble!" I thought as I watched Sakura and Sasuke transform
into Iruka. Then it was Naruto's turn. "This is a total waste of time..." Shikamaru said. "We always
pay for your screw-ups!" Ino said. "Like I care!" Naruto said stepping up. Then he transformed. As
soon as I glanced at it, I covered my eyes and screamed. "That is so gross! How did he come up with
that?!" I thought. Iruka got mad and yelled at him agian. Then it was my turn. I transformed into my
cat. "Good." Iruka said. "Yes! I passed!" I said quietly. After everyone had gone, he procced to the
final test. "The final test is on the Clone Jutsu." Iruka said. "When your name is called, procced
to the testing room." When he finally called me, I went into the room. Iruka and Mizuki were there,
and a bunch of leaf headbands where on the table. "Okay..." I said quietly. "I've got to do this
right so I can graduate with Neji!" I thought. I managed to make three clones. "Good." Iruka looked
pleased. "You graduate."/
Chapter three coming 10/02


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Thursday, September 28, 2006

My Naruto Story!
This is a story I made up: My Version of Naruto! Tell me how you like it plz! This is chapter 1:
/Chapter 1:Morning
"Ari, wake up! Today is the day you take the test to become a true ninja!" I woke up and rubbed my
eyes. My mom is such a pain. But my dad is worse. He has been training me for years on how to be
a good ninja. Now it all comes down to today. "Alright I'm coming!" I shouted. I got up and changed
into my purple dress and brushed my purple hair. Then I put on my headband and thought,"Soon I am
gonna replace this with a leaf headband." I walked downstairs and sat at the table. My dad, as
always, immetiatley started lecturing me. "All of my training comes down to today. I want to see you
come home wearing a leaf headband. Better yet, how about we come to school and meet you when you
graduate! How about it?" He said looking at mom. "Yes that is a wonderful idea!" My mom said
happily. "You guys are such a pain!" I said leaving. As I walked to school, I saw someone had
painted graffitti all over the hokage faces, then I saw Naruto running from two other ninja guys.
"He is always getting into trouble..." I said watching the chase. Then I remembered that I should'nt
hang around or I would be late, so I hurried to school./
So what do you think?

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Sunday, September 10, 2006

   Anime!
At 12:30 a.m on September 9th, history was made! The premere episode of the new Bleach anime came on Cartoon Network's Adult Swim. My friend and I were so excited, so we stayed up late to watch it, even though we had to get up early the next day. My friend fell asleep (how could she?) but I stayed awake the entire episode. It was so awsome. I have a new favorite anime and a new favorite character. Ichigo from Bleach. I can't wait until the second episode!
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Tuesday, September 5, 2006

   Whoo-hoo!
Oh yes! My first e-card is finally on the site! I'm so happy! I always wanted to get noticed for something, and now I can! My first e-card is a picture of Sakura, looking kind of sad. And it says, Is that Sasuke wearing a bunny costume? I thought this would make Sasuke fans (like me!) laugh. I hope you enjoy it! More are on the way!
^_^
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