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Sunday, January 8, 2006
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hey everyone! okay so i'm gonna post the third chapy today cause i might not be on here for a while, my brother has his moment's when he needs "alone" time with his beloved computer! ha ha! but yeah, before i do that I just wanna ask everyone how there weekend went and all, i got a bunch of stupid chain letter's that just went to my delete box, i'm supposivley supposed to die twice, be unloved for 10 years and fall down a dark hole 8 times... oh well anyone wanna join me? lol! well here it is before i get carried away!
Hazzark of Haven
Chapter 3: Banished
Hazz waited outside a large oak door that was inside of a very fancy marble court house. It was a rather elegant building. Standing at least 100 feet tall, every pillar was precise down to the last marking and etched in wing. The marble looked almost florescent against the orange sky. Hazz had been awake all night, his sentencing was to be decided in the morning, but at the break of dawn, so Hazz did not venture to his sleep quarters. He rested his wings on the stone wall, his body pressed against their feathery softness.
The tall oak doors opened illuminating the long narrow hallway. Hazz stepped backward and blinked away the stinging tears from the light.
“Enter” said a stern voice from the misty light.
Hazz nervously picked up his feet and entered the room. It wasn’t too big; it had very high ceilings and curved walls. It resembled more of a demented balloon than a court room. The Elders sat up on a high ledge with the counsel members to there left and right. Plazare, Hazz’s only parental guardian, sat to the left of a brittle looking man. Plazare was the one who had come across Hazz and there for had been deemed his guardian. To the left of the brittle old man was an old women who tool on the same fragile appearance.
Hazz walked up the slim walk way toward a large chair in the center of the room. Hazz crossed his wings behind him and sat down politely, staring up at all the high officers before him.
“Now that the accused has entered let us begin.” The old man in the center said in a flat tone voice. “Hazzark of Haven you stand before us today, as a free angel.” He added in the same flat tone he used before.
“Uhhh…” Hazz uttered more to himself than to the jury.
“Would you mind telling us what you were doing in the land of Kareshi? We have warned you once before not to travel to such an evil land.” He said down to Hazz. His brow furled as he squinted down at him.
“I ….I…was just trying to figure out why the land is forbidden…” Hazz whispered looking the Elder in the eyes, not dare to move or it mite show a sign of weakness.
“I fear that you have pulled you last string loose, my dear boy. I don’t think you will be permitted to reside in this bountiful city.” He ended resting against his own chair. His wings crinkled behind him, they weren’t as white as Hazz’s, but they were still very marvelous.
“What do you mean…. Not reside here anymore….?” Hazz said sitting up strait and looking for a face of friendliness.
“You are to be banished, Hazzark of Haven.” The Prim Elder said calmly.
“You….Y-You can’t do that!” Hazz shouted up at him. “I didn’t even do anything wrong. So what I went to the forbidden land! It’s not like I’m evil now!” Hazz added loosing his temper.
“He does have a point Prim Elder Sir.” Plazare said to the old man, and then looked down at Hazz with worried eyes.
“We have a whiteness to prove that what Hazz did was indeed beyond Haven’s control.” The Elder looked at Plazare angrily, then added, “Bring her in!”
The doors to the room shook and in came a small angel girl with yellow curls and dull blue eyes. She stared at the ground not daring to look at anyone.
“Jeminya, thank you for contributing to this very serious case.” The old women spoke for the first time, her voice was soothing and kind. It gave Hazz shivers even though it was the friendliest thing he had heard so far. Jem gave a small smile and sat next to Hazz looking at her feet very intently.
“Miss. Jeminya, is it true that you were with Hazz when you two ventured to the forbidden land?” the middle Elder asked.
“Yes.” Jem replied frightened.
“And is it also true that he destroyed the house of memorial?”
“What….yes he did…but”
“As I was saying, Hazz has falling guilty to the crime of reducing the house of memorial to rubble, his sentence shall be-" The Elder was cut off by a squeaky voice from next to Hazz.
“But he didn’t mean to do it Elder!! The door wouldn’t let him go!! It wasn’t his fault!”
“Silence Miss. Jiminya!” The Elder yelled at once, Jem fell silent, “Hazz, you have been proven guilty, and are sentenced to banishment…”
“Prim Elder, don’t you think that is a bit harsh on the boy.” Plazare said in a cheery voice.
“Plazare, as his guardian you have connected to him, but, I do suppose for a boy as he, I could consider changing the punishment.”
“You are most gracious Prim Elder.” Plazare said giving a triumphant glare over to Hazz.
After a few minutes of whispering and jittering, the Old Elder spook out, “Hazzark of Haven your sentence shall be….”(SUSPENCE!!)”…..Banishment to Earth!”
Gasps and whispering filled the court room again, Hazz looked stunned for a little bit but then the Elders last words hit him like a brick.
“Elder….I….Elder…” Hazz’s words were all jumbled together.
“My decision is final, this meeting is over.” The old man hit a mallet on a wooden plate and every body stared at Hazz.
Golden lights started to circle his lower body, they twisted up around to his mid drift, wrapping around his wings. “What the hell..” Hazz said as his wings began to shrink into his back. He screamed in agony as they where forced into him, Hazz fell to his knee’s The Golden crystals ran up to his head, his pointed ears shrunk into human ears and his clothes changed.
“Hazz….I’m sorry…”Jem whispered as he staggered up from the floor. He gave her one last glare before falling through the court room floor. (A/n: I suppose it can only hold Angels…^ ^ woops)
He fell through all the fluffy clouds he once roamed, even though the sun was rising from the hill, it seemed so dark out.
“AHHHH!! S-H-I-T!!!” Hazz yelled as he drew nearer to the ground. “WAHHHHH!” He flung his hand in front of his face as he has sent crashing into a bunch of garbage cans. (A/n: …what he didn’t die?? Hazz:What'd you say!! Me: nothing! Hides behind building)
“At least the Elders had the decency to not try and KILL ME!!!” he shook a fist up at the sky. “Why Earth?? Why!!! Earth!!?!?” Hazz sighed and picked him self up from the heap of trash. “What the hell am I supposed to do now?” He leaned against a building wall and closed his eyes.
okay so it's sbout as long as the last chapter and thanks ElvesAteMyRamen for commenting on it and saying such nice things about it! It means alot!! thanks thanks! i'll post as soon as i can get back!!! ^_^
I wish I knew japanese!
_-_-kate
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