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Monday, February 18, 2008
Orphanage
This is a story I wrote. It's only one chapter but here are the characters in it/who they are in my friends.
Cookie- me
Carmel- Narutos Demon001
Pie- she doesn't have an account...
Chocolate- hatakexkakashi
Cherry- Greedsdoll
Now the introduction and chapter one
Introduction
Being an orphan is hard. Especially if your stuck around people that don’t know how old you are and don’t even call you by your name. Cookie, a young girl going from orphan home to orphan home has found a spot she can’t leave and the owners are mean people that don’t care one thing or another about the orphans there. Will she make any friends to help her? Will she be able to escape this horrible place?
Chapter 1
Cookie got out of the navy blue car and looked up at the tall building. This is the orphanage? She thought to herself. She shrugged and pulled herself inside. The floor was cobble stone and the walls where brick. “This is a sad, stressful place to be.” She heard a voice bigger then hers but filled with sorrow and no life. She turned around to see a girl standing behind the door. The girl had thick brown hair and green eyes.
Cookie looked around, “do you know where room 208 is?”
The girl nodded, “yep. Won’t tell you but I know where. You’re stuck with Carmel, she’s crazy so be prepared.” She started walking up the stairs, “by the way, my name’s Cherry and this is my orphanage. I was born here and I rule this place.” Cookie looked around again and followed up the stairs miles behind Cherry. She stopped when she got to room 208. The door was slightly open, so she opened it the rest of the way.
“GO AWAY!” A girl screamed at the top of her lungs and she started jumping around the room.
“My name is Cookie, and I was assigned to this room.”
“Oh,” the girl said getting so close to Cookie’s face she almost fainted. “My name is Carmel and this is my room. You can have that corner. I’ve been here for 2 years now and I’ve had my own room and you ain’t taken it from me.”
Cookie kind of backed up but then went over to the corner she was told to stay in. “How old are you?” She asked Carmel. Carmel looked at her and held up both hands all fingers stretched out. “I’m nine.” Carmel rolled her eyes and sat on her bed. A girl walked by the room but then went back and stood in the doorway, smiling at Cookie.
She started walking in the room, “hey Pie get out of my room!” Pie shook her head and kept walking towards Cookie, she reached out her hand, “my name is Pie. Let me show you around.”
There. Tell me what you honestly think! By honestly I mean if you didn't like it tell me and tell me why. I don't want you to lie because that would hurt me more then if you told me the truth
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