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Wednesday, July 5, 2006


Uh...Yeah.
Wassup? Im good. Today I wrote the first chapter of my story i told u about i was gonna write. its called Haruko. and youre probably dying to know what happened in the first chapter. well first of all, i sent it to my friend and she said it was so damn good. she said its like from a real published book. damn im good... sigh, still begging for me to post it? fine, fine. but u HAVE to comment it and whatever the comment is i just might put the next chapter in one of my posts. enjoy.

[.::+HARUKO+::.]

Haruko: The main character of the story and hero. She is the princess and a warrior of the land. She is 16 years old.

Naoki: Haruko's childhood friend. He helps Haruko fight the evil that has come upon the land. He is also an orphan, for his parents died when the evil attacked them. He now lives with Haruko. He is 16 years old.

Long ago, in the time of kingdoms and castles, there was a land of peace. Everything was in harmony, with the King and Queen ruling fairly and kindly. But one day, disaster struck as evil tried to take over the peaceful land. War struck, and this war lasted for a long time. During the beginning of the horrible war, a baby girl was born, who would soon become a brave warrior. This girl, was the princess of the land, and her name was Haruko....
16 YEARS OF FIGHTING.................
Haruko stepped into her room and grabbed her sword. She couldn't wait to help out in the war, for her father allowed her and thought she was mature enough to do it. "We have been fighting for years, and this year, it shall end," Haruko said. Suddenly someone came in and greeted her. "Hello your majesty." Haruko turned around to see her childhood friend, Naoki. "Well hello Naoki. Why are you here?" Haruko said. "I heard that you were going to be fighting in the war. I want to help too," Naoki replied. "But, I don't want you to get hurt. Are you sure?" Haruko said. "I felt the same way too," Naoki said walking over to Haruko, "So I'm going to protect you, with my life." Naoki smiled. Haruko's heart beated and she blushed. "Why am I feeling this way? I've never felt like this toward Naoki before..." Haruko thought. "Hmm?" Naoki felt Haruko's forehead, "Are you feeling alright?" "Oh, um..." Haruko said, "I'm fine..." Naoki took his hand off her forehead, "Good. I wouldn't want you sick on your first day. So, are we off?" "Heh heh, sure. Let's go," Haruko replied picking up her sword again. And so, they took off to the battlefield, with excitment and bravery rushing through them.
The two stepped into the battle field, seeing the horror of the violence and misery their people were going through. "Okay, you go this way, and I'll go the other way," Haruko said. "Let's do this," Naoki said. Naoki and Haruko charged at the enemy, slashing their swords away. Arrows flew all over the place, swords and other weapons were everywhere in sight. Was Haruko afraid? No. Even if she's a girl, she can still be brave. Haruko struck an enemy as Naoki slashed his sword and destroyed the enemies around him. Soon the enemy gave up for the day, promising they would come back. Naoki and Haruko were covered in cuts and blood. Haruko panted as she said, "We did great, didn't we?" "I'll say," Naoki said, "I'm glad you're still okay...you are okay, right?" "Don't worry, I'm fine. Some cuts and bruises here and there, but I'm alright," Haruko responded. "Well, lets go then," Naoki said. Haruko smiled and followed her friend.
"You did good today Haruko, you too Naoki," said Haruko's father, "Are you willing to fight tomorrow?" Haruko said, "Well, I'm game if Naoki is!" "Heh, well you know I am!" Naoki said. "Very well then," said Naoki's father, "Clean up your cuts and get a good rest." "Yes father," said Haruko. Haruko and Naoki left to go to their rooms. "Um...Naoki?" Haruko said. "Yeah?" Naoki replied. "Do you think...um..." Haruko stuttered. "Do I think what?" Naoki said. "Oh, never mind. It's not important," Haruko said. "Okay then If you say so," Naoki said, "Well, good night..." "Good night," Haruko said. "What's this feeling I'm getting? It's like....I'm in love with him or something...." Haruko thought as she went to her room.
The next morning, Haruko and Naoki met in the hallway in their battle armor. "G-good morning Naoki," Haruko said. "Good morning," Naoki said, "Should we go eat breakfast now and head off to the battlefield?" "It shall be my pleasure," Haruko said. They walked to the dining room and had a big breakfast. Food was spread all over the table. Naoki and Haruko ate without a sound and left for the battlefield. As they walked to the battlefield, Naoki and Haruko were silent. but soon Haruko spoke up. "Um, Naoki?" "Yeah Haruko?" said Naoki. "I-I.....I don't want you to get hurt!" Haruko exclaimed. "What? What do you mean?" Naoki said astonished. "It's just that...It's just that since I'm an only child, and you moved in and all...I dont want you to die or anything! You're the first true friend I've ever had. You're really precious to me," Haruko said as her eyes filled with tears. Naoki hugged Haruko and said, "Haruko, I cant' make a promise that I won't die, but I can promise that you won't be lonely if I really do die." "Wh-what do you mean?" Haruko said. "I mean that when I die, I will always be with you, as an angel, protecting you at any cost," Naoki said. Haruko's tears of sadness turned into tears of joy. "Thank you Naoki. You're the best." She hugged Naoki tightly, and they continued walking to the battlefeild.
Naoki and Haruko slashed their swords at the enemy, killing them all. Suddenly, an enemy was coming after Haruko with a sword, and Haruko was not aware of this. "Haruko! Watch out!!!" Naoki shouted. "Huh?" Haruko said turning around. She couldn't escape. The enemy was coming at her fast. Haruko was suddenly pushed aside, and when she saw what had happned while she was moved aside, her eyes filled with tears and her heart was broken.
~TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2 OF HARUKO~
if i post the second chapter, u may cry when u read it. i havent written it yet, but i have ideas on what to write. please tell me what u think. if i get great comments and all, i might post the next chapter. lets see what else do i have to say....? oh i know. i was told on how to like find music 4 my site on my last post, and im still having problems. if u have music on your site, can u please tell me where u found the music and stuff? pleeeeease? i reeeeally want music on my site!!!! if u help me out and your advice and whatever works, i will return the favor and sign your gb or something. or if i get A LOT of help that works, i might post the second chapter of Haruko. thanks bunches. well i guess thats all i have to say. cya!

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