Sunday, March 7, 2004

   Refreshed!!
Okay! Now I'm already up and after having a good nice bath I'm feeling more refreshed!! While today, my art pen good broken and damaged my drawings!! Oh not good! Not good! Two bad things happened at once... must be bad omen (well.. I'm not that superstitious...) but it's really sad too see your work got destroyed... and sadly you are the one who destroyed your own work... No matter! this is one of the challenge of becoming a comic artist! (I think...) I just need to get new pen and start all over again...

Now that I have the free time (well.. plenty of time that is, might as well continue with the story,) Ok here goes...

Eve of The Eternals
Part 7:The Leader

Well now we are back to the story. Ahh, nice day today and I'm feeling good today and I hope you all feels the same too. Now follow me into the city of Velzen and continue with the story of Queen Vinedia Raynear.(She does not have any relation whatsoever with me and I'm not promoting myself ok!*walks away*)

Vinedia walks around the city, does not know what to do and ended up walking in circles in the city. She came into the Velzen city to learn about the art of war but she does not know whee to start. She could not just walks into the castle and say "Hi! I am Queen Vinedia from Elvennia and I come here to learn your war tactics and aquire the technology your kingdom have!". She might be thrown to prison if she use that approach. Vinedia have to think of something to learn the war tactics and strategy to counter the coming invasion to her kingdom.

Vinedia was standing thinking when a teenager around the age of 14 who was running bumped into her."Oh my, my apologies dear woman. I was such in a rush I didn't notice you.." The boy bows politely to Vinedia and walks away but seemed to be surprised when he heards that someone is calling him and quickly runs away."Leader! wait for me!". Vinedia could see a girl around the age of 12 is following him. The girl stopped in front of Vinedia and sitting down,out of breath. "Well, trying to run away from me again..huff..huff.."

Then the girl looked at Vinedia. She observed her for a while and smiled."Hi, I'm Elsia, Elsia Reapenwei' from the house of Reapenwei'!"."Vinedia Raynear, nice to meet you." Vinedia introduced herself. "Are you an adventurer?" ask Elsia who seems to develop interests to Vinedia. Vinedia nodded and Elsia started to ask a lot of questions to Vinedia about her adventure. Vinedia talked and tells her adventure starting from the city of Hillew until she came into Velzen. She did not tell her actual origin to keep her identity safe. Elsia was so happy with Vinedia's story and offered herself to be Vinedia's personal tour guide.

And so Vinedia and Elsia walked around the city. During the tour Vinedia asked Elsia about the boy she bumped with earlier. "Oh that boy, he's my friend. He is a son of someone important in the army. I like him very much because he is so kind and intelligent."."Why did he run away from you when you called him? He sems to be scared of you." Elsia smiled when Vinedia ask the question."Oh, there was an accident, I was looking for him to play with and he was having bath at that time. I entered his bathroom to ask him what game he wants to play and I saw him naked!" she bursts into laughter and continued "Leader was funny. His face turned red and he screamed like a cat!".

Then they could hear a shouting from behind "I didn't scream! I yelled to you to get out!". Then a the boy which Vinedia met ealier comes out from his hiding. "You sounded like a cat to me.. you stalker" Elsia makes face to him. "No I'm not and I'm not a stalker!"."Then why were you following us then?" asked Elsia. "I..err..umm...I was scouting the city for enemies.. yes that's it scouting for enemies!". The two quarelled for a while and when both are tired they sat down out of breath."Excuse me, but may I now your name?" Vinedia ask the boy. "Cieneval Barrington from the house of Barringtons, but my friend usually call me leader.""Yep, leader. Future commander of Velzen!" shouted Elsia."Shhhhh Reapenwei'! Its a secret!"

Vinedia then noticed that the boy is carrying a bigger sword that is bigger than normal sword. Surely this boy is not just a normal teenager, Vinedia thinked. Vinedia then asked Cieneval for more detail regarding his background and found out that his father is the commander of the Velzen army. Vinedia sees this as an oppurtunity to learn something about war tactics and strategy if she could meet Cieneval's father. "Hey, lets be friends ."."Hey I like that, let her be our friend then we can play together!"shouted Elsia."Couldn't you say something in a more softer voice. Very well you can be our friend but you need to call me leader. How about it?". Says Cieneval proudly. "Not a problem leader!" shouted Vinedia. "Yesw leader! Leader!" shouted Elsia. "Hey not so loud! Let's go to my house, we discuss what we need to do today."

Vinedia smiled. Her plan to learn the art of war is one step closer.

Well thats all for today.... it's not that exiciting today(sorry) but its part of the story. Well got to go now! Runs away to the kitchen....sooo hungry! ^_*
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