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• 2004-08-14
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• Call me Hakai ~ "The Destruction of All", and I thought it ironic since Hakkai is my fave chara in any anime series. I found out Kigeki means "comedy" so I had to change it.
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• Following Bushido and I guess I could list poetry... *shrugs*
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Wednesday, August 18, 2004
Have no idea what to do...
I'm just sitting here thinking... BTW, WATCH FOR THE FALLING PIANOS! (they tend to appear when this happens)
Anyway, I'm almost done with episode 4 of Visionaries right now, and I've kinda hit a dead end at the moment... so I decided to get on here to waste time while pondering... IF ANY OF YOU HAVE NOT READ MY STORY, PLEASE DO... and if you choose not to, then screw you too. All I ask for is some feedback on it... that's it. If it's too long to read in one sitting, read it in parts. I'm just trying to work out some bugs in the plot, that's all.
Pointers I could use if I need them: explain something more, work on dialogue, etc. Don't worry about detail of the story... I plan on adding more later anyway... I kinda cut it down to post on here too.
So please... if you read, then comment, and if you don't read... well... *begins to unsheath Katana*
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Encounter in the Rain(think of taking this, and you'll regret it):
The sound of rain fills the air
As a twilight sun fades into dark
Two men exchange glances of fire
And stand ready to become a sinner
Light reveals the image of their surroundings
As lightning strikes in the distance
Reflections of each individual gleam off the others blade
As their eyes continue to exchange their hatred of each other
Their blades shine as they strike
Leaving only the sound of the wind to be heard
As the storm weakens, one man treads away
As the rain continues to fall on the shell left behind |
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