Thursday, March 23, 2006

what do you think so far?
oh and here's another one...

Talon: Raven Black hair, violet eyes, tan complexion, Mona Lisa smile, impish gleam in her eyes, black or dark clothing with a flowing dark violet jacket or transparent material. A deep red form fitting vest and black jeans, a black leather metal studded belt, and confident smile. Hair is cut boyishly long but is kept in a wild style. personality: fun loving, smart cracking, adventure craving girl that loves to play with things and ideas that she doesn't know about.

Talon plummets through a deep blue and violet sky of sunset. There are a few clouds in the sky. She passes through one after another flipping away to the next cloud or just plain jumping them. Winds and jetstreams carry her farther either up or down or even across. Her signature double blades flash through the air propelling her further into the sky's depths and heights. Cartwheels, backflips, side swipes, done with thrill and speed in the unending air. Finally Talon takes control of the air surrounding her and steadies herself. A Green insignia appears on her forehead....Talon has mastered the element of wind....with four more to go fire, earth, water, and spirit.

"Heh but first some more Flying!!!"Talon shoots upwards towards the edge of the planet's atomosphere. Whirling green spirit energy of five strands spins and circles around her creating a stardust green trail behind her. "Whooooooo!!!!"

The earth all around no sight, no sound, then it EXPLODES!!! Talon comes up and out of the earth! Whirling this time in shades of brown and black with her black blades at her side. flashes of moment is all you see Talon seeming to reappear and disappear by the far tree then the one next to you. BOMB more earth erupts skyward again she appears here and there. Contol....control....you must gain control!! Talon stills deep within the earth her heart racing is her only beat! UPWARD!!!!! The earth shakes, it rumbles, and then it starts to roll....rolling hills, mountains, plains, and canyons....they all move like a brown and green ocean. Muster....Talon's brows furrow...the brown light of earth pulls toward her in shards of crystaline light. Faster, Bigger, Brighter!!! the light pulls into her. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!" Talon tilts her head back and screams with the force inside her....brown light disperses from her in a sphere! Silence.......a bird chirps.....everything is as it was before. A yellow emblem is embedded on to her chest.


Fire, flames surround! Talon is in the midst of this inferno deep in the depths of this earth....Fire hot enough to burn her soul engulfs her. She pulls it in to herself until she beings to warm like a minature sun she holds herself close. Sweat beads her body yet steams in seconds when it touches the flame flying into her. Hot......hot......HOT!!!!! "FREE ME!!!!" Talon shouts into the depths of the Earth's core...the fire comes all the more....subduing her. Into a heated abyss within herself she falls fire burning core of her soul...her eyes reflect the dead heat. *Release!!!!!!!!* the fire within strike out of her body and soul as lighting strikes the earth above a thousands times! Then in quite of the core the red symbol appears on her hands....her eyes still reflect the heat that once was inside.

Water moves through Talon as she sits at the bottom of the ocean inside the earth's deepest pit. Water and darkness surrounds her as she breathes through the precious air bubbles inside mouth and nose. Talon opens her eyes and sees nothing forgetting where she is she release the percious bubbles from herself. immediately she can't breathe...Talon thrusts upwards in an attempt to find the surface and get out into the air above...She feels the water and darkness press closer...choking her. Talon struggles as though with the entity of water and being itself. Her conciousness dims....her body slows....her heart beat becomes inaudiable. She drifts....upward not knowing where she is head now....dimmer....dimmer does her become. A streak! A light! A Will to fight awakens in her and she stablizes her thoughts! She summons the percious air to her and the fire to warm her body along with the earth to ground her. She pulses her energy into the dark water...it revibrates sending with it her power...the power of water and spirit! the water markings covers her abdomen, the spirit signs place themselves on her ears and throat. "Complete......complete"

(sorry a bit long this one.)
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