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Sunday, July 18, 2004


   Fan Fic: Transcendent Love Part 4



Disclaimer if this is your first time reading this fic I suggest you read parts 1&2 part 3 is optional however...yea I wrote it that way so depending on how you read it, it could be nice and juicy like a lemon or just a great story...without any well juice...if you know what I mean...ok so part 4




It had only been a month but Hiei and Ookumae had shared a love that some people take a lifetime to have...and others only dream of. Even though they were very much in love something was still bothering Hiei...every time he was not with Ookumae he felt a little pain in his heart...not only from missing her but *what was?* it he thought to himself...he figured it out... it was the he felt bad for not telling Ookumae who and what he really was. Hiei decided after a good amount of thinking, that it was not right for him to know everything about his new lover simply by reading her mind…and that she is left to wonder if what they had just done might be a mistake…since she only knew him for one day…So Hiei told Ookumae a bit more than she expected to hear….he told her of being a fighter…showed her some of his speed…then he told her…told her that he was really a demon from Spirit World and that he was a telepath. "A demon and an 'Angel', what are the odds." Ookumae was a bit startled but she loved him, now anyway. "So how do you, I mean, did you get into this world?" "Like I told you, if you don't know where you are going, you could pass it and never know.... you see Ookumae there is a gate that connects Spirit World to this one." "Hiei, does that mean that humans can go to Spirit World too?" "Yeah, I suppose, but I haven't heard of any such cases, not lately." "Hiei, take me to Spirit World would you? Everything is just so drab here, you have been the best person and thing that has ever happened to me, that has come into my life. I know your thrills will be close to none if you decide to stay here So take me with you to Spirit World." "Ookumae, you do understand how dangerous it would be if I took you there?" "Hiei I want to go, be away from this human world that does not and will not understand, you or even me, ever. Hiei, I know you can protect me from anything and if any harm may come your way I can heal you." "Ookumae, it‘s.... I mean, are you sure about this?" "Yes Hiei, take me in the morning." "I'll 'take' you now my dear sweet Ookumae." And he gave her an amazing bon voyage gift as he once again took her in his arms and slowly entered Ookumae, making her moan with pleasure every second that he was taken with her.

The next morning came sooner than imagined. Hiei awoke early and began to wake his lover, with kisses. "Come on now, if you want to go to Spirit World, we must leave soon." After making love for one more time in her home and showering together Hiei and Ookumae prepared to leave…he made sure that he had his katana handy in case anymore demons or guisters decided to be at the other side of the gate at the same time as they were arriving…Ookumae told her landlord that she had to make a move and soon not leaving a forwarding address just assuring him that she would never need to be back her again….a mere hour had passed and finally both Ookumae and Hiei were fully prepared to enter the gate.

Once in Spirit World, as Hiei thought, they were attacked though Hiei was fast and swift enough to defeat this demon in no time at all. Within the next few months Ookumae and Hiei's love blossomed in fact, they became an almost inseparable team. After many of Hiei's fights, Ookumae was always close by to heal him and make love with Hiei once again. Not too much longer Ookumae found out she was to have Hiei's child. Hiei to other demons became weak with this human around, he only cared that his lover and future child were safe. Hiei became a laughing stock to other demons, yet the powers that be were relieved that Hiei would not pose as a threat to them anymore.

One very black day a demon, that goes by the name of Risharu, took Ookumae and locked her in his underwater palace, He locked her in the tower of drowning, for when the tide was high anyone in the tower drowned to death, if they were wrapped up in weeds to keep them down. It didn't take but half a minute for Hiei to find out this distressing news, but there wasn't too much time until the high tide, and Hiei did not know where to go!

Risharu waited as Hiei arrived to the palace. Risharu wished it to be a fight to the death. Risharu gave Hiei the ultimatum of wither his life or Ookumae's and in a few minutes it might even be both. The tide was already starting to come in. Hiei tried to get by Risharu, yet was unsuccessful and was forced to fight. The water slowly started to surround Ookumae as she cried out "Hiei, please honey, come save me, that bastard tied me with weeds, I can't make it up by myself, Hiei save me, Hiei!!!!!!!" "Ah, so I'm a bastard now, Hiei try to save her, try to get past me, hahahaha, you'll never make it." Risharu laughed out. "Are you done, it's demons like you that give us a mild record." Hiei finally got past Risharu and to the tower, but it was too late, the tower had filled while they were fighting on top of the underwater palace. Hiei was too busy, trying to get by and destroy Risharu that he could not make it in time to save Ookumae. Hiei for the first time in his life cried, he cried for his lover and for his unborn child, he cried his heart out.

"You really have become weak by this woman, you are not worth the time anymore...crying for a human...be gone" Risharu said. Hiei wouldn't leave so quickly he tried to attack Risharu, even though his tears clouded his vision. Risharu wounded Hiei pretty severely and left Hiei to go. Hiei stayed there and waited for the tide to go down to at least give Ookumae a proper burial and hold her in his arms once more. As he waited his mind was filled with the memories of them together.

Ookumae had taught Hiei so much in the short time that they had been together…he even found himself more poetic than before…he recited a poem that Ookumae had taught him….that she wanted him to say if they were ever forced to be apart…

Even in the deepest nether regions of the world
I cannot help but think of you.
Of how you are doing…of where you are…I have lived a life time of three men
One waiting for you to arrive
Another brief life being with you
The last life, I live it now slowly dying in the unexpected winter of my years
Dying for I can no longer be close to you.
I wish things could have been different
I wish I could have been different
Everything we had just lingers on, in my memory now.
I count each day I am separated from you, and with each new day comes another scar upon my heart.
I wait until I can be with you again, although this life will not allow it.
I long to see your face, to kiss you, to feel all the wonder it is to be in love, again.
Reality will not allow us to be together again I fear, so what am I to do?
Be haunted by your ghost, let it hinder me from forming a bond with anyone else?
Help me love, tell my heart, for there we are never apart.
I may lose myself every now and again…but with you, we are an unstoppable two.
I will never forget you my dearest although you have been gone an age or so
I can still remember all the reasons why I fell in love with you.
Although I know that no one should be alone, especially in their winter;
I will never be alone because you are always with me in my heart and in my dreams
You were my dream come true
You took my hand in summer and took me away in autumn now that the seasons have changed again
As I write to you I realize now, that I do not have any regrets.
For I loved you with all my heart and soul, and what we had was rare…I love you
I’ve loved you since the beginning….and I will love you
I will love you forever and a year.





Ok that's all for now...I know that was the longest part that I've gotten to post...now...this is the big favor I have to ask...what do you think should happen...I have a few paths I can choose from this point but I want to know how you would handle it...please help...and thank you for reading my fic ^__^.


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