Tuesday, December 18, 2007

   like i said here's the yaoi dn angel story.......
comment even if u hate it!!!

DN Angel *yaoi*
(Dedicated to my new friend mylordsirtaco!!)

Satoshi Hiwatari- 14 yrs old, he has shirt blue hair, he has blue eyes as well, his alter-ego Krad. Blood type-A.

Krad- he is over 300 yrs old, he has long blonde hair, golden eyes and his real name: Kokuyoku. His enemy Dark. He will stop at nothing to kill him.

Daiki Niwa- short white hair, he is around 40. Brown eyes and once had Dark 40 yrs ago.

Daisuke Niwa- 13 yrs old (this one he’s starts as 13) short red hair, eyes. His alter-ego: Dark. He has a mega crush on Risa.

Emiko Niwa- brown eyes and hair and she never acts her age. She is very hyperactive.

Kosuke Niwa- he is 38. His hair, like Dai’s, is spiky and short only his is dark brown/black. His eyes are brown and he is very clumsy, like Daisuke, easily embarassed by his wife, but can be serious.

Riku Harada- 14, and she’s the elder twin. Short red hair, brown eyes. And she is more like a tomboy, and more serious then her sister.

Risa Harada- the younger twin, she has long brown hair and eyes. She’s clumsy, innocent, and your typical girly girl

Takeshi Saehara- 14, short brown/ black hair, brown eyes and He is very excitable, friendly, rude and irresponisible. He is an enthusiastic reporter or journalist who uses his father's contacts to obtain news. He really thinks he’s a lady’s man.

Dark Mousy- he’s 300 yrs old, has purple hair and eyes. His real name is Koki-Yoku which literally means “black wings”.

Wiz- his fur colour is white it’s short, red eyes, he’s like a rabbit and he hates water and Krad, but loves Daisuke and strawberries. He can’t say Daisuke and say’s “daisuki” which means I love you.



