Wednesday, July 4, 2007

My story!!
These otaku members are in my story and there names in the story are in ().
Greedsdoll (Kimona)
Animelily (Suma)
Narutos Demon001 (Leiko)
LissyGirl22 (Teshina)
xAshxLoverx (Chizuru)
Me (Renée)

Now the story!!!

Chapter 1

A young girl, about 4, opened her eyes to see the warm sun glistening in through the broken windows. A small yawn came from here as she rubbed her eyes. ¡°Kimona! You¡¯re finally awake!¡± A girl about 10 or 11 said surprised. Another small, sweet, innocent yawn came from Kimona. She had golden eyes that shimmered in the sun; white hair that went to the middle of her back; and she wore a grey shirt so much bigger than her it could pass for a floor-length dress.
The other girl had sky blue eyes; burnt orange hair that went to her shoulder; and wore an old green shirt and ragged pants to small for her. Little Kimona stood up from the ground and took a blanket smaller then her and grasped it in her arms, ¡°Mamma,¡± she whispered, ¡°I hope you can hear me from up there. I miss you so much!¡± The girl took the blanket away from Kimona, ¡°this is a stupid baby blanket! We need to sell it or use it like firewood!¡± ¡°NOO!!¡± Kimona screamed. She grabbed her blanket back and ran to the pillow on the floor with two napkins. ¡°Leiko,¡± she cried, ¡°you ate all the crumbs! Even mine!¡± ¡°So!¡± Leiko sound harsh but inside she was feeling a heartbreak just as bad as Kimona¡¯s.
Outside the abandoned church, life when on living. People lined the streets buying, selling, haggling, and talking. One girl stood out of the crowed. She had high heels (peep-toes, black with white on the top and a black bow with a white outline); a jean skirt that stopped before her knees; a purple top (no sleeves or straps¡¦and not a tube top it covers the whole stomach); she had bright green eyes; and red hair that stops at her shoulder blade. She had a grey and white cat on her shoulder and she held a book with a purple book cover and a purple pen with purple ink. Kimona saw her and ran outside in her grey floor-length shirt. ¡°Renée! Renée!¡± Renée turned her head to the side, ¡°Kimona! How are you today! That¡¯s a new outfit I see. Very nice.¡± Kimona blushed and giggled, ¡°Thanks! Do you have any money for us!?¡± Leiko came up and slapped the back of Kimona¡¯s head, ¡°Shut up! You can¡¯t ask for money!¡± Renée laughed, ¡°it¡¯s fine! I guess it¡¯s a good thing I started selling books! Here ya go,¡± Renée handed Kimona $1,000 and she handed Leiko $2,000. ¡°Why does Leiko get more then me!?¡± Leiko looked at the money then at Renée, ¡°because I¡¯m older.¡±

Chapter 2

A girl with black hair that goes to her waist was riding a black bike. She had blue eyes and wore a school uniform. Her skirt was crimson and went to her knees and her shirt is a white longed sleeve school shirt with a crimson tie. She had her ears pierced from tip to bottom. She stopped at a Ramen Shop. She sat down at a small table for two but it was seated for one. A girl with short brown hair in a tattered apron went up to the girl, ¡°Hello my name is Suma I¡¯ll be your waitress for today. Can I start you off with-¡° Suma coughed as if she had inhaled to much smoke. But from what? Every place in town is smoke free. ¡°Sorry Miss,¡± Suma replied after her horrible cough, ¡°Can I start you off with a drink?¡± ¡°Yeah, I¡¯d like a water and I already know what food.¡± Suma grabbed her booklet and wrote down water, ¡°Okay what you¡¯d you like?¡± The girl took a toothpick and played with it, ¡°plain ramen.¡± ¡°Okay I¡¯ll be back with your food soon.¡± Minutes pass and no sign of the food. The girl at the table gets up and finds some random waiter, ¡°Hey can I speak with the manager!?¡± The man looked at her and nodded ¡°yes¡±.
A short hall led to the managers office. She opened the door and it squeaked. ¡°What?¡± A man in a big brown chair asked not even looking that the door. ¡°Hi, I¡¯d like to complain about a waitress.¡± The man turned the chair when he heard ¡°complain¡±, ¡°Yes, who?¡± The girl stood there, ¡°She said her name was Suma. I ordered food and it has been 30 minutes.¡± ¡°Suma¡¦¡± the man stopped, ¡°oh yeah¡¦see, we found her body outside. I guess she took your order and then she took the trash out. We don¡¯t know what happened, I mean she was breathing when we found her but she was knocked out and her apron was torn off and so where her pants. Gross and scary I know.¡± ¡°Oh,¡± the girl was freaked out but she stayed calm, then her phone went off, ¡°oh sorry I got a text from a friend. I have to go.¡±
The girl went outside and got on her bike; she took out her phone and dialed. RING! RING! RIN-¡°Hello?¡±
¡°Hey Renée! So why did you text?¡±
¡°Oh hey Chizuru! I text to ask if you heard about the girl that got raped at the Ramen Shop?¡±
¡°Yeah, that girl was my waitress. I got mad that I had been sitting there for 30 minutes and went to the manager and he told me what happened. Scary huh?¡±
¡°Totally! Hey do you wanna come over to my house tonight?¡±
¡°I don¡¯t know where you live cuz¡¯ you moved!¡±
¡°Yeah well, I¡¯ll text it to you. You¡¯ll love my house! An indoor water park, an outdoor pool, bowling alley, my own movie theater!¡±
¡°¡¦can I live with you!?¡±
¡°Anytime you want! I¡¯m texting my address to you know.¡±
¡°Okay. Oh got it!¡±
¡°Kay, so I¡¯ll see you here at¡¦.um¡¦.7?¡±
¡°Can¡¯t to busy. I can make it at 8.¡±
¡°Okay! See you at 8! Bye¡±
¡°Jaa ne!¡±

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