Monday, July 19, 2004

   Hello! hello!
Well, I guess, since I have the time browsing the net I would drop by here for a while. Well my week have been very good eventhough there is bad things that also happen but like the local proverb said "Ambil yang jernih, buang yang keruh" which means "Take the calm, throw the chaos (direct translation, sorry -_-)-just take the good thing and throw away all those baddy baddy thingie! Yeah!"

I composed this one on word so I think it would be a very long one but since I thinks I don't write the story everyday and yep, I don't come here that much often now I guess its all fair. So here again the storie!



Eve Of The Eternals
Part 17: Special Skills

Gelweintall was not his usual self and kept quiet for many days. Still, Gelweintall did not stop giving training to the soldier. Vinedia did not talk to him for a while fearing that she would say something that would hurt his heart. “Felimor said it’s better for me to let Gelweintall like that for a while so that he would have time to calm down” Vinedia thinks to herself. Then she remembered about that Miene girl and her brother Galcalivern. She decided to see the training ground where Miene was training. There, a war game was held on the training ground where the soldier pretends that they are fighting in real war. When Vinedia arrives at the location she saw that the game had already begun. The war game consists of two teams, one wears a red scarf and other wears blue and the team who manages to defeat al of the people of the opposing teams win. Miene who was wearing a blue scarf is really fighting very well, running with her spear she easily knocks 5 people down and quickly retreat back into her team so that she would not run so far ahead of her team members. Vinedia could heard the other teams shouting to their comrade to focus on Miene seeing her as the one giving the most threat to the red team. “Hey hey, I know I’m cute guys but no need to be so agitated because of that ^_^.” Miene teasing the other team.

“Cute? Annoying more like it!” All of our strong fighter charge and surround her! The others focus on the other enemy soldier we have more strong fighters than the blue team.” Commanded the red team leader. Miene decided to separate from her team. “Hey Miene where are you going! You are to far out from your allies!” shouted her team leader. “Don’t worry captain let me handle this one, you just focus on fighting the grunts since your ability is nearly as good as their I sure you can handle those guys.” Tears started flowing from the blue team leader eyes “I think she just said that I’m the same as the grunts…”
Fifteen people that were considered the strongest people of the team including the red team leader surrounded Miene. “Charge! Beat her so that she will no longer annoy us!” commanded the red team leader. The soldiers charged towards Miene while Miene just stand still on her position. “I will show you guys something interesting and I hope this would make a good lesson to mess with me” she said smiling. After finished with her sentence Miene quickly jump backwards, hold her spear horizontally then charged. “Special skill spear rush” she then rammed into the red teams making the fifteen soldiers falling on their back. Then she jumped “Disaster Break, Viemphor spear technique! Sky Scream!” With a very weird shrieking sound coming out from her spear, she made a spear thrust and hit the ground where the strong forces from the impact breaks the ground into tiny pieces which fly all over. The quickly she made a spear charge to her enemies the fifteen red team soldier and defeating them all including the leader.

The crowd was astonished by the act that Miene pulled including the trainer and also the Queen herself.” That was a special skill just now! Even we could not do that kind of feat!” shouted one of her trainer. Then Miene saw Vinedia who was still shocked and quickly run to her leaving the training ground. “Heey, Queen Raynear! I’m so happy to see you here.” “Hi Miene, what was that move that you just made just now.” Vinedia asked Miene. “Eh, I’m surprised your highness doesn’t know of it. That was called a special skill, an action that generates high amount and destructive damage to the enemies. Actually everybody could learn it but to initiate the skill needs lots of training where some people decide not to learn it because the complexity and time taken to master it.” When Miene mentioned about the special skill Raynear remembered Cineaval teachings…

5 years ago….
Vinedia was playing with Cineaval and Elsia at the field they used to play. “Now its time for war training!” Cineaval shouted. “Yay, war lesson time!” shouted Elsia. “So, leader what are going to teach us today?” Vinedia asked. Cineaval takes out his gigantic sword looked at it for a while and swings the sword “I will teach you this today.” Elsia and Vinedia saw the grasses that was cut by Cineaval then burned. “Wow, amazing leader! How did you do that?” Vinedia looks interested. “Well elementary, my dear Vinedia.” He said smiling then continued “This world consist of natural elements that are everywhere around us, like the air for us to breath there is also another important element could not be seen but this one provides energy which we call the ‘Mana’. When people are able to utilize the power of mana to perform special actions which we call magic.” Then he saw Elsia is standing up and starting to perform something. Then Cineaval started to sweat. “Burn!” shouted Elsia. Cineaval body was engulfed in flames and then the flame quickly disappeared. Cineaval body was turned black because of the flame attack. “Are you trying to kill me!” shouted the now furious Cineaval. “Haha! Leader is all black now! See Vinedia that was magic.” Elsia, smiling while pointing to Cineaval the ‘experiment’ guy.
Vinedia laughed looking at Cineaval.

Cineaval doesn’t care with his burned condition continues the lesson. “There are two type of magic, the natural magic and the skill magic. Natural magic is where people make use of the natural elements and controls them to perform any action that the user desires, this is also known as pure magic which Elsia just show you a good example *shows tongue to Elsia*. Another one is to power up the equipment such as weapon to perform special movement which usually ends up with destructive result, this one is a combination with the user skill and doesn’t use a lot of mana and called a special skill like the one that I did before.” Cineaval puts back the sword into the sheath.

Then he smiled and looks at the sky “Well I’m still at beginners level and I’m focusing on mastering the special skill. And so that finishes our lesson for today. Lets go to my place to eat!” “Yes leader!” Vinedia and Elsia shouted and together they run back to the city of Velzen….


“….Cineaval, Elsia.….”

“Queen Raynear! Lets go eat together ok!” Miene shouted. “Huh, oh Miene..” Vinedia realized from her nostalgic memories. “What’s wrong with you, you just suddenly went quiet and not focusing on what I said.” Miene making angry face. “Ah, its nothing its just that I suddenly remembered my old friends….Well let us go and eat. Oh, and another thing.. could you teach me those special skills.” “Well I would want to teach you but I think that old man behind you is going to teach you.” Points at the two figures behind Vinedia. “Don’t call me old man you little pest!” Shouted Gelweintall. Felimor just laughed and Miene as usual making faces to Gelweintall. “Gelweintall, Felimor! So, Gelweintall are you sure you are going to teach me on special skill?” Vinedia seemed concerned since Gelweintall was seems sad about his country for quite a while. “Hey there, I’m a great general and you expect me to be weakened by that silly thing! If we stay strong surely we will be able to take back Leintein from Calcaem empire hands! Training you is far more important my queen.” The queen was happy that Gelweintall is back to his usual self. Then Gelweintall continued “Besides, we are now comrades right?” “Friends are more better!” Miene shouted. “Yes, we are friends…” smiled Vinedia. “Let us all go to eat now shall we?” Felimor interrupted. “Yes let’s go.” Replied Vinedia.

“Cineaval, Elsia now I have new friends that I can put may trust on and I’m so happy. Take care you two….”

Well that is all for the story. And guess what. I got 1000 hits! heh ^_^. Well I'm feeling happy not because I got 1000 hits, its because you guys always supporting me and always keeps me company.! Thank you for always supporting me. You know who you are! Terima Kasih!

As for appreciation here is something for you guys... Well its not coloured. Well maybe on the 5000 hits I will colour this one.. I guess... heh ^_^.

Queen Vinedia Raynear entertaining the soldiers and her friends by playing the harp. She's such a nice queen *smiles*

Time for me to go! *runs away*


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