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Wednesday, November 23, 2005


   yes i kno...
my sister and i have teamed up and written two stories on fanfiction.net here is my profile
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/782588/
mine is crystal selkie
momigi's is the demon neko kristal
have fun reading and please review!
i want ppl to read this story tho.
here's the first 4 pages. the chapter is 9 and a half pages long.
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Ch.1: the gods and demons, pt. 1
"good morning tiara!"
"nyaaa~..."
tiara was your average god. her powers were the infernos of fire and the calming wind. she always wore 3 connected pendants, for those were her portable weapons. she had red hair with aqua streaks and deep green eyes. her attire consisted of crimzon dresses with sapphire socks and sky blue boots.
"c'mon sleepyhead! you can't always wake up at noon!!" davis laughed.
"says you..." she huffed.
davis was a god, but average was all he ever lacked. his powers included the terra and the mighty waters, and the indestructable steel. Davis had blonde hair,one red eye, and one blue eye.he wore a dark red shirt under a dark green shirt, with a ripped right arm. he also had a mud belt, blue pants, mud boots, and white socks. no one but tiara knew he was half demon, then again, she was half human. they were best friends.
"get out of your spring green pajamas and into your normal clothes tiara!" davis ordered.
"I'm going already! you shouldn't talk, light blue chicken boy!" tiara teased playfully.
"hmf. meanie." davis blushed.
"I'm going to take a shower. will you make breakfast today? oh, and your hair..."
"i know, it's messy. don't worry, i'll make breakfast."
"thank you!"
while in the shower, as it was to be expected, she heard davis yelling.
"AHHH NOT The claws... owwwwie~!!"
she yelled to him,"DON'T LET NEKO CLIMB ON YOU THEN!!!"
"it's her fault! she started i- AHHH NOT THE WAFFLES!!!!!!"
tiara giggled to herself. always making waffles for breakfast, sandwiches for lunch, and soup for dinner. this was the main reason she always cooked.
When she came out an hour later, she was all ready to go. Davis, hoever, was not.
"Your CRAZY Neko has resulted in tearing up my clothes. AGAIN." he said, on the verge of yelling.
"Well she likes to be played with, and you just stop. Besides, I told you not to wear your red sweater..." she replied
"It's also not my fault that Tanni came out here too."
"Oh, but it IS your fault for picking a snake for a pet."
"Sarcasm, Tiara. Tanni doesn't like to be left out."
"Yeah, I know. Though he's really cute!"
"But breakfast...it got burnt..." Tiara stared at the pile of ashes that was waffles and tried not to laugh.
"It's not the first time you set fire to the waffles." Tiara smiled.
"HEY!! I'm not very good at cooking! You know that..." Davis pouted.
"AHH!! I'm sorry! Ididn't mean for it to be mean! I was just teasing! You cook great, and you know I know that!!!" Tiara apologized.
"Well you were saying so many hurtful things, I ju-" He never got to finish, for Neko jumped on his back and sent him crashing onto the table. Tanni was wrapped around his arm for safety. Neko's tail was bristled with enjoyment.
for a second or two, Tiara hesitated to speak.
"...Bite your tounge?"
"yeth..."
"Is it bleeding...?" her voice started to become urgent.
"Idon't know..."his voice gurgled a bit. Tiara picked up his head, and sure enough, blood was comming out of his mouth.
"W-well, it's n-not th-that bad..." Tiara stuttered.
"I can uste my powerth du remove da blood-"
"NO!!! you'll probably get your blood to flow faster!! Here, I'll fix it..." Tiara said calmly.
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there ya go. constructive criticism welcome. and don't hesitate to say it's good or bad.
~janbata ne~

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