Saturday, January 15, 2005

   Well.........
I guess people already know with the incidents that happened last year. Never expect the tsunami would reach the Malaysian beach this is the first to happen. Lucky for me we do not live near the beach area but accidents can happen anywhere... I feel pity to people who lost their family in the incident.

Let’s not go more into that ok….

Hmmm, the reason I didn't write anything here is because I didn't paid my internet bill so that's why I couldn't connect to the internet. Sorry if I keep anybody worried. Heh.

Mm... I guess we continue with the story

Eve of The Eternals
Chapter 22: Misunderstanding

Felimor and Miene encountered a ronin from the country of Ivaseal named Kataryu. Somehow Kataryu think what the Elvennia army is doing in the city of Hillew is wrong. With the intention from letting the Elvennian starting a war she attacked the soldier with the intention that the army would change their mind. Felimor and Miene doesn't agree with what Kataryu are doing so they fought against her.

The night in the city filled with the sounds of swords and spears clashing. The three have been fighting for quite a while . "Huff..huff, I think we have fought for hours and still she have the strenght to resist both of us. Hey Felimor what actually is a Ronin?" asked Miene who already looking tired.

"They are excellent warrior called Samurai who no longer have a master." Felimor explained briefly. "Whaat.. that's all?" Miene seems unsatisfied with Felimor's reply. A slash coming towards Miene and quickly she defend herself with the spear. "You still have time to talk, concentrate on the fighting!" Kataryu pushed her Katana towards Miene. Miene kicked Kataryu in the stomach which Kataryu jumped back in pain, with lightning speed Miene changed into her short bow and fired multiple arrows. "Take this! Arrow storm!" Miene hands moving fast firing 5 arrows in one shot repeatedly towards Kataryu.

Kataryu manage to evade and deflect the arrows using her double Katana. After the arrow attacks ended Miene quickly equip back her spear and initiate a jump and perform the Viemphor earth smasher towards Kataryu. Knowing an attack coming from the sky Kataryu perform a spin holding her two katana horizantally and make a quick upward slash to counter the attack.


Miene was pushed back by the defense which is quickly supported by Felimor who appeared behind Kataryu and launched multiple strike towards her. The two katana crossed with the daggers, then both of them jumped back and maintain their stance."Somehow after a while fighting you, your style seems familiar.."Kataryu looking at Felimor and from the expression she seems wanted explaination on it. "Well seems you quite attentive to my fighting style. I have to admit it I did learn the way of spying from the east where you come from. The art of shadow assassin or the ninjitsu as I would call so its no surprise if you find it familiar." Kataryu seems quite surprised and impresed by the same hearing the information.

“Interesting...Do you know why I don’t like having you and your army here?” Kataryu continues with her question. “Yeah, that brings me the question? Why are you so worked up on the Elvennia army and you are not even the resident of Hillew?” Miene positioned herself near Felimor and hold her spear ready for any oncoming attack from Kataryu. Kataryu sighed, then continues “Because I don’t want people to experience what had happened to me, I lost my country and my good friend because our town is attacked by outsiders and I don’t want you to do these to the people of Calcaem.” Upon hearing this Felimor started to laugh, Miene and Kataryu were surprised at his behavior. “That is funny, you are teaching me, who lost his fiancé and town from the Calcaem and you want to stop it from happenning? It’s already happening here, it’s the reason why the Elvennia soldiers are here to free the country under Calcaem control and also to free my town and meet with my love again.”

“Whaaaat! What! What! What! You’re already engaged? I thought nobody would actually wants to marry you.” Miene was very surprised upon hearing that Felimor have a fiancé in his hometown. “Hey that doesn’t sound even one bit nice.” Felimor shakes his head hearing Miene’s comment. Kataryu who was quiet for a while then smiled “I guess I was wrong. I made my own judgment towards you people. Please, forgive me for the misunderstanding, I have fought with the wrong people.” Felimor was happy that Kataryu realized her mistake but Miene still seems unhappy with it. “What! After all you did to the soldier you expect us to forgive you? If it were simple to solve problem with apology then there would be no need for war! Let me slap you a couple of time and then apologize if it is so simple to apologize! Come on let’s mmphhmphhhhhh!” Felimor quickly covers Miene mouth with his hand. “I’m sorry for her rude behavior, she’s always like this.”


“Hmm, I guess I should do something to make up to my mistake. How about I offer you my service in the Elvennia army. As you have seen I’m quite a good fighter and this might also help me in finding my friend.” Felimor who is still covering Miene mouth was very pleased upon hearing this while Miene is struggling to let herself free from Felimor’s hand. “That is very good. The queen would be happy if she hears about this. If you don’t mind would you come with us to meet the queen.” Felimor then let go of Miene letting her continue with her complaints and guided Kataryu to the camp.

Ok now, I have a question do you like my story with illustration or without illustration?

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