Daisuke niwa is an average teenager, who has a mega crush on one of the harada twins, risa. he has no idea that on his 14th birthday his life would change drastically by none other than the legendary thief dark mousey.
"dai wake up!" daisuke's mom, emiko yelled. after a couple minutes, daiki, his grandfather looked up. " wiz, go and wake him up." kyuu! wiz nodded and ran to his room. wiz has been in the niwa family as long as dark has. he jumped and began licking daisuke's face. "I’m up!" he put wiz down and. "man you weigh a lot for something so small." daisuke smiled as he pet wiz. kyu! "about time." emiko looked at her son. "daisuke your 14th birthday is coming up." daiki said, daisuke nodded. "aren't you excited?" "about what mom? dark taking over my body so he can steal! no, that bastard can rot in hell for all I care!" daisuke yelled slamming the front door.
"niwa over here!!" takeshi saehara, dai's friend, yelled waving. "oh hey saehara." "oh niwa did you do your homework?" daisuke dropped his backpack and yelled. "what's wrong with niwa, is he ok?" risa asked. "he didn't do his homework did he?" riku asked. "niwa's doing the 'holy shit I forgot my homework' dance." saehara joked. the bell rang they ran in. daisuke stopped. " hey saehara I’ll catch up with you later ok." "sure niwa." "satoshi hiwatari." daisuke said turning around. "niwa you actually remembered me? I’m slightly surprised, your not as dense as I thought." hiwatari smiled. "don't play stupid!!" daisuke yelled. " how can I forget." daisuke sighed. satoshi laughed abit. " daisuke you're telling me a little kiss on the cheek is making your head spin?" daisuke looked to the side. satoshi put his hands on dai's face and pushed himself on him. " you still love risa don't you?" " yeah but hiwatari why are you doing this?" " your to cute to pass up."" hiwatari we're going to be late for class." daisuke mumbled. " don't worry your with me you won't get in trouble. " satoshi said slowly slipping his thumb in dai's mouth. daisuke's face was red, and satoshi smirked and drew closer to his face. 'why is my heart pounding?' daisuke thought. Satoshi was close to kissing daisuke when a teacher cleared his throat. “ kid’s.. to class, please.” daisuke nodded and went under satoshi’s arm and once the teacher was out of view satoshi grabbed his arm and pulled dai back. “Your not going away so easily, niwa.” satoshi pulled daisuke out of the school and into his car.
“ hey niwa!! Where were you all morning?” saehara asked abit concerned. “ I was in the office, I had abit of trouble that’s all, nothing big.” daisuke smiled. “Niwa, your face is pink, what happened?” “ oh maybe I’m getting sick.. Listen saehara I’m gonna go to class. Ok?” “ sure, see ya.” saehara sighed and went on walking. Daisuke went into the restroom and sighed deeply. “ please tell I didn’t do what I did.. Please let that be a dream!” daisuke yelled and punched the mirror in the boy’s restroom. Daisuke put his head down and sighed. “It’s ok.. It’s not that bad as I’m making it out to be...” he smiled a bit, but it vanished as soon as it appeared. “..what am I thinking!! It was exactly as it was!” he grabbed his head and backed up. “Niwa are you ok? Saehara told me you were acting a bit weird.?” “Everything’s fine.” he smiled at risa, and walked on home. Daisuke laughed a bit and opened the door. “Sweety there you are, where have you been?” emiko asked. “At school, mom..where else could I be?” daisuke asked. “ heh, daisuke she meant school was out.. About an hour ago.” “ oh, that grandpa.. I had to stay after school, mom.” he lied. “Oh, well it’s almost time and we want to prepare you for it.” daisuke sighed for he knew in a couple days, dark would be alive once more.. To tell you the truth he wasn’t one bit ready for this great preparation!
Finally the great day was here! Daisuke’s 14th birthday! He was asleep and remembering what happened to him and hiwatari in his car a couple days ago. He closed his eyes and remembered everything as if it was just yesterday. ~flashback~ hiwatari put daisuke in his car and began kissing him slowly. “Daisuke... are you ready for this?” “ no, satoshi.. Stop.. Please.” satoshi smiled leaning and licking his ear. “ begging just turns me on even more.” daisuke gasped abit and his face turned redder as satoshi kissed his neck. ~flashback interupted!~ the door swung opened and daisuke fell to the ground and hit his head on the corner of the desk.
“Sorry sweety, but it’s time.” daisuke got up slowly. “ alright.” “I have to stop thinking about it.. It’s only gonna make things worse.. But to think hiwatari did those things to me.. I just can’t stop thinking about it.” daisuke walked downstairs and wiz jumped his shoulder. “ ready daisuke?” “ yes grandpa.. I suppose so.” emiko smiled and took out a picture of risa. Daisuke grabbed his head in pain, but while he was in the middle of changing an explosion was heard upstairs. Wiz growled and ran upstairs. “ wait wiz!” daiki yelled. “Heh, this small creature is worthless.” krad smiled and chunked wiz against the wall. “ oh no krad!” emiko yelled. “ what the hell do you want here, demon!?” daiki said standing infront of his family. “ daiki.. The years have not been kind. I just heard that dark is coming.. But for him to come from a weak child like him.. That’ll only make dark weak!” daisuke looked up his eyes were purple. “Oh dark. He really must be coming out.” krad smiled and pulled out a black feather. “Wait what are you doing?” emiko cried. “ I can’t let that little fucker son of yours make dark weak.. I hate dark but I want to fight him with his full strength!” krad smiled and threw the feather inside of daisuke. “NO DAISUKE!” emiko yelled. Daisuke fell to the ground screaming. Krad looked around. “If he wants to find me go to satoshi hiwatari.” Dai looked up. “Hiwa.. Hiwatari?” krad flew off and everyone looked at daisuke. They all gasped.
