Wednesday, May 26, 2004

   Finally!
Oh well the test went quite well, I think. Thanks for wishing me luck guys, its very sweet and thoughtful of you. Right now since the test is over, I am now preparing to enter a comic competition, still don't have the idea yet, but now let me continue with the story of mine.



Eve of The Eternals
Part 15:The Awakening

Because of her army silly actions, Vinedia who wanted to use a more softer approach to get the ship at the Calcaem Empire secret ship port are now forced to use a more aggresive approach.
"Strategy" Says Vinedia looking at Gelweintall.
"Charge and strike" Answered Gelweintall.
"Other than that?" Vinedia asks again.
"Er...charge and strike?"
"That's it, I'll think for myself!" Vinedia decided to plan the tactics since Gelweintall could not think of a better strategy.

She looked at the surrounding terrain and saw that he troops are in a n advantageous position which is on the hill while the Calcaem troops lies below the hill which leading them to the port. She sees that Gelweintall was right as the only kind of approach that they can use is only charging attack as he troops only consist of horsemen.

After a while of thinking she decided to initiate her tactics.
"Break into three groups each of 100 mens!" Vinedia starts he command.
She separated her groups into three which she decided to be the left flank, the right flank and the middle strike. She told the right flank and the left flank to take their position leaving an empty space between them. Then she tells them to move at a fast speed but do not charge at the enemiies until they are told so and when she told them to stop they have to stop their movements.

She commanded that the right flank and the left flank to start moving while the middle strike group follow them from behind but at a far distance.
"The odds are 300 against 500 looking at the number gathered down below." Said Gelweintall who is very experienced in guessing the enemies numbers.
"We will go for a quick charge attack and go straight to the ship, which is the largest one. The main goal here is to create chaos among their ranks and break through the enemies defenses.

The right flank and the left flank are aleady going down the hill and now the Calcaem soldier are pepared to engage them. The enemy soldiers who think that only the two groups that they will be facing decided the engage Vinedia's right flank and left flank and left their middle. The enemies have to spread out in doing this and left their defense on the middle area unguarded.

Sensing chance Vinedia gave charging command for the middle strike and commanded the left and the right flank to stop. The Calcaem troops that are on their way to engage the enemies was surprised at the sudden stop of the horses but still decided to move on as they are already getting near to Vinedia's two groups. Then suddenly another groups which was going at a fast speed appeared between the two groups and at the same time the left and right flank also initiated a charge attack under Vinedia orders.

The Calcaem troops was in confusion whethe they regroup or go on engaging the enemies. But with the appearance of the middle strike team they were unable to regroup and left their side defense unguarded which ended them in confusion and chaos among the ranks. Vinedia's troops managed to break through the enemies defenses and went straight to the ship.

Unfortunately fo Vinedia she fell off he horse when she was going down the hill and got left behind by her soldiers. She managed to get on her horse but the enemies now recovering from the attacks decided to surround her knowing she is the leader. Gelweintall who saw that Vinedia was left behind hope that she would turn arround and escape by going back up the hill. But to his horror Vinedia rode her horse towards the enemies. "Silly girl! You will die!" shouted his heart.

"I have no time to waste, my Beloved kingdom Elvennia needs me and for that I will not be afraid and will go through the enemies for the sake of Elvennia!" Vinedia still determined to break through the enemies defenses. Then she heard a voice inside her mind. "Is is now the time... the time for the awakening of a champion and of a new era...Awaken Queen Vinedia Raynear and bring hope for the beggining od a new era..The era of the Eternals..Awaken the one who possess the power of the Sea, the existence of life!"

After the voice have finished, shining blue light appeared from Vinedia's body and he blue eyes starting to glow showing the images of the sea.
"This is the beginning of the eve of the eternals!" shouted Vinedia and raised her hands. "In the name of the sea where water will always exist, I command the waves to spread my enemies away! Violent Waves!" Water could be seeing coming outside from her body forming a large sphere of water and the sphere burst out which the impact of it pushed the Calcaem toops falling back at a far distance. Quickly Vinedia rides her horse towards the ship and quicly oredered her mens to raise to sail and the ship towards the south island continent. All of he soldiers especially Gelweintall was astonished by her powers and started to see her more than a queen and told her they were very lucky to meet her and would be proud to fight alongside he until death.

Vinedia was very touched by his soldiers loyalty but now it seems he task is now is more than only to save Elvennia. But now, looking at the sunset, the only thing in her mind is going home to her beloved kingdom."Finally, I'm going home." She said smiling.

So that is all for today which is quite long since I have to combine two stories into one. Oh well at least I manage to finish writing it today. So until next time its bye for naw! "runs away"




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