“Dai..daisuke? are you ok?” emiko said. “ yea mom, I’m fine.. He didn’t do.. Anything?” daiki sighed. “ no dai.. He did something.. He did something all right.” “ what do you mean?” daisuke got up and his eyes widened. “ you..” daisuke said softly. “dark!” emiko said quietly. “Is this good..or bad?” daisuke gulped. “ we can’t do much.. Dark isn’t inside you like it’s suppose to be.” dark got up. “ well.. I can’t say I’m not disappointed.” dark sighed. Kyuu! “Wiz!” wiz jumped on dark and licked him. “What could hiwatari know about this?” dai wondered. “ daisuke niwa.. I suppose we need to talk.” dark grabbed daisuke and walked outside. “You know I’m not going to make you think krad is inside of satoshi. Just like I was inside you.” “ what!? So your saying hiwatari has a demon inside of him?” “ pretty much, yes.” dark looked up. “ well.. You seem to know hiwatari well. Friends?” daisuke looked away and blushed abit. “ oh I get it.. He’s your lover! How disgusting!” “ no! It’s not like that at all!!” daisuke screamed. “ I’m kidding! Daisuke.. geez can’t you take a joke?” daisuke pouted. “ so how do you know hiwatari.. A couple days ago I could hear you crying out for help.. A longing to get away from something.. Or someone?” daisuke got red and turned away quickly. “ it was nothing.. Dark!” “Hmm doesn’t seem like it was nothing, daisuke?” dark smirked. “ what are you trying to say?” “ nothing, kid just that maybe you like him.. That’s all I’m saying.” daisuke sighed. “ I don’t like hiwatari.. I like miss harada.” dark laughed a tiny bit and grabbed daisuke lightly. “ wait.. Wha.. Dark what are you doing?” he began blushing. “Dark stop!!” daisuke yelled. “ chill, dai.. I probably won’t do anything hiwatari hasn’t done.” daisuke looked down. “ dark I’m sorry but I’m not bisexual or gay!” “I know that..neither am I.. I prefer girls anytime trust me.” dark smiled and grabbed daisuke pulling him up. “ but you better be careful, daisuke I wouldn’t trust hiwatari so easily.” “ fine.. I’ll watch my back with him, ok.” daisuke nodded and went home. “ you moron.” satoshi growled and showed himself as daisuke left. “ you know I told him about krad.” “ yea well if I tell him I don’t know what he’s talking about he’ll believe me. Besides he hates you the moment his mother said you were in his body. So give it up dark.. I have wrapped between my fingers.” “ you clever bastard your using daisuke aren’t you?” “ now now, why would I do that!?” satoshi smiled, and began walking back. “ I’m sure I’ll see you soon.” “ damn..” dark sighed and walked into the house. “ so dark we’re enrolling you in dai’s school.” “ what!?!” daisuke shot up. “ I’m going to school!!?? I’m fucking over 300 yrs old!” dark yelled. “ yes but you act like a teenager.” emiko smiled and pinched dark’s cheeks.
Dark growled as he got out of the bus. “ damn this I can’t believe I’m going to school.” “ dark it’s not that bad.” daisuke smiled. “ niwa!!” daisuke turned around and smiled. “ miss harada.. Hey.” “ hey dai.. Who’s this?” risa said blushing abit. “ oh, this is my cousin, dark.” daisuke said laughing abit. “ what a hot cousin!” risa squealed. “ why your far to kind but I’m afraid I’m taken..miss harada.” riku came up and looked at risa. “ riku what’s wrong?” “ sis, dark, daisuke’s cousin is taken!!” risa began to cry abit. “ so what?” daisuke sighed and walked into the school. Dark was in the same room as daisuke, as luck may have it. “I can’t believe it.. Dark said he’s taken.. I envy the girl that goes with him.” risa sighed. “ yea I guess but I don’t want to go gaga for the guy.” riku smiled. The other girl’s wanted dark as well. “ say dark who’s your girl?” daisuke sighed. “Look at the mess you got yourself into dark.” He thought. “ uhh well you see.. It’s.. uhh DAISUKE!” dark yelled. Everyone turned to him. “ what!?!” dark smiled and put his arm around his shoulder. “ yea that’s right me and daisuke are lover’s.” “ehh!! but you two are cousins!!” risa yelled. “ that is true.. But see I’m only his cousin by marriage.. Not really blood related at all. My mother was married to his uncle. So yes we’re cousins but not really. Right dai?” dark looked at daisuke. “ what.. Uh, yea sure.. Whatever.” “ dai why didn’t you tell me you were abit.. Out there?” takeshi sighed. “ listen saehara I.. Just didn’t want our friendship to go down the drain because I was dating a guy.. And for him to be my cousin.” daisuke lied. “ wow.. Niwa... I knew you were strange but not this weird!” riku smiled. “ but don’t let it get you down.. It’s hot.” riku finished. Risa sighed. “ damn.. To think I can have dark.. But to know niwa took him... no fair!” daisuke smiled abit and when everyone left he looked at dark. “ what the hell!?!” “ I panicked, daisuke.” “ well you can panic with someone else!” “ are you breaking up with me?” “ eh, dark!!” “Right, sorry.. Ok. Let’s see.” dark looked around and whistled and wiz came. “ wiz!” daisuke smiled. “ ok, little buddy let’s do our job. Dai cover me.” dark said. Daisuke nodded and he screamed. “ what!?!” kids yelled. “ I saw a guy with a gun headed towards here everyone should go to the other side of the building!” daisuke yelled everyone ran. “ great.. Now you caused chaos for me.” dark smirked and wiz became his wings. “ well let’s go.. Krad should be around here!” “ alright.” daisuke nodded and grabbed dark’s hand. They both flew up in the sky and wiz growled abit. “ so.. He is here.. I thought so.” dark smiled. “ so what’s the plan anyway?” “ eh, um.. I don’t have a plan I’m just gonna wing it! I’ll think of something, I’m sure of it.”

all i got so far..